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Des

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pOrtal by Desmond

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWyQEAAA
Basically what I have made over 2 days.

(Follow the pink line for the play area)
(The Yellow Circles are puzzles, The first 2 are very easy, 3rd is difficult for new players, and the rest are quite hard.)
(Red areas I've covered are areas I wish to make more puzzles)
(Green area I've covered is the area I wish to make more art ("Valve", "Des" etc.))

What I plan to do next.
- Finish the "O" in "pOrtal"
- Finish the 8th Puzzle
- Create a noob area
- Bottom Right Corner, or Top Right Corner create a very detailed slice of cake (It is not a lie)
- ????

What I'm having problems with.
- Creating a NEW platform mini games/puzzles. (I'm sure we're all sick of horizontal jumping puzzles by now -_-)
- Some Art
NOTICE: If at any point my level reaches the highest played I will be paying for one of the people at the end of the room's (the cake) beta. So if you're at the cake when I pass [I want you win]'s play count, you could get a free beta!

Let's do this!

RT

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Very nice map. For the art help. are you trying to find new art to draw, or do you have trouble drawing it?

musuki

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Looks nice. I once made a map with some portal/momentum puzzles, but people tend to give up too easily with those kind of things.

Des

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Finding a nice piece of cake in 8-bit
A better looking button/companion cube. (I had to make them myself ><)
Probably some tweaks on the portal gun. Like instead of a case, a stand.

Des

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Looks nice. I once made a map with some portal/momentum puzzles, but people tend to give up too easily with those kind of things.

Give incentive and people will keep trying, things like making the early levels close to the really higher levels. If someone doesn't see anything that will make them interested in carrying on, they wont.

Right now, coins are literally nothing but querky bleep, don't litter your level with them to encourage.

That's about all you need to do to keep players from rage quitting.

Nou

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Joined: 2015-02-24

Posts: 2,762

Re: pOrtal by Desmond

"i will pay someone's beta if this rooms gets #1"

really?

apart from you being a cheap sell-out, the map is actually quite nice. it has a nice feel of exploration and some decent challenges in there

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No u.

Des

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

"i will pay someone's beta if this rooms gets #1"

really?

apart from you being a cheap sell-out, the map is actually quite nice. it has a nice feel of exploration and some decent challenges in there

That's funny way to spell generous.
I'm also guessing you haven't gotten to the endless E block lift yet xD (it's a place holder, don't worry guys)

Zap

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

I like the concept, but felt a little 2D.

robotnikfart

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Dude, you are AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love Portal.

capasha

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Joined: 2015-02-21

Posts: 4,066

Re: pOrtal by Desmond

The design is good, but the gameplay sucks.
All maps i have seen that have really "WOW" design, has always been crap to play.
I don't know why, maybe it's only the design that is needed.

Des

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Constructive feedback please, if you don't like it, that's fine; just back it up.

Fendox

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Onw thing, you changed the name to Justin Bieber land to get new players?
Please, don't do it again.
Have the real name.

Besides that, Its prettys cool, but still hard.

I got stuck on the third puzzle... >.<

Presz

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

:cool:dude nice lvl

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWKwIAAA

robotnikfart

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

But the cake is a lie.

Azarlak

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

It is?     :O

robotnikfart

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Yes... for now.

Portal 2: March 9, 2011

MageBomb

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Nice and easy level, passed it and made to the flag. What I didn't like is there are coins you can't get that inside squares, and the challenge with the E jumps, so annoying.

Flare

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Re: pOrtal by Desmond

Looks really nice, I'll give it a try.