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Benje00

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From: BenjeLand

Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 587

Moon Lit Night

Hey, forum. ^^ I made another level.   I think it's overall easy; you should be able to finish it in about 10-15 minutes.

If you could rate my level out of 10 for minis, art, fun that would be great.  

(It's my first time making art.)

Level Picture:

Level Link: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWVkg_rqI5bEI

Thanks.

Last edited by Benje00 (Feb 29 2012 1:54:02 pm)

killeratz

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Re: Moon Lit Night

Nice

thecoolguy

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Joined: 2015-05-31

Posts: 289

Re: Moon Lit Night

Ok.
The minis were not really easy as you told in the description and i'd give them a 6.7/10.
Some of them were hard to understand or not even done, you were fixing one while i was there.
The art is not bad, but get the shading right. The clouds have shades on the side the moon is on.
Also the decreasing of the moonlight is like a troll, here is some large scale moonlight shade http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWYhLyjxPba0I
You should look at it.
For fun i'd give a 7, i liked most time in there.
Gj

Benje00

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From: BenjeLand

Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 587

Re: Moon Lit Night

Thanks for the feedback TCG.   Well, the minis are way easier if you know how to do them.   I guess I didn't really think of that.   Heh, I don't know what I was thinking with the shading.   And the moonlight was a troll; actually the whole level was a troll except for the clouds and moon.   Thanks for the link and I'll try to fix those items up.

Last edited by Benje00 (Feb 29 2012 3:08:05 pm)

DylanDaSkater

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Re: Moon Lit Night

The minis are original, but i dont like how there is much black bricks

Benje00

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From: BenjeLand

Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 587

Re: Moon Lit Night

Yeah, I hate using the black bricks.   I wish I could just use the original art.

DylanDaSkater

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Re: Moon Lit Night

OFF TOPIC: You have no chat but beta.. Why is this?

Benje00

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From: BenjeLand

Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 587

Re: Moon Lit Night

Eh, my dad just doesn't want me chatting with other people I don't know.   :rolleyes:   And I have beta because it was a Christmas gift.

thecoolguy

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Joined: 2015-05-31

Posts: 289

Re: Moon Lit Night

will i get rewarded for my good feedback?

*cough*rep*cough* *wink* *wink*

Last edited by thecoolguy (Feb 29 2012 3:50:06 pm)

Benje00

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From: BenjeLand

Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 587

Re: Moon Lit Night

will i get rewarded for my good feedback?

*cough*rep*cough* *wink* *wink*

Sure!   Since you gave me good I advice I think I'll give you... a cookie! Here!

Oh, and by the way, you should really get that cough taken care of; it sounds pretty bad.   And your eye is twitch/winking you should get that checked out as well.

thecoolguy

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Joined: 2015-05-31

Posts: 289

Re: Moon Lit Night

oh, yeah, ty, i think it is over after i ate that cookie, you should have some too

Gashley

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Re: Moon Lit Night

Not bad... just need practice, look at some of the art tutorials on the forum... they helped me big time

overall I rate this a 7/10

Well done!