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Formerly Pipec

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Joined: 2017-04-15

Posts: 862

Request a Poem

So, me and anonymous player in EE were bored.The person who was making those poems doesn't want be credited for now.

You can "request poem" as title says.Please read the rules before posting!

1.I just want to say, we don't promise much from this topic!
2.We making them, so it takes some time.
3.If you like them you can request max.1 per day!
4.Don't ask for the same poem, what was already made!

We'll be happy to receive a good feedback!

EXAMPLE ONE OF THE POEMS:

Tears have smile, love has hate.
Soul is the heart and mind is the brain.
Promises have betreyals, lie has truth.
You're my friend but I'm not yours. :^)

▼Queue

AnatolyEE,minimania,Filip

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lana005

New Member

Joined: 2017-12-28

Posts: 3

Re: Request a Poem

Great idea! I love that poem and I think you should continue writing.My wish is to write a song about the best friend.

Emma333

Member

From: The Netherlands

Joined: 2015-04-16

Posts: 589

Re: Request a Poem

Write a poem about public transport systems

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Pm me with anything math related please

Tomahawk

Forum Mod

From: UK

Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 2,847

Re: Request a Poem

How about a haiku lamenting yet making light of the curious cycle of rise and fall exhibited by those risen to greener pastures in this dwindling society?

Perhaps with an addendum to the effect that the sun will rise tomorrow, etc. etc., and what is sorrow anyway?

kthx

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PTU

Formerly Pipec

From: Mailboxٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴ

Joined: 2017-04-15

Posts: 862

Re: Request a Poem

Best Friend

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A gift for you and me.
A gift of a true bond. 
Eternal promise which will know no bounds.
For you and me, empathy is granted. 
With you, I know that I'm wanted.

Public Transport Systems aka "Ugh"

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Another morning, more madness.
People rushing without kindness.
Fighting for a seat with ignorance,
Do nothing except for showing arrogance.
Another smoking lady is near, Oh! please get me out of here.

And Tomahawk, I don't really know what you wanted anyways we tried to understand that. Hope you like it!
Sleeping Ones

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Illness and sickness fall upon all.
We mourn for them wishing they won't go.
They will live the night without end, life starts and ends then only void is left.
Weak we are but brave we stand.
Hope is our messiah along with moving on.
You may not witness another sunrise, but hero you have falled and so will rise.

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Filip2005

Member

From: Braxis

Joined: 2017-07-17

Posts: 366

Website

Re: Request a Poem

Descriptive writing is allowed ?

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I am Filip and I like women.

Zumza

Member

From: root

Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 4,656

Re: Request a Poem

School as prison

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HeyNK

Member

Joined: 2017-04-07

Posts: 1,318

Re: Request a Poem

a poem of an angsty high schooler lamenting the fact he has to attend school please

Anatoly

Guest

Re: Request a Poem

Communism, Lenin, victory, red, does communism work?, isolation in world, perfect life, being proud, hammer and sickle, revolution, 1991 dissolvation.

PTU

Formerly Pipec

From: Mailboxٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴ

Joined: 2017-04-15

Posts: 862

Re: Request a Poem

I'm alive! There's a revive guys! (HeyNK+Zumza's request I did just one cos of really similiar request)

Behind The Bars

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Waking up to to the ring of bells.
Asking myself, why am I here again.

Sobbing as I rush to the bathroom,
avoiding others at all cost.
Remembering all those people around me,
laughing at me for being the failure I am.
Why, I wonder,
Why do I have to be here?

Going home, after reliving hell,
Falling to another slumber,
already cursing the next day.

I, no longer focus on my studies,
realizing that even in class I sleep my life away.
Wanting to die because I louth this place,
even home, is not for me.

After another day ends, to the steets I go.
Too afraid to go home or the prison they call school.
Acknowledging the fact this world is better off without me.
Noone would even miss me, I admit.

Returning home, late at night.
Smiling because I know I won't see another ray of light.

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Also AnatolyEE you are in queue.

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Minimania

Moderation Team

From: PbzvatFbba 13

Joined: 2015-02-22

Posts: 6,393

Re: Request a Poem

Could you create a poem about two twin roses, one being red and one being white? Try to make them symbolize me and my twin if you can

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Anatoly

Guest

Re: Request a Poem

Also AnatolyEE you are in queue.

That's great. Thank you!

Need to agree that I still were joking about that poem.

PTU

Formerly Pipec

From: Mailboxٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴٴ

Joined: 2017-04-15

Posts: 862

Re: Request a Poem

Need to agree that I still were joking about that poem.

Haha, ask for real request or you will be blacklisted then, just please.

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Filip2005

Member

From: Braxis

Joined: 2017-07-17

Posts: 366

Website

Re: Request a Poem

Make a poem about me destroying the EE , pls describe me as "an obese version of Godzilla"

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I am Filip and I like women.