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kitty45

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Cat

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWLYvrO5Rha0I <---- beta Any suggestions and the art cat. Oh and the bricks on the bottom are just someone I trapped.since I don't have chat and I have a 99% chance of never getting chat.Right now it is called Don't come in.Because the room is not ready.How can I improve on this   cat? Thanks in advance   http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWLYvrO5Rha0I sorry about first links <---- public

Last edited by kitkatt12 (Feb 26 2011 8:02:55 am)

Different55

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Joined: 2015-02-07

Posts: 16,575

Re: Cat

Um, if you want to share your world you need to click the share world button, and copy that link. You just linked the beta site. Not your world.

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BEE

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Joined: 2015-03-14

Posts: 1,679

Re: Cat

Well irst things first, if you have to label your drawings then they arent clear enough.

I like the view o it and it has great potential but it needsmore colors. I like the legs, its clear   which are behind and which in front, but keep in mind that cats have paws too, google a picture if you need an example.

Also, find a fur pattern o a cat you like. Brown cats are rarely ever fully one color brown, maybe add some variety in the fur.

I think the face is cute, but either the ears need to be layered like the legs, or the cat needs to be facing toward us with both eyes

let me know if you change it and ill review it again, and please bother me, if I dont respond within 24 hours its likely that I put you on Bee's "to do list that got left in her back pocket in her other jeans" =P

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kitty45

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Re: Cat

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWLYvrO5Rha0I updated