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UniversalUniverse90

Anonymous user

Waiting?

i was waiting
waiting for the thought to arise in yer brain
the smoke the clouds the gauzy shift in temp.,
and unkempt scourge drifting
across word salad heads fueling jumper cable passion projects,
ignite ignite and igniting again

i'm waiting for the day i can tell you
that it's been quite a while since i said that one thing you liked
about open car windows and messy hair
that looks good the more razzed you are
and i'm waiting still, you know, for the time when i can see it,
to smear your map with golden coins or some ****,
to feel that way about some things,
even the worst parts of it that seem to read better in my mind
the longer the wait stretches on

yawning-yogurt

Anonymous user

Re: Waiting?

moved 2 creative

-buzz

amazingAccomplice

Anonymous user

Re: Waiting?

i was waiting

I was waiting for the bus
then i was waiting to be done with school
then i was waiting to be done with college
then i was waiting to start a job
then i was waiting to retire
then i was waiting to die.

upliftedUndertaker

Anonymous user

Re: Waiting?

i was waiting

I was waiting for the bus
then i was waiting to be done with school
then i was waiting to be done with college
then i was waiting to start a job
then i was waiting to retire
then i was waiting to die.

i found rat

Dan29

Anonymous user

Re: Waiting?

Rat! I love your poem! I'm a huge fan!

upliftedUndertaker

Anonymous user

Re: Waiting?

Rat! I love your poem! I'm a huge fan!

I found Allen

Dan29

Anonymous user

Re: Waiting?

HOW

Heroic-horse

Anonymous user

Re: Waiting?

i was waiting

Spastic slugger

Anonymous user

Re: Waiting?

waiting for deez nuts

VulnerableVoter

Anonymous user

Re: Waiting?

I'm waiting for the guy who asked