Grave Sight Woods (A Story written by Haze123)

Haze123 · Before February 2015

Mangoman inspired me to write this
Grave Sight Woods........
Where will you be lost tonight?
Chapter 1 - New House
It was late when I moved to California. Some reason we lived by a grave. There were 8 neighbors 5 across the street and 3 by our house. When I was in bed i heard some strange moaning at night. I kind of ignored it then went to sleep.

It was morning and my sister Emma was talking about the new school we are gonna go to. Emma is 14 years old. And my brother is 17 years old. I am 12. "Alex, so what are you gonna say about the new school?" My dad asked.
"I'm a bit worried about it." I replied. I stop eating and go outside.
"What are you doing?" said Michael. Michael follows me outside. "I'm gonna play with Jake" I said. Jake is our dog, he is a Shepherd. Jake jumps on me then licks my face.
"Jake down boy!" I commanded. "Haha let's go in the woods to explore" said Michael. "Yeah, ok, but Jake needs to stay here" I replied. "Okay"
We walk a little into the woods. "What are you two doing?!" Emma exclaimed. "We're exploring the woods" Michael and I said together. "I'm gonna follow" said Emma. "But if we get lost--- "We won't get lost!" said Michael.
We walk into the woods. The sun was hard to see because the big trees were blocking it.
It was 9 minutes since we've walked into the woods.
"Okay wanna go back?" Michael asked. "Yes" Emma and I both said together. We ran back in the direction we walked and we didn't see our house.
"This was the place we started" said Emma. "Wheres the house?" I said. We kept running and couldn't find our house.
We were lost.
Chapter 2 - Out in the dark
"Great, you guys got me lost" said Emma. "We?!" Michael exclaimed "You were the one who wanted to come!" "If we got you lost you should not of came!" "Guys, we need to get out of here" I said. "Ugh your right let's find our selfs out of these creepy woods" said Michael. "Okay, any ideas of getting out?" Emma asked. "Let's just go west, ok?" I said. "Cool ok agreed?" said Michael. "Agreed" said Emma. "Hi" "!!" "W--Who's there?" I asked, frightened. He steps out behind a tree. "Hi" "My name is Daniel" His voice was smooth like mine. But it was a little low. "What are you guys doing in the woods of my backyard? "You backyard?!" said Emma. "Are you guys the one who just moved in next door?" Daniel asked. "Umm... Yeah" I replied. "You guys look lost let me show you the way out.

After he led us out of the woods we thanked him and then went back home.
"I think the new school won't be so bad." I said. "We're gonna go to the school in a week" "Where were you guys?!" Our mom asked. We ignored her and pretended nothing happened and walked to the kitchen our parents decorted.
"You guys wanna go back into the woods and explore more tomorrow?" "Yeah, we didn't find anything because we were focusing on getting back home" said Michael. "I guess i'm in too." said Emma. "But i'm gonna bring my GPS in case we get lost. "Okay" I said. We went up stairs to pick what rooms we wanted. Then i heard a scream. It came where Emma was looking.
"Emma!" Michael shouted. We both came running where she was.
Chapter 3 - Revealing the wood's secrets
When we got to her she was covered in some sort of goo "What did you do?" Michael asked. "It just shot out from the window" Emma replied. Michael and I went to check out the window. A shadow disappeared when we looked outside. "Something was out there" said Michael. Barking was coming from the backyard. "Jake!" Emma exclaimed. We all ran outside.
Jake wasn't in the backyard. The barking was coming from the woods. We all ran into the woods
"Jake, come here boy!" I said. Jake came running to me.
"You guys wait right here" "I'm gonna bring Jake home" "Okay" Michael and Emma said together.

After I brang Jake back home we went exploring the woods. "Hey guys!" "What?" I said. Daniel came running out of no where. "Where are you guys going?" "Exploring the woods" said Michael. "Cool!" said Daniel. "Can I follow?"
"Yeah sure" said Emma. "Okay, but I heard stories about strange things happening in these woods" said Daniel. "Like what?" I asked. "It gets all foggy and people who are together get seperated and get left by five or six graves in the woods" Daniel replied. "Weird" said Michael. "Okay let's try not to get sep-- Kaboom! Thunder hit the ground by us.
"That was close" said Daniel. It was getting hard to see a little... Foggy. "It's the fog!" said Michael. "Let's get out of here!" I said. "Follow me!" said Daniel. "I know the way out!" We followed Daniel but it was hard to see. "Where are you guys?!" I exclaimed. We all got lost.
Chapter 4 - Ghost world
"Where did they go?!" I said. I saw five graves right next to me. "What do the graves do?" "Well I better find them." "They might be lost too" The graves started moving and started floating in the air. White figures started popping out of the graves
"Run!" I thought to myself. I started running and the white figures started chasing me. They were very fast and they caught me. I fell and knocked un conscious.

I woke up in the woods still. I was tied to a tree. Daniel, Michael, and Emma were tied to a tree too by me. "You guys are awake!" "Yeah, where are the ghosts?" said Daniel. "I don't know" I said. "What are we gonna do?" said Emma.
"I have a pocket knife!" said Michael.
Michael cut the ropes then cut out ropes.
We ran out of the woods and we were home. "That was easy to get home" said Daniel. "I know" I said. It was late at night.
"We need to go home it's late" said Emma. "Okay me too" said Daniel.

It was morning and we all started to work in the house.
Michael, Emma and I went outside. "The ghosts!" said Michael
To be continued

Last edited by haze123 (Apr 15 2012 4:14:26 pm)

mangoman · Before February 2015

Very nice! The story was very well thought of I wonder what Emma was screaming about? BTW, Ima gunna be lost in my dreams tonight =P. Can't wait for more!

Haze123 · Before February 2015

Parts 3 and 4 added

Minimania · Before February 2015

Good so far. Keep it up.

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