Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

minam · 2016-07-09 16:11:51

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Team name: Sensei's Supercute Sunshine Sensation
Members: Sensei1
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWlnFPQFIlcEI

Art: 8/10 It's not that bad actually. It's pretty good. It’s not too puzzled but can be more up-close art.
Concept: 5/10 Construction using sand. Construction is an all-year thing so I don't recommend construction.
Gameplay: 6/10 It's a lot of switch minis that varies in difficulty from person to person. No signs showing what is going on even in the end. The minis not using switches are good and challenging and perfect to be in the difficulty range. Some minis are too hard though.
Overall: 7/10

Team name: The bros
Members: Seppinjo, Hej , Mait
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWEKoAcgZFbEI

Problem: The world is locked to only crew members, and will probably be disqualified.

Team name: GCrew
Team members: johnnycraig, tntlover125
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWy3YqSisOcEI

Art: 2/10 Art is not quality material and has only one intentional art. Also, The background is apparently a mess. It is a totally blocky world.
Concept: N/A No concept at all.
Gameplay: 3/10 It’s harder than it's supposed to be. Nothing is used to guide the player's’ path.
Overall: 2/10

Team Name: Zero Is The Loneliest Number
Members: 0176
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW9xXWcpK3a0I

Art: 9/10 Three words: Insanely created art.
Concept: 5/10 Summer inside a planet in outer space. Planet doesn’t look like Earth. Highly likely to get eliminated because this is a universe world taking place in the Summer.
Gameplay: 3/10 Hard and complicated, too hard for the difficulty setting. No guidance of where to go.
Overall: 6/10

Team Name: SWKD Summer Kidz!
Members: SAHLIL, WIZARDGUY, KALEB123, DA23NIEL3
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWYqq0wMv8bEI

Art: 7/10 No minimap art, but the up-close art is cool. Not much points will be taken off for minimap art due to the style of the game.
Concept: 3/10 Storytime campaigns are so similar to this.
Gameplay: 3/10 Very complicated and was not able to complete world due to the bad design.
Overall: 4/10

Team Name: Music Man
Members: musicman
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAARxthNga0I

Art: 4/10 Few minimap art combined with closeup art. Feels like in a tunnel due to design.
Concept: N/A
Gameplay 2/10 Simple just-get-the-coin game which is on a lot of worlds.
Overall: 2/10

Team Name: Peace and Bahar
Members: peace, bahar
World Url: http://www.everybodyedits.com/games/PWAHQ7lgdga0I

Problem: World is only available to crew members.

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Team name: Sensei's Supercute Sunshine Sensation
Members: Sensei1
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWlnFPQFIlcEI

Art: 8/10 It's not that bad actually. It's pretty good. It’s not too puzzled but can be more up-close art.
Concept: 5/10 Construction using sand. Construction is an all-year thing so I don't recommend construction.
Gameplay: 6/10 It's a lot of switch minis that varies in difficulty from person to person. No signs showing what is going on even in the end. The minis not using switches are good and challenging and perfect to be in the difficulty range. Some minis are too hard though.
Overall: 7/10

Team name: The bros
Members: Seppinjo, Hej , Mait
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWEKoAcgZFbEI

Problem: The world is locked to only crew members, and will probably be disqualified.

Team name: GCrew
Team members: johnnycraig, tntlover125
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWy3YqSisOcEI

Art: 2/10 Art is not quality material and has only one intentional art. Also, The background is apparently a mess. It is a totally blocky world.
Concept: N/A No concept at all.
Gameplay: 3/10 It’s harder than it's supposed to be. Nothing is used to guide the player's’ path.
Overall: 2/10

Team Name: Zero Is The Loneliest Number
Members: 0176
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW9xXWcpK3a0I

Art: 9/10 Three words: Insanely created art.
Concept: 5/10 Summer inside a planet in outer space. Planet doesn’t look like Earth. Highly likely to get eliminated because this is a universe world taking place in the Summer.
Gameplay: 3/10 Hard and complicated, too hard for the difficulty setting. No guidance of where to go.
Overall: 6/10

Team Name: SWKD Summer Kidz!
Members: SAHLIL, WIZARDGUY, KALEB123, DA23NIEL3
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWYqq0wMv8bEI

Art: 7/10 No minimap art, but the up-close art is cool. Not much points will be taken off for minimap art due to the style of the game.
Concept: 3/10 Storytime campaigns are so similar to this.
Gameplay: 3/10 Very complicated and was not able to complete world due to the bad design.
Overall: 4/10

Team Name: Music Man
Members: musicman
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAARxthNga0I

Art: 4/10 Few minimap art combined with closeup art. Feels like in a tunnel due to design.
Concept: N/A
Gameplay 2/10 Simple just-get-the-coin game which is on a lot of worlds.
Overall: 2/10

Team Name: Peace and Bahar
Members: peace, bahar
World Url: http://www.everybodyedits.com/games/PWAHQ7lgdga0I

Problem: World is only available to crew members.

Team name : Trix RIP
Members : Lictor666, Kiraninja, Stagecrew, DClevels, Benje00,
World ID : http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWwzEx-3UxcEI

Art: 9/10 Perfect art. Only minimap art is present.
Concept: 5/10 To get the demon’s blood. The goal was written in the beginning on signs but it lacks summer occurrences. World creator probably forgot about Summer.
Gameplay: 7/10 Somewhat challenging minis. But challenging enough.
Overall: 6/10

Team Name: The Defenestrators
Members: Kirby, Megalamb, AK712, 12345678908642
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW_umZqWwkcEI

Art: 7/10 Very Creative and the art includes minimap and up-close art.
Concept: 10/10 Surfing. The first ever concept totally related to Summer.
Gameplay: 6/10 It’s actually really fun trying to get the coins. But not to forget that lag is in the way.
Overall: 8/10

Team name: wmX10
Members: wmwmwmwmwmwmwmwmwmwm
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWFfUi_B4ucEI

Art: 7/10 Close-up art is great, but there is no minimap art.
Concept: 7/10 Tells objective in the beginning. The concept is great.
Gameplay: 4/10 It’s a hard thinking game. And with parkour. Just a lot of exploits though they don’t change the game too much.
Overall: 6/10

Pingohits, Sensei1, CommanderKitten

Kira · 2016-07-09 17:31:32

minam wrote:

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Team name: Sensei's Supercute Sunshine Sensation
Members: Sensei1
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWlnFPQFIlcEI
Art: 8/10 It's not that bad actually. It's pretty good. It’s not too puzzled but can be more up-close art.
Concept: 5/10 Construction using sand. Construction is an all-year thing so I don't recommend construction.
Gameplay: 6/10 It's a lot of switch minis that varies in difficulty from person to person. No signs showing what is going on even in the end. The minis not using switches are good and challenging and perfect to be in the difficulty range. Some minis are too hard though.
Overall: 7/10

Team name: The bros
Members: Seppinjo, Hej , Mait
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWEKoAcgZFbEI
Problem: The world is locked to only crew members, and will probably be disqualified.

Team name: GCrew
Team members: johnnycraig, tntlover125
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWy3YqSisOcEI
Art: 2/10 Art is not quality material and has only one intentional art. Also, The background is apparently a mess. It is a totally blocky world.
Concept: N/A No concept at all.
Gameplay: 3/10 It’s harder than it's supposed to be. Nothing is used to guide the player's’ path.
Overall: 2/10

Team Name: Zero Is The Loneliest Number
Members: 0176
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW9xXWcpK3a0I
Art: 9/10 Three words: Insanely created art.
Concept: 5/10 Summer inside a planet in outer space. Planet doesn’t look like Earth. Highly likely to get eliminated because this is a universe world taking place in the Summer.
Gameplay: 3/10 Hard and complicated, too hard for the difficulty setting. No guidance of where to go.
Overall: 6/10

Team Name: SWKD Summer Kidz!
Members: SAHLIL, WIZARDGUY, KALEB123, DA23NIEL3
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWYqq0wMv8bEI
Art: 7/10 No minimap art, but the up-close art is cool. Not much points will be taken off for minimap art due to the style of the game.
Concept: 3/10 Storytime campaigns are so similar to this.
Gameplay: 3/10 Very complicated and was not able to complete world due to the bad design.
Overall: 4/10

Team Name: Music Man
Members: musicman
World Url: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAARxthNga0I
Art: 4/10 Few minimap art combined with closeup art. Feels like in a tunnel due to design.
Concept: N/A
Gameplay 2/10 Simple just-get-the-coin game which is on a lot of worlds.
Overall: 2/10

Team Name: Peace and Bahar
Members: peace, bahar
World Url: http://www.everybodyedits.com/games/PWAHQ7lgdga0I
Problem: World is only available to crew members.

I think you completely missed the point of our level.

Sensei1 · 2016-07-09 19:48:37

Wait wasn't this a summer contest not a spring contest?
And can't wait to read these once you've made more, looking good so far!

Zoey2070 · 2016-07-09 20:41:43

merged luka's topic into minam's

also this is now the official unofficial summer contest reviews

edit: LUKA DELETED HIS POST BEFORE I MADE MINE...........

completely irrelevant now

minam · 2016-07-10 03:24:43

Zoey2070 wrote:

merged luka's topic into minam's
also this is now the official unofficial summer contest reviews
edit: LUKA DELETED HIS POST BEFORE I MADE MINE...........

So weird. Now it's an Official Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews.
Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.

Xfrogman43 · 2016-07-10 05:13:14

minam wrote:

Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.

You can use context clues. I was referring to Luka's post if you didn't know that.

minam · 2016-07-10 05:14:39

Xfrogman43 wrote:

minam wrote:
Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.
You can use context clues. I was referring to Luka's post if you didn't know that.

I'm sorry but I don't use the forums much so how do I use context clues?

Xfrogman43 · 2016-07-10 06:22:06

minam wrote:

Xfrogman43 wrote:
minam wrote:
Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.
You can use context clues. I was referring to Luka's post if you didn't know that.
I'm sorry but I don't use the forums much so how do I use context clues?

You don't need to be on forums to know how to use context clues. Just look at who said what then see which person's post relates to their post.

skullz17 · 2016-07-10 11:09:12

Yandax wrote:

the gramatical mistakes hurt

While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?

Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.

minam · 2016-07-10 11:55:55

Xfrogman43 wrote:

minam wrote:
Xfrogman43 wrote:
minam wrote:
Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.
You can use context clues. I was referring to Luka's post if you didn't know that.
I'm sorry but I don't use the forums much so how do I use context clues?
You don't need to be on forums to know how to use context clues. Just look at who said what then see which person's post relates to their post.

Oh that's what you meant. I'm so dumb. I thought it was a tool or something.

Mait wrote:

I opened the world. Sorry

Thanks for telling me. You'll be reviewed after I review the rest of the worlds.

Luka504 wrote:

So ugh.
I guess these are my unnofical reviews.
Legend
Almost guranteed win.
Has a good chance
Unsure
Ive seen better
Disquslified/Unfinished
Judging formula:
Ill give each stat a certain amount of points, ranging from 0-5 and then i will multiply with this formula
Art x1 Gameplay x4 Creativity x2 Storyx1 (If there is a story).
You dont need a story to get maximum points though. Maximum points with no story is 35 and 40 with a story.
▼Sensei's Supercute Sunshine Sensation
Really well made world.
Art is pretty simple, i like it. 5 points
I think this is the only puzzle summer contest world, the puzzles are really well made. I had fun :>. Though except the last few minigames i have to say they are really easy. 4 points
Well yeah this is a pretty original puzzle world. No one else used this idea. 5 points again.
There is no real story, you just get to the princess in the end. Simple stories like that arent counted.
31/35 points
▼Peace and Bahar
Mind opening the world please??
▼Team name: The bros
Mind opening the world please? Thanks.
▼Team name: GCrew
Art is pretty mediocre. Its just sand and nothing else. 2.5 points
Gameplay is pretty OK, but the adventure itself is pretty short, you can finish it in 2-3 minutes if you are relatively skilled at EE. 3.5 points points.
I cant say i found much originalitty into this world. 2 points.
No story.
20.5/35
▼Zero Is The Loneliest Number
Damn, this art though. Im impressed. 5 points.
Gameplay is really fun..... But i think its too eazy? Except like 2 minigames this world seems really basic-easy, maybe more on easy, but shouldnt the world be medium-ish?? I dunno ill give 4 points.
Its in space though, so im not sure if its violating the theme rule. I guess its up to the judges wheter or not its sci-fi or summer. Ill take off 2 points form de final score since its pretty sci fi like.
Its pretty original..... I guess? 5 points.
There is no real story.
24/35
▼SWKD Summer Kidz!
Yeah. This world. ugh/.... Its the first story world on this list.
Now the art is OK, i guess they went for ingame art more, so ill give 4 pointson that.
Now for the gameplay, jeez the gameplay. Its awful. After the school section it gets really repetitive. You go into a zone, get free items, go to the next zone, do the minigame, repeat.
Most of the ,,minigames,, are really uninspired and just not fun to do. 0 points. Yes its that bad.
Originality, well...... no. I have seen a bunch of story contest worlds, so ill give this one just 3 points.
So it has a story. You play as a high school graduate and after finishing your FINALS test, you hear how someone stole the sun, and you have to go restore it. Now this story is full of holes.
The three major ones are: How do you contain the sun?
How does the Sun's disapearance NOT affect the solar system?
Even though the sun is gone, its still a sunny day outside.
Im giving one point beacuse of pity.
11/40 points.
▼Music Man
The art is mediocre. 2.5 points.
The gameplay is mediocre as well. The minigames just feel so bland. 2 points.
For originality..... Eh you can have 3 points.
No story..... Oh whale.
16.5/35 points
▼ Trix RIP
Yay for OP crew :I.
Now i didnt expect anything less from OP crew, so 5 points for art.
Now heard a lot of people are saying this world is too hard. Even though i said it myself some time back, the world is indeed Medium difficulty. Some minis are garbage however and they create the illusion the minigames are hard. Though i agree it is a really long level and probably will take you a while to beat since it works in a very similar way Ex Crew Oddysey works.. Im sorry but 3 points.
Do i need to ask for originality? 5 points.
The story is simple one, so im not counting it. Your village needs a cure and the elder knows the formula for the cure, but he needs demon blood for it. Now when you reach said demon you can choose to sell your soul for the blood or slay the demon. To save you the work, you need to slay the demon for the good ending, and sell your soul for the bad one. Either way you save your village in the end.
27/35 points
▼The Defenestrators
Im sorry for the red font, its not that the world is bad, i really liked the idea, but ive seen better worlds out there and i expected more form this team.
Art is pretty OK, but ingame it looks weird. 3 points. Ill add half a point to the final score for the spongebob refference.
The gameplay, you have to surf and collect coins to unlock the trophy, but along the way you can buy powerups to help you collect the coins. While this is clever, its pretty hard to collect coins since you are constantly being pushed by the water, and it gets harder to control yourself if you have the speed powerup. 2.5 points.
Originality? 5 points.
24/35
▼wmX10
The world is half empty. Thats a good sign.
Wow that some high quality art. NSFV got nothing on you. 1 point.
The gameplay is quite unique, actuly. You play as a person who goes on vacation and has a To Do list with 15 stuff on it. You have 10 days to do all of these tasks, but you get 3 actions per day. Everyday you watch theweather forecast to see how hot it is outside and how much time you can spend outside before getting a sunburn. If you get a sunburn you waste around 2 days of time. However you can choose to buy sunscreen, which will give you sun burn immunity for the whole day. However you lose an action if you buy it.
However, this world is really easy. Its very obvious where you are meant to go since you can see the giant flipping switch gates and doors, and this means that, at minimum, it takes you 5 days to finish the game.
Also you dont need sun screen. Like ever. The buldings are very close to each other, so unless you delibarety stand outside without moving, you wont get a sunburn. Ever.Oh god 1 point.
Originality, heck yes. 5 points.
10/35 points
▼The Fearless Five
Damn, they really should be fearless.
The aart is simple, but nice. I like it. 5 points
The gameplay is pretty good, but it sort of feels like one of those worlds where they made the minimap and just built minigames around it.
Also, its kinda looooooooong....... 3.5 points
Originality? 4.5 points..... ive seen a bunch of sand castles in otherworlds so..... yeah.
No story. Meep.
28/35
▼Jakub321 and the Nublets
I honestly dont know what to think.
For art.... the world is half empty. Though the temple at the bottom looks nice. On minimap. 3.5 points.
Gameplay could be better. Inside the temple it looks really confusing, since its one of the: ,,Art is the only thing that matters.,, worlds and gameplay has to suffer beacuse of that.
And the clouds are just bombarded with invisible portals. Even some solid blocks that look like youre meant to walk on them could be an invisible portal.
On the plus side the minigames are pretty enjoyable. 3 points.
Originality?? Eh. 3 points.
There is no story. Meek.
21.5/35
▼Sticky
The art is pretty good tbh. 4 points from me.
Its a classical adventure game with some pretty hard minis. No seriously a bunch of the minigames are pretty garbage. 2.5 points.
I think its the only tropical island world and ill give it 4 points
No story. K.
22/35 points
▼guy
So another story world. Nice. Also why is the name of the world still: ,,Summer contest,,? Lol skullz probs forgot to change the name.
The minimap is disabled, so i guess they focused more on ingame art. The ingame art isnt really that good..... 3.5 points.
For gameplay i will say this: Its a pretty short adventure. I dunn why, but i finishedit in like 3 minutes. The minis are OK, ive had fun, but some parts (like the auction part) seemed dumb. 3.5 points.
I guess ill give it 4 points for Originallity. I guess.
The story is well made, but the gramatical mistakes hurt. Somewhere (presumably africa or some other southern continent) in the world people are suffering beacuse it barely rains during ,,dry season,, aka summer, and this leads to starvation beacuse its impossible to grow plants during a ,,draught,,. To make sure it rains during the summer, the king orders people to be sacrificed. However, a staff exists that is able to control the weather. You are called to meet the king and after doing 3 tests you go out to find the artifact. One adventure later you retrieve the staff and go back to the village. But plot twist, the person that guided you to the temple with the staff backstabs you and kills the king with the staff, and he becomes king himself. And you become his consulant or something, when i honestlyexpectedto defeat him myself and become king. Disapointing. 2.5 points.
24/40 points
▼ Pizza
As soon as i opened the minimap, i saw it was more spring than summer..... Ok sure you can argue: ,,Not everything in summer is just sand and water,, but this world seems like it could have been fully sand and water, but like 75% of the world looks like its spring. While i do enjoy the art, i feel like it will get disqualified for not following the theme. 3 points
The gameplay is a bit on the hard side, beacuse a bunch of the minigames are really flipping hard. 2 points.
Originality, eh....... 4 points.
No story.
16/35
▼Fire Wolves
No win trophy.
More to come.....................
(Also i have to replace originality with creativity, when i say original in de reviews i mean creative. tnx)

Nice reviews, keep it up. Wish you luck. Wish me luck too.:P

Yandax · 2016-07-10 13:31:26

skullz17 wrote:

Yandax wrote:
the gramatical mistakes hurt
While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?
Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.

Are you quoting the right person here?

2016-07-10 14:05:55

Thanks for the honest reviews you guys, but to be honest, it might be a planet in outer space, but it's entirely summer-based, with beaches, boats and the like. I dunno if there was a rule that restricted worlds to being set specifically on Earth. Other planets do have "summers" but we don't consider that a "summer", either because we don't care about these dumb little planets or just because they're boring wastelands which would cremate you instantly if near it. Not in my planet though!

hummerz5, Xfrogman43, MBlood

Luka504 · 2016-07-10 14:45:28

skullz17 wrote:

Yandax wrote:
the gramatical mistakes hurt
While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?
Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.

Ok dont get me wrong, the story is well made, just has a few gramatical mistakes here and there, and i did undertstand that if i failed i would be sacrificed.
And even though he might be more powerfull than me, it still would have been a pretty great ending if you defeated Kale and became King yourself.
Instead you are now the advisor for a person who isnt afraid to backstab or do some questionable things. This made me fear that i got a bad ending and i played through the world again thinking i messed something up.
That is the disapointing part. There is no ,,good end,,

Abelysk · 2016-07-10 15:28:30

I won't be mean here but,

Can we have a decent reviewer reviewing the levels? I feel like these are done unprofessionally.

Yandax, Bobyy

Norwee · 2016-07-10 15:40:21

Kefka wrote:

I won't be mean here but,
Can we have a decent reviewer reviewing the levels? I feel like these are done unprofessionally.

Other people can create their own review topics if they want. If nobody does then this is what you get.
It takes quite some effort to review all levels so appreciate the effort of anyone who does it, if you don't like the quality then you must wait for the judge results

TaskManager

Abelysk · 2016-07-10 16:05:54

NorwegianboyEE wrote:

Kefka wrote:
I won't be mean here but,
Can we have a decent reviewer reviewing the levels? I feel like these are done unprofessionally.
Other people can create their own review topics if they want. If nobody does then this is what you get.
It takes quite some effort to review all levels so appreciate the effort of anyone who does it, if you don't like the quality then you must wait for the judge results

I completely understand and appreciate these reviewers. I am in no way saying for them to quit their reviews and it is wonderful seeing their insight. I am not here to be mean, but I am simply wishing to see a more "professional" view on the entries. Of course, I understand I can wait for the official reviews, but I simply wish to see a professional partisan view on the levels.

skullz17 · 2016-07-10 17:50:22

Yandax wrote:

skullz17 wrote:
Yandax wrote:
the gramatical mistakes hurt
While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?
Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.
Are you quoting the right person here?

No, sorry. I just highlighted it from your post where you quoted him and I clicked the quote button on your post, so it ended up quoting you. I'll fix that.

Luka504 wrote:

skullz17 wrote:
Yandax wrote:
the gramatical mistakes hurt
While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?
Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.
Ok dont get me wrong, the story is well made, just has a few gramatical mistakes here and there, and i did undertstand that if i failed i would be sacrificed.
And even though he might be more powerfull than me, it still would have been a pretty great ending if you defeated Kale and became King yourself.
Instead you are now the advisor for a person who isnt afraid to backstab or do some questionable things. This made me fear that i got a bad ending and i played through the world again thinking i messed something up.
That is the disapointing part. There is no ,,good end,,

I still stand my ground that there were no grammatical mistakes (although perhaps the tenses used at the beginning sound a little awkward, but they are not incorrect).

I suppose it could be cool to have that ending you wanted but it wasn't the intended outcome. Some stories are tragedies. I wanted this story to be a story of manipulation and deception. At the same time, I wanted right and wrong to be a little ambiguous, in the sense that even though it was wrong to backstab the king, it might have been for the better. Anyway, I guess not everyone likes tragedies so whatever.

Kirby · 2016-07-10 18:14:08

Gameplay: 6/10 It’s actually really fun trying to get the coins. But not to forget that lag is in the way.

Did you just... lower our score... because of lag?

Luka504, Pingohits, Xfrogman43, MBlood, Yandax, Slabdrill, jonhvictor2004sonic

Yandax · 2016-07-10 20:10:55

Kirby wrote:

Did you just... lower our score... because of lag?

Can I lower your score because I was flamed on your level?

Slabdrill · 2016-07-10 21:11:18

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tlP … sp=sharing is mine, too lazy to make topic

CommanderKitten

jonhvictor2004sonic · 2016-07-10 22:25:11

Fixed mine!

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