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#1 2016-07-09 16:11:51, last edited by minam (2016-07-10 12:00:25)

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Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

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#2 2016-07-09 17:31:32

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

minam wrote:

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I think you completely missed the point of our level.

#3 2016-07-09 19:48:37

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Wait wasn't this a summer contest not a spring contest?
And can't wait to read these once you've made more, looking good so far!


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#4 2016-07-09 20:41:43, last edited by Zoey2070 (2016-07-11 05:43:05)

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

merged luka's topic into minam's

also this is now the official unofficial summer contest reviews

edit: LUKA DELETED HIS POST BEFORE I MADE MINE...........

completely irrelevant now


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#5 2016-07-10 03:24:43, last edited by minam (2016-07-10 03:51:10)

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Zoey2070 wrote:

merged luka's topic into minam's

also this is now the official unofficial summer contest reviews

edit: LUKA DELETED HIS POST BEFORE I MADE MINE...........

So weird. Now it's an Official Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews.
Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.


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#6 2016-07-10 05:13:14

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

minam wrote:

Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.

You can use context clues. I was referring to Luka's post if you didn't know that.


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#7 2016-07-10 05:14:39

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Xfrogman43 wrote:
minam wrote:

Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.

You can use context clues. I was referring to Luka's post if you didn't know that.

I'm sorry but I don't use the forums much so how do I use context clues?


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#8 2016-07-10 06:22:06, last edited by Xfrogman43 (2016-07-10 06:22:16)

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

minam wrote:
Xfrogman43 wrote:
minam wrote:

Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.

You can use context clues. I was referring to Luka's post if you didn't know that.

I'm sorry but I don't use the forums much so how do I use context clues?

You don't need to be on forums to know how to use context clues. Just look at who said what then see which person's post relates to their post.


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#9 2016-07-10 11:09:12

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Yandax wrote:

the gramatical mistakes hurt

While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?

Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.


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#10 2016-07-10 11:55:55, last edited by minam (2016-07-10 11:56:47)

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Xfrogman43 wrote:
minam wrote:
Xfrogman43 wrote:
minam wrote:

Also, it's harder to tell who the commentators are talking to.

You can use context clues. I was referring to Luka's post if you didn't know that.

I'm sorry but I don't use the forums much so how do I use context clues?

You don't need to be on forums to know how to use context clues. Just look at who said what then see which person's post relates to their post.

Oh that's what you meant. I'm so dumb. I thought it was a tool or something.

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I opened the world. Sorry

Thanks for telling me. You'll be reviewed after I review the rest of the worlds.

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So ugh.
I guess these are my unnofical reviews.
Legend
Almost guranteed win.
Has a good chance
Unsure
Ive seen better
Disquslified/Unfinished
Judging formula:
Ill give each stat a certain amount of points, ranging from 0-5 and then i will multiply with this formula
Art x1  Gameplay x4 Creativity x2 Storyx1 (If there is a story).
You dont need a story to get maximum points though. Maximum points with no story is 35 and 40 with a story.

Sensei's Supercute Sunshine Sensation
Peace and Bahar
Team name: The bros
Team name: GCrew
Zero Is The Loneliest Number
SWKD Summer Kidz!
Music Man
Trix RIP
The Defenestrators
wmX10
The Fearless Five
Jakub321 and the Nublets
Sticky
guy
Pizza
Fire Wolves

More to come.....................
(Also i have to replace originality with creativity, when i say original in de reviews i mean creative. tnx)

Nice reviews, keep it up. Wish you luck. Wish me luck too.:P


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#11 2016-07-10 13:31:26

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

skullz17 wrote:
Yandax wrote:

the gramatical mistakes hurt

While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?

Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.

Are you quoting the right person here?


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#12 2016-07-10 14:05:55

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Thanks for the honest reviews you guys, but to be honest, it might be a planet in outer space, but it's entirely summer-based, with beaches, boats and the like. I dunno if there was a rule that restricted worlds to being set specifically on Earth. Other planets do have "summers" but we don't consider that a "summer", either because we don't care about these dumb little planets or just because they're boring wastelands which would cremate you instantly if near it. Not in my planet though!

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#13 2016-07-10 14:45:28, last edited by Luka504 (2016-07-10 14:53:37)

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

skullz17 wrote:
Yandax wrote:

the gramatical mistakes hurt

While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?

Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.

Ok dont get me wrong, the story is well made, just has a few gramatical mistakes here and there, and i did undertstand that if i failed i would be sacrificed.
And even though he might be more powerfull than me, it still would have been a pretty great ending if you defeated Kale and became King yourself.
Instead you are now the advisor for a person who isnt afraid to backstab or do some questionable things. This made me fear that i got a bad ending and i played through the world again thinking i messed something up.
That is the disapointing part. There is no ,,good end,,


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#14 2016-07-10 15:28:30

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

I won't be mean here but,

Can we have a decent reviewer reviewing the levels? I feel like these are done unprofessionally.

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#15 2016-07-10 15:40:21

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Kefka wrote:

I won't be mean here but,

Can we have a decent reviewer reviewing the levels? I feel like these are done unprofessionally.

Other people can create their own review topics if they want. If nobody does then this is what you get.
It takes quite some effort to review all levels so appreciate the effort of anyone who does it, if you don't like the quality then you must wait for the judge results //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

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#16 2016-07-10 16:05:54, last edited by Abelysk (2016-07-10 16:06:14)

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

NorwegianboyEE wrote:
Kefka wrote:

I won't be mean here but,

Can we have a decent reviewer reviewing the levels? I feel like these are done unprofessionally.

Other people can create their own review topics if they want. If nobody does then this is what you get.
It takes quite some effort to review all levels so appreciate the effort of anyone who does it, if you don't like the quality then you must wait for the judge results //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

I completely understand and appreciate these reviewers. I am in no way saying for them to quit their reviews and it is wonderful seeing their insight. I am not here to be mean, but I am simply wishing to see a more "professional" view on the entries. Of course, I understand I can wait for the official reviews, but I simply wish to see a professional partisan view on the levels.

#17 2016-07-10 17:50:22

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Yandax wrote:
skullz17 wrote:
Yandax wrote:

the gramatical mistakes hurt

While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?

Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.

Are you quoting the right person here?

No, sorry. I just highlighted it from your post where you quoted him and I clicked the quote button on your post, so it ended up quoting you. I'll fix that.

Luka504 wrote:
skullz17 wrote:
Yandax wrote:

the gramatical mistakes hurt

While my level is an unfinished, rushed piece of crap, there were no grammatical mistakes. I hate a lot about that level, but why did you have to pick on my grammar?

Also, I'm sorry you were disappointed about the story, but allow me to explain. Kale was the King's advisor, you were just a citizen. If Kale didn't have his little project, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. If his project failed, you would have been sacrificed in the ritual. Kale made you do the tedious job of making hats for 5 minutes. Kale made you commit a crime and steal from a nobleman. Kale made you risk your life to get the staff, while he stood and watched. And Kale held your hand throughout the whole thing, and you didn't have a say in anything. Kale was always more powerful than you, and was using you from the beginning. I don't see how you could expect to overpower Kale and become King yourself. I deliberately built the level in a way that the player was guided through each challenge and didn't have much freedom to go where they like. This is so that it would reflect the theme of the story.

Ok dont get me wrong, the story is well made, just has a few gramatical mistakes here and there, and i did undertstand that if i failed i would be sacrificed.
And even though he might be more powerfull than me, it still would have been a pretty great ending if you defeated Kale and became King yourself.
Instead you are now the advisor for a person who isnt afraid to backstab or do some questionable things. This made me fear that i got a bad ending and i played through the world again thinking i messed something up.
That is the disapointing part. There is no ,,good end,,

I still stand my ground that there were no grammatical mistakes (although perhaps the tenses used at the beginning sound a little awkward, but they are not incorrect).

I suppose it could be cool to have that ending you wanted but it wasn't the intended outcome. Some stories are tragedies. I wanted this story to be a story of manipulation and deception. At the same time, I wanted right and wrong to be a little ambiguous, in the sense that even though it was wrong to backstab the king, it might have been for the better. Anyway, I guess not everyone likes tragedies so whatever.


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#18 2016-07-10 18:14:08

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Gameplay: 6/10 It’s actually really fun trying to get the coins. But not to forget that lag is in the way.

Did you just... lower our score... because of lag?

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#19 2016-07-10 20:10:55

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Kirby wrote:

Did you just... lower our score... because of lag?

Can I lower your score because I was flamed on your level?


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#20 2016-07-10 21:11:18, last edited by Slabdrill (2016-07-12 16:24:26)

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suddenly random sig change

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#21 2016-07-10 22:25:11

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Re: Minam's Unofficial Summer Contest Reviews

Fixed mine!


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