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Sensei1

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From: The land of saunas

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 1,112

grassland

here is my first level: grassland

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWbSf9H4kObEI

I hope you like it

St Cool

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Re: grassland

No, just no this level is basically just like any other level. It has a mario pipe some grassblocks and underground blocks of space with some random tunnels in the air.

You will find on the forum people like level's that show artistic talent and originality, don't just copy what the person infront of you did make something new.

Muffin

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Re: grassland

I won!

It wasn't very good. It started out ok, but then it randomly jumped into uncreative box mini games. Normally the crown is saved until the end of the map, but I saw a few on the way that should have been blue coins instead. In a few spots there were big setbacks. Most players don't enjoy having to do something over and over and over again, and will probably cause a few rage quits.

I'd give this level a 2/10, but only because of the start and end. I hope that this was just your first level, and you won't keep making these over and over and over again.

Sensei1

Member

From: The land of saunas

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 1,112

Re: grassland

I'll try to make better, and learn from mistakes.
I'm quite sure that my next level is going to be better XD

St Cool

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Re: grassland

If you need any help with real art then i can teach you, I've been looking for an apprentice.

Muffy

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Re: grassland

Same here.

Sensei1

Member

From: The land of saunas

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 1,112

Re: grassland

A teacher would be cool. I always want to learn more XD
And specially art.

Last edited by Sensei1 (Mar 31 2012 3:31:37 am)