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Deetz

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Nope. It's my story and I take away your rights to create deadlines.

I take away everyone's rights to create deadlines

Good. Because I'm everywun.

April 1.

skullz17

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Actually I might try and do it to your deadline Deetz; I might just about manage it.

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Raon

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

( ° ?? ?°) <---look at this face. Just look at it. Doesn't it make you to add me into your story? *,,*

That is me giving you the creepy-look 'cause "ctrl+f & raon" ended up with 0 results.

Last edited by Raon (Mar 19 2013 11:58:45 am)

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skullz17

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Woah forgot about this (Somehow)

Sorry guys, I'll continue to write.

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rocktheworld313

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

... so. About Deetz's deadline...

skullz17

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

The estimated time of completion is next year. That'll be my deadline.

EDIT: Btw I find writing stories like this boring, because there is no description, just plot. That's why I don't work on this that much.

Last edited by skullz16 (Apr 17 2013 2:17:05 pm)

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krubby

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Just write "Everybody died. The end"

skullz17

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Just write "Everybody died. The end"

Actually, I know exactly what I'm going to do now.

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krubby

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Hey guys, check the OP. There was a friggin update and it is KICKIN RAD.

Also, I wouldn't shoot Bimps. I'd give him a gun, tell him to shoot me, then run at superspeed to IHOP, eat some chocolate chip pancakes, grab Bimps and put him where I was, eat more chocolate chip pancakes and then Bimps would be shot to death by his own bullets. Then chocolate chip pancakes.*

*chocolate chip pancakes

Arceus64

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Incredible.

Krubby's just shooting everyone, it's awesome.

krubby

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Characters
Helvi: Inside MrShoe's lair; one of the leaders of the resistance
Aoitenshi: Inside MrShoe's lair, insists Krubby will be FINE
Deetz: Inside MrShoe's lair, which is wunderful
Krubby: Inside MrShoe's lair. Insane (both naturally and from MLP 20,000 leagues under the sea)
Arceus64: On the roof of EE headquarters, currently messing around with the wiring of a satellite
Zoey2070: Inside MrShoe's lair, talking much less than one would expect
Skullz17: On the roof of EE headquarters. Is an animate skeleton which is HILARIOUS. It would be even funnier if he was thirsty
Minimania: WHO KNOWS?! He emerged from a manhole at the start but was never heard from again
Patience Is Key: DEAD. Shot by Krubby for being too patient
Kirby: Inside MrShoe's lair, failed to kill MrShoe by planting the wrong bomb
Squad: Inside MrShoe's lair, another leader of the resistance
DryKirby64: DEAD. Was grabbed by a mysterious hand coming out of a manhole
Urban: On the roof of EE headquarters, currently tripping over wires like it's nobody's business
Bimps1002: DEAD. Shot by Krubby for having bad ideas
Saintcool: On the roof of EE headquarters, totes awesome
Number1KirbyFAn: WHO KNOWS?! He trusted Shift but was never seen again.
Nou: DEAD? Vanished, some think it was MrShoe who did it.
Shift: DEAD. Sniped by Jetpack Man.
MrShoe: Inside MrShoe's lair. He looks like a giant spider and may be behind the vanishing members. The heroes are planning on asking him who it was.
Failgirl101: Inside MrShoe's lair. She disguises herself as Happykat.
Guard: On the roof of EE headquarters, knocked out and bound by the heroes
Jetpack Man: JETPACK MAN! JETPACK MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!

Last edited by krubby (May 2 2013 3:30:28 pm)

Sensei1

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Can I be in the story? :O

skullz17

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Can I be in the story? :O

You can play the outro music.

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skullz17

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

IT'S FINISHED!!

READ IT NAO!

Now it's time for me to eat.

Last edited by skullz16 (May 3 2013 10:25:08 am)

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Sensei1

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

"Credit to Sensei1 for playing the outro music."

Haha, I can image that xD
Really nice story

Deetz

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

How wunderful that I get the last line!

Arceus64

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Wow, a lot of fighting.

Still, awesome ending, it's even better while listening to Too Close by Alex Clare while reading it.

Like I did.

Good job!

krubby

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Wait, what was Echo's goal? Still PRETTY FRIGGIN AMAZING.

I've always warned y'all about JEtpack Man! I TOLD you to stock up on my chocolate sauce but NOOOOOOOOO.
EDIT: I just made a friggin comic using only a trackpad, MS Paint and Google Images.
http://i.imgur.com/f80qC4X.png

Last edited by krubby (May 4 2013 12:09:06 am)

Echo!

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Thanks for adding me. I got quite into reading this.

Haha, awesome story, well done.

I'm a bit worried of what you think of me after reading this, since you like to use other peoples personalties. :3 :3

But none the less I liked it!

skullz17

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

I think the story after the line "FROM THIS POINT THE STORY HAS BEEN WRITTEN IN A DIFFERENT WAY" (or whatever I wrote there) was better and definitely more fun to make.

EDIT: Let me explain the villains and their intentions:

Echo works for Jetpack Man. They want to let MrShoe continue making bad updates and making players leave. Afterwards they kidnap Drykirby64 and tell him to go kill MrShoe. But he was just a distraction. Echo comes along and kills Drykirby64 and attempts to kill everyone because he assumed they were trying to kill MrShoe. But then plans change and Jetpack Man decides that it would be better to take over EE to make bad updates instead of relying on MrShoe. He kills Echo and then kills MrShoe.

Hope that makes things a bit more clear.

Last edited by skullz16 (May 5 2013 4:44:29 am)

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DryKirby

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

DRYKIRBY64: zzz...sti...mmn... Twenty Exty Six! zzz... So much...more...

Suddenly, DryKirby64 woke up and found himself in one of the EE City's many sewers.

DRYKIRBY64: Oh, hellno! They forgot about me! ...Again!

Another backhanded baseball bat to the head, courtesy of his mysterious assailant, knocked him unconscious and back to his drowsy mumbling.

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I'm just gonna leave this here and edit it out if skullz says so.

Last edited by DryKirby64 (May 4 2013 4:52:27 pm)

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Krazyman50

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Huh, so I only have 1 pointless line in the other story, and I don't even EXIST in the other story.
Typical...

skullz17

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Re: The greatest . . . story ever (Arceus64's story): THE SEQUEL

Huh, so I only have 1 pointless line in the other story, and I don't even EXIST in the other story.
Typical...

After people came out of the manhole or whatever that was at the beginning of the story, later on I forgot who came out and couldn't be bothered to go back and check. The whole manhole incident was only there to give people who weren't in the original story some kind of recognition in this story.

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