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Amanda1988

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First room made. Tell me what you think.

Tried to make it hard and a bit unique. Not yet done. All tested and possible.

Fourth challenge is the hardest so far but is possible! :O

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWvg3dylITbEI

ugotpwned

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Joined: 2015-02-16

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Re: First room made. Tell me what you think.

Very good for your "first level." I would suggest getting rid of the hooks for the gameplay. Also, if you plan on ever creating a larger, longer level i would suggest "actual" art compared to sprites such as smileys and flowers. After all, i would rather have crappy legit art than the best smileys.

Last edited by UgotPwned (Oct 21 2011 6:43:19 pm)

Amanda1988

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Re: First room made. Tell me what you think.

I'm saving for the "Great Saved World", once I get that I will take your advice and make the whole world look like one big picture. I was experimenting with Mario theme art and plan on making challenges around the "pictures".  

I also took out the second set of hook jumps and replaced it with a different challenge. I do like at least one hook jump in a level though if the level is supposed to be hard...

Thanks for the advice UgotPwned.

Last edited by Amanda1988 (Oct 21 2011 7:06:35 pm)

Tako

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From: Memphis, Tennessee, USA

Joined: 2015-08-10

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Re: First room made. Tell me what you think.

I'm impressed at your first level; most of these minigames are far better than the experienced players can make.

I stopped at this room, though:

I prefer games that take still rather than patience. :]

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Amanda1988

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Re: First room made. Tell me what you think.

Love the face.

C'mon I gave you the safety so you don't have to repeat it if you fail on the top one...

EDIT:
All hooks have been replaced.

Last edited by Amanda1988 (Oct 21 2011 8:08:01 pm)

noelzkie

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Re: First room made. Tell me what you think.

Is the last part really possible?

DKZero

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Re: First room made. Tell me what you think.

verry good for your first level!

ILoveBacon

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Re: First room made. Tell me what you think.

very good for your first level, the minis are verging between noob and pro, (do not use stairs ever) the art isn't the best and its sprite art, be free when making art! don't just copy something up pixel by pixel! maybe follow bees art tutorial, on the forums and on youtube! but the minis have to be a tiny bit harder to be a proper amateur pro (if that makes sense)

but very good for your first level! you past all my first level expectations! your on the right track!

Nou

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Joined: 2015-02-24

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Re: First room made. Tell me what you think.

As other said, not bad for a first level. The first few challenges appeared a bit nooby but they got better, pretty fun overall. And I found a nice pro spot, try to get there

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MrScaniaV8Super

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Re: First room made. Tell me what you think.

Yes, very nice room Amanda1988...especially when its your first room