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#26 Before February 2015

Deetz
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Srr for gravedig here, but I never got my poen //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

#27 Before February 2015

Arceus64
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Can I have a poem about your hair?

#28 Before February 2015

Buzzerbee
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From: Texas, U.S.A.
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Deetz wrote:

o. m. g. that. is. AMAZING!!!! Now I'm going to challenge you. Make a poem about Radioactive Elements that decay in less than an hour please.

Roses are red...
Radioactivity struck Japan...
That sucks for them.


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#29 Before February 2015

skullz17
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Good job, but I prefer poems which are a lot more original,
Not just the words said, but the thoughts made before they were spoken.
Not some random crap about love that I've seen a million times,
Because if you continue, I guess I'll have to keep this negative talk then.

Quick poem I made to prove my point.

Nice poems, but be more original. I don't want to hear how much you want the love that you just can't get, I want to hear how love ruined your life, devouring everything until your partner's all you have left. I don't want to know about how much you want to hear God's voice, I want to hear how much you hate the fact that you spend everyday praying when you could be living life better. See what I mean?


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#30 Before February 2015

Deetz
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

BuzzerBee wrote:
Deetz wrote:

o. m. g. that. is. AMAZING!!!! Now I'm going to challenge you. Make a poem about Radioactive Elements that decay in less than an hour please.

Roses are red...
Radioactivity struck Japan...
That sucks for them.

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#31 Before February 2015

Buzzerbee
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From: Texas, U.S.A.
Joined: 2015-02-15
Posts: 4,575

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

skullz16 wrote:

Good job, but I prefer poems which are a lot more original,
Not just the words said, but the thoughts made before they were spoken.
Not some random crap about love that I've seen a million times,
Because if you continue, I guess I'll have to keep this negative talk then.

Quick poem I made to prove my point.

Nice poems, but be more original. I don't want to hear how much you want the love that you just can't get, I want to hear how love ruined your life, devouring everything until your partner's all you have left. I don't want to know about how much you want to hear God's voice, I want to hear how much you hate the fact that you spend everyday praying when you could be living life better. See what I mean?

Believe me, my real poems are original and one has made 2/3 the people I shared it with cry. Regardless, I don't really care what you think because poetry is my way to deal with my problems. These poems were just written so I could have something to share.


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#32 Before February 2015

skullz17
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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

I really want to see some of those poems then


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