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#26 Before February 2015
- Deetz
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry
Srr for gravedig here, but I never got my poen 
#27 Before February 2015
- Arceus64
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry
Can I have a poem about your hair?
#28 Before February 2015
- Buzzerbee
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- From: Texas, U.S.A.
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry
o. m. g. that. is. AMAZING!!!! Now I'm going to challenge you. Make a poem about Radioactive Elements that decay in less than an hour please.
Roses are red...
Radioactivity struck Japan...
That sucks for them.
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#29 Before February 2015
- skullz17
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry
Good job, but I prefer poems which are a lot more original,
Not just the words said, but the thoughts made before they were spoken.
Not some random crap about love that I've seen a million times,
Because if you continue, I guess I'll have to keep this negative talk then.
Quick poem I made to prove my point.
Nice poems, but be more original. I don't want to hear how much you want the love that you just can't get, I want to hear how love ruined your life, devouring everything until your partner's all you have left. I don't want to know about how much you want to hear God's voice, I want to hear how much you hate the fact that you spend everyday praying when you could be living life better. See what I mean?
thx for sig bobithan
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#30 Before February 2015
- Deetz
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry
Deetz wrote:o. m. g. that. is. AMAZING!!!! Now I'm going to challenge you. Make a poem about Radioactive Elements that decay in less than an hour please.
Roses are red...
Radioactivity struck Japan...
That sucks for them.
It's... It's... Beautiful 
#31 Before February 2015
- Buzzerbee
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- From: Texas, U.S.A.
- Joined: 2015-02-15
- Posts: 4,575
Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry
Good job, but I prefer poems which are a lot more original,
Not just the words said, but the thoughts made before they were spoken.
Not some random crap about love that I've seen a million times,
Because if you continue, I guess I'll have to keep this negative talk then.Quick poem I made to prove my point.
Nice poems, but be more original. I don't want to hear how much you want the love that you just can't get, I want to hear how love ruined your life, devouring everything until your partner's all you have left. I don't want to know about how much you want to hear God's voice, I want to hear how much you hate the fact that you spend everyday praying when you could be living life better. See what I mean?
Believe me, my real poems are original and one has made 2/3 the people I shared it with cry. Regardless, I don't really care what you think because poetry is my way to deal with my problems. These poems were just written so I could have something to share.
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#32 Before February 2015
- skullz17
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- Posts: 6,699
Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry
I really want to see some of those poems then
thx for sig bobithan
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