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Drsonic

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From: Earth

Joined: 2015-05-19

Posts: 186

Riddles! -on Mars :3

I'd like to introduce everyone to a new world I've created! It's called "Riddles! -on Mars :3"

This game has a mini-game integrated into it, while the main component of the game is a riddle game!
This world was just a plain on mars, then I transformed it into something out of this world!

I'd like you to try out this game, tell me what you think, what needs improving, and I'll try to make it better! (Possibly give me a WOOT if I did good) :3
*Note: I used to be VERY lazy when I joined EE, but now for some reason I'm coming out of the depths and showing my true nature. Weird. e_e (I wish I did earlier)

Beta link: http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWWBNbB9QobUI

Non-Beta link: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWWBNbB9QobUI

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tak4n

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Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 1,883

Re: Riddles! -on Mars :3

Please don't judge my criticism.

First of all the riddle was very easy to guess which caused a lot of people to get code which caused trolling. This is a very negative thing about the map.
Secondly the 'mini' is just basic platforming, nothing original.
Next, when you get to the top part, I hate when you have to lose to get a coin. I just really don't like it.
Finally, the shading/art is not very good. You could have at least shaded the Sand/Mars rock better.

Overall it feels like a person making his first map. I enjoyed getting magic coins and chatting with you. However I think that the level need improvements.

Last edited by tak4n (Jan 19 2013 2:32:14 am)

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Drsonic

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From: Earth

Joined: 2015-05-19

Posts: 186

Re: Riddles! -on Mars :3

I can make harder riddles next time, I just didn't feel the need for hard riddles due to the lack of players.

I can fix the top, so it suits your standards better.

Could you help me with the shading? I've never really been good at it. Also, I have no art in the game. Don't want any.

Thank you for the horrible honesty, I'll use it to cry in a corner and try and improve the game.

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tak4n

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Joined: 2015-02-17

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Re: Riddles! -on Mars :3

^Lol I am more of a mini maker, not artist sorry. My dad always tells me, you don't have to be the smartest person/best at something if you have someone who is smarter/better that can help. It doesn't seem like this world is a type of world that needs very good minis as the main point of it is the riddle. However if you can find a good artist/friend to help you then I am sure you can make the world better. Don't feel bad for my criticism, criticism is usually what makes players learn and get better.

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skullz17

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 6,699

Re: Riddles! -on Mars :3

How convenient that I should appear here. I am an artist.

So the way this works is that you chat the riddle? So it gets turned on/off I guess.

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Drsonic

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From: Earth

Joined: 2015-05-19

Posts: 186

Re: Riddles! -on Mars :3

I use Krock's Bot to type in the riddle at the top, on the minimap, then after a while I erase the question using the bot. (I don't /loadlevel, so people's coins can be saved.)
If there's a troll, I kick the troll and add him/her to my banned list.
If you chat, then you get to know what the answer was to the previous question.

I just need help with the shading. (Mars ground)

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