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#1 2016-04-13 21:10:51, last edited by Norwee (2016-04-13 22:31:06)

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Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

** UNOFFICIAL SPRING CONTEST LEVEL REVIEWS **

If you’d like to find your team’s review simply CONTROL F your EE username.

REVIEWS:

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If the judges only post scores and no reviews you may rest assured that you have my humble opinion!


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#2 2016-04-13 21:36:17

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Wow! Results in guys! :O These are actually very honest and well thought out. Good job to you!


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#3 2016-04-13 21:45:53

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Great reviews, tbh.

Also, quick question. What was hard about my world? Thanks.

#4 2016-04-13 22:08:50, last edited by Norwee (2016-04-13 22:27:56)

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Kefka wrote:

Great reviews, tbh.

Also, quick question. What was hard about my world? Thanks.

Well it was mostly about the small 1x1 spring boosts. They were hard to reach and i lagged a little and thought it was too hard to be basic-easy. Thats why i ragequit. :P

(Also, the look of the world itself made me think this was gonna be some uber-hard joke level.)


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#5 2016-04-13 22:40:00

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Perhaps I could've used a little more context.

The boosts were automatic if following the signs. You were to wait at each sign and then simply hold the arrow where each sign points to. That's all you gotta do =p
As for the art and everything else - I was going to add Spring stuff but the spring contest rewards aren't as much as I'd hoped it to be. For example, something like a Bee smiley would have instantly put me into try-hard mode, whereas several Gems + a trophy just don't do the big punch as much as something like an exclusive block pack you can use or a smiley.

And omg an exclusive block pack would be the greatest thing ever to win from a contest.

#6 2016-04-13 22:43:32

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

wow you forgot me how dare you


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#7 2016-04-13 23:49:44

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Besides the bias of hating on the minimap art levels (#RIP my hard work) thanks for the input. I didn't expect much from my minis. That isn't what I am good at creating in Everybody Edits.

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#8 2016-04-14 00:01:08

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

> gives onjit/bobithan's level 5.5
> gives mine/evilbunny/tomkazaz/creature level 7

h w a t


idk. honestly, this was a really nice thing for you to do but i don't really agree with many of your scores.

maybe i'll do the same review thing kek


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#9 2016-04-14 04:06:26

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Thanks for your reviews, i'll read them once i'll have finished mines.


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#10 2016-04-14 04:46:19

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

I was gonna do this myself

guess i will


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#11 2016-04-14 06:20:25

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

I suck at making stories,please try mine
Crew: Creative Team
Members: Vitor04sonic-Sotiris5-Vanzan
World: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWUgqlojvSb0I


tfw wen u made another account just because you forgot your pass

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#12 2016-04-14 06:23:21

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Well, RIP my team's level.
May I ask what parts of the art did you think were bad? Or was all of it bad?

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#13 2016-04-14 06:31:41

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

@Pingohits and johnvictor2004sonic

Your levels weren't in the submitted levels list... so whatDoYouExpek? :3 Control F pingohits or vitor04sonic on http://forums.everybodyedits.com/viewtopic.php?id=34276 and you won't find your name on the OP.


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#14 2016-04-14 06:50:26

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

iPwner wrote:

@Pingohits and johnvictor2004sonic

Your levels weren't in the submitted levels list... so whatDoYouExpek? :3 Control F pingohits or vitor04sonic on http://forums.everybodyedits.com/viewtopic.php?id=34276 and you won't find your name on the OP.

U pwned us

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#15 2016-04-14 07:08:53

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

jonhvictor2004sonic wrote:
iPwner wrote:

@Pingohits and johnvictor2004sonic

Your levels weren't in the submitted levels list... so whatDoYouExpek? :3 Control F pingohits or vitor04sonic on http://forums.everybodyedits.com/viewtopic.php?id=34276 and you won't find your name on the OP.

U pwned us

R.I.P. Jonhvictor2004sonic and Pingohits ,rekted by ~ipwner~

Damn right sonnybunsz! G: iPwned! On the fly. -TK TK!-


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#16 2016-04-14 08:23:00, last edited by Luka504 (2016-04-14 08:24:02)

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Aaro54 wrote:

Well, RIP my team's level.
May I ask what parts of the art did you think were bad? Or was all of it bad?

I have decided to replay it again. (I judge every part seperately)
As from what i see you tried to make like an RPG overworld area, just hunting for eggs.
The art is flipping beautiful. Nuff said. (6/10)
The gameplay is where the fertilizer hits the fan. I got lost SO MANY TIMES. Even in the town area!
Like jesus i was just running around looking for the president, but i didnt have any sense of direction.
Doesnt help the president look like EVERYBODY ELSE!
Dont get me started on the actual egg hunting. Some minigames look possible, some look impossible, and the invisible blocks pretty much ruin the entire level. 0.000000000001/10 (This is a pity score)
The story is pretty generic. There is an egg hunt and you want to get the most eggs possible. 60% of the submitted worlds use this gimmick. (3/10)
Concept/aestethics is pretty nice. The overworld thing is pretty original. Sadly the gameplay makes this part practically awful. (4/10)
Overall the art and the concept are solid but JESUS the gameplay ruined the experience for me. Overall its 3/10 i guess? (Average score: 3.2/10)
LODO ( a friend of mine):
The art is great, but really that is the only thing i liked here. I was lost while playing, the mayor is apparently the world's best ninja since i cant find him. And the invisible walls. Oh golly. I couldnt finish it, it sucks and the makers suck. Goodbye.
1.5/10
(2.25/10 our average score)


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#17 2016-04-14 08:44:21

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Pingohits wrote:

wow you forgot me how dare you

Hm ok.
So from what i see, this is some adventure world with a more developed story. I cant exactly say its spring themed.
The art is pretty awesome (and simple) ingame, but the minimap looks like it was meant to give epilepsy or something.
Though its NOT spring themed. Maybe in a few parts, but not really. (6/10)
The gameplay is good, but it doesn't meet the basic-easy requirement. Some moments its easy, some moments its pretty insane.I got stuck mid-way beacuse its soooo hard. (4/10)
The story is actuly pretty good, you jump on the Empereor's head and now the police are trying to arrest you etc. But again, not very spring themed. Still ranks high in my book. (8/10)
Concepts? Meh. Its just an adventure world with a story. At least its more original than some other submitted worlds i saw. (5/10)
Overall i have doubts this will win. If it was some sort of make-an-adventure contest, you would probably rank pretty high, but this is a spring entry that doesnt even resemble spring and fails to meet the easy requirement. I give it a good 8/10 for being what it is, but for the contest maybe a 4.5/10? (Average 5.75)
LODO: I probably would've finished it if it wasn't so *censored* long & hard. The art is good i guess, not very springy doe. There isnt much else to say lols.
Idk 3.5/10 seems fitting.
(Our average score 4/10)


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#18 2016-04-14 12:35:53

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

I kind of agree with my minis, as we tried to make them basic... but the level's concept? There are 6 eggs and a few signs, the Egg Hunt isn't mentioned for the majority of the level.

#19 2016-04-14 13:36:51, last edited by Aaro54 (2016-04-14 13:39:55)

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Luka504 wrote:
Aaro54 wrote:

Well, RIP my team's level.
May I ask what parts of the art did you think were bad? Or was all of it bad?

I have decided to replay it again. (I judge every part seperately)
As from what i see you tried to make like an RPG overworld area, just hunting for eggs.
The art is flipping beautiful. Nuff said. (6/10)
The gameplay is where the fertilizer hits the fan. I got lost SO MANY TIMES. Even in the town area!
Like jesus i was just running around looking for the president, but i didnt have any sense of direction.
Doesnt help the president look like EVERYBODY ELSE!
Dont get me started on the actual egg hunting. Some minigames look possible, some look impossible, and the invisible blocks pretty much ruin the entire level. 0.000000000001/10 (This is a pity score)
The story is pretty generic. There is an egg hunt and you want to get the most eggs possible. 60% of the submitted worlds use this gimmick. (3/10)
Concept/aestethics is pretty nice. The overworld thing is pretty original. Sadly the gameplay makes this part practically awful. (4/10)
Overall the art and the concept are solid but JESUS the gameplay ruined the experience for me. Overall its 3/10 i guess? (Average score: 3.2/10)
LODO ( a friend of mine):
The art is great, but really that is the only thing i liked here. I was lost while playing, the mayor is apparently the world's best ninja since i cant find him. And the invisible walls. Oh golly. I couldnt finish it, it sucks and the makers suck. Goodbye.
1.5/10
(2.25/10 our average score)

The mayor is directly below your house, and we thought people would try to talk to the closest person first.
When you say that the minis look possible or impossible, did you try them? All of them should be possible. Different colours of BG hint where there is invisible blocks on minis.
We were trying a different style in this level, where places you can't go (like rivers) are blocked with invisible blocks instead of using blocks on those parts. We thought it'd look smoother in-game like this.
But now that I look back to the level, the invisible blocks around the portals in the trees might have been a bad idea. Did you hate that or did you hate the usage of invisible blocks instead of blocks in rivers, trees and such? Or the usage between the tree minis (as an afterthought, this was maybe a bad idea. We thought it'd look better ingame if the tree minis were connected by background)? Or all of those?

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#20 2016-04-14 15:44:25

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

iPwner wrote:

@Pingohits and johnvictor2004sonic

Your levels weren't in the submitted levels list... so whatDoYouExpek? :3 Control F pingohits or vitor04sonic on http://forums.everybodyedits.com/viewtopic.php?id=34276 and you won't find your name on the OP.

OPEN YOUR EYES
http://forums.everybodyedits.com/viewto … 20#p594220


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#21 2016-04-14 16:00:34

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Pingohits wrote:
iPwner wrote:

@Pingohits and johnvictor2004sonic

Your levels weren't in the submitted levels list... so whatDoYouExpek? :3 Control F pingohits or vitor04sonic on http://forums.everybodyedits.com/viewtopic.php?id=34276 and you won't find your name on the OP.

OPEN YOUR EYES
http://forums.everybodyedits.com/viewto … 20#p594220

Wow TOOP missed that. You better pm him about it, but now the contest will take longer. D:

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#22 2016-04-14 16:31:52

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Can you tell me where you got stuck in our level? Because I thought I got rid of all the ways u could possibly get stuck. Thanks for taking the time to review our level lol


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#23 2016-04-14 16:49:04

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Lol I got a bad rating from you xD (and a lot of other people anyway) the top hat duck did tell you to collect all the blue coins but I must admit I only added blue coins to move through the Rain-Bow. I agree that my rainbow was bad (I built the clouds before the rainbow meaning there was no good angle for the rainbow to go). Also I am glad you judge gameplay over minimap art because tbh I built my level to look good on the minimap then worked gameplay into which I found stupid lol. Good thread though, hopefully the puns didn't rot your brain too badly xD.


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#24 2016-04-14 17:19:58

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Yeah I thought my world would probably be too hard. Was it the spike-based challenges that were the problem or the arrow challenges? I know there's an arrow mini that's definitely too hard on the way back, but for the most part I personally thought the arrow minis were simple. As for the spike challenges, I'm thinking that maybe some of them would be hard if you're laggy.


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#25 2016-04-14 19:13:06

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Re: Unofficial Spring Contest Level Reviews

Th level FUN CYCLE by Oinx uses the fairytale pack climbable. That would disqualify him or not?

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