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Lopoi2

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Hall of Horror XP

Hall of horror

Hall of horror
The first room of your end Beta

One screen for Everybody:

100% Tested
Now improved by the new colors.

BEE coments:

115. As I said before, it reminds me of beauty and the beast! Haha. It looks great, perspective is great and I love the window reflection on the floor. A few things. I mentioned before about that torch chilling there. I didnt know it was supposed to be on the floor, so a shadow would have helped. Also, the stairs look wonderful, but take into account the perspective. Even if you are looking straight on, your stairs will seem to get smaller as they get closer to your vanishing point. Looks great though. Those bricks mustve taken forever.

Special thanks to:
Fer22f
Riok
Jincookie
Lucas Melo (This don't play but helped a little)

And of course for all the crew:
Correiajoão
Redshade22
Nikk
Lopoi (me)

Last edited by Lopoi2 (Nov 9 2011 7:07:14 am)

Lopoi2

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

I'm not going to delete this. So, BUMP!

Yankeestar180

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

Scoring for HALL OF HOROR XP
ART
Staircase: 7/10 Looks kind of mushed together at the top, Good attempt at it though.
Walls: 9/10 Great job on these. You shaded the colors in well, and made the slant good. Great Job.
Paintings Middle: 7/10 The middle needs more detail, while the left needs some work.
Right Paintings: 8/10 Great job on the leftmost one, the bat one looks empty, but the castle one is good.
Doors: 7/10 They just need more shading, I recommend one more color in there.
Window: 8/10 Good Light on the floor. And the window just needs to lose the white streak. Looks awkward.
Small Paintings: 7/10 Try to avoid using black blocks for the eyes. Use Red keys or summer, blending it in better.

Overall: 7.5 Keep up the improvements!
MINIS
First Impression Mini: 6/10 The mini was good, but the secret blocks just ruined it.
Walls: 7/10 Very hard to see, but you made use of a colored space. It was good, but not for my eyes. And too easy to fall down.
Im tired now, ill update the rest soon.

EDIT:300th post

Last edited by Yankeestar180 (Nov 5 2011 9:45:11 am)

correiajoao

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

Thanks for your feedback! We go to re-update it!

redshade22

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

uhmm yeah good review

Lopoi2

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

Update with:

BEE coments:

115. As I said before, it reminds me of beauty and the beast! Haha. It looks great, perspective is great and I love the window reflection on the floor. A few things. I mentioned before about that torch chilling there. I didnt know it was supposed to be on the floor, so a shadow would have helped. Also, the stairs look wonderful, but take into account the perspective. Even if you are looking straight on, your stairs will seem to get smaller as they get closer to your vanishing point. Looks great though. Those bricks mustve taken forever.

Jeremiah

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

1. Cool map! 2. Like the name 3. You did awesome!

Lopoi2

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

Thanks for the coment

Lopoi2

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

Bump.

Valarik

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

I thought this was a great room!   The minis were challenging, yet not rage-quitty.  

Lopoi2

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

Thanks it was my aim to make not ragequite games, nor easy games.

Lopoi2

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Re: Hall of Horror XP

Bump I can do it