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Stagecrew

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Blue Tree

Blue Tree
By Ohho and Vous

Please post your feedback here!

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWnNWGtj1GbEI

Last edited by Stagecrew (Aug 28 2012 3:46:44 am)

Insanity

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From: Douchebag Island

Joined: 2015-03-07

Posts: 1,123

Re: Blue Tree

Well it's hard to give feedback when the level isn't really playable, but in terms of art, it looks nice. I liked the tree the most, but the sky and landscape could have improvement. Also, I'd like to add that the border for the picture was quite creative. The sky has a pretty decent transition in the middle, but adding some blue clouds, maybe a blue sun, would make it better. For the landscape, the blue dirt should look like, well, dirt. One can assume that it is dirt because there is a tree on it, however adding a few other shades would bring out the depth and contrast. Here is my critique:

Sky: 3.5/5
Tree: 4/5
Landscape: 3/5

Overall Art: 3.5/5

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Maverick: Started up on a 6, when he pulled from the clouds, and then I moved in above him.
Charlie: Well, if you were directly above him, how could you see him?
Maverick: Because I was inverted.

Stagecrew

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 289

Re: Blue Tree

Well it's hard to give feedback when the level isn't really playable, but in terms of art, it looks nice. I liked the tree the most, but the sky and landscape could have improvement. Also, I'd like to add that the border for the picture was quite creative. The sky has a pretty decent transition in the middle, but adding some blue clouds, maybe a blue sun, would make it better. For the landscape, the blue dirt should look like, well, dirt. One can assume that it is dirt because there is a tree on it, however adding a few other shades would bring out the depth and contrast. Here is my critique:

Sky: 3.5/5
Tree: 4/5
Landscape: 3/5

Overall Art: 3.5/5

I agreed with most of your suggestions and added some clouds and improved upon the landscape. However, I did not add a sun because when you look somewhere you do not always see the sun. Also, the problem with adding more shades is that I don't have the blocks for the other shades. Thanks for your feedback! You were quite helpful!

OfficialRyan

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Re: Blue Tree

looks good.

ADD MINIS, YO.

Saintcool

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Re: Blue Tree

I would have liked it fine being just art. But yeah its good, reminds me of shade of blue. :3

Stagecrew

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 289

Re: Blue Tree

Actually, you came while I was building minis... I'm not sure if I will keep them.
Off-topic-ish: I really liked a shade of blue! It was a great level.

Last edited by Stagecrew (Aug 27 2012 10:02:46 am)

BubexxD

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Re: Blue Tree

I'm win you know ;p

tzgermska

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Re: Blue Tree

i was the first winner ohho see that ohho (im germska)

and it is nice art realy nice work ^^

rep+

Last edited by tzgermska (Aug 27 2012 10:31:17 am)

SilverStar

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Joined: 2015-07-01

Posts: 541

Re: Blue Tree

Looks like nighttime. I like the shape of the roots.

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TheRealGtaa

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Re: Blue Tree

I like it nice

Laxboy

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Re: Blue Tree

Great level

Keep the minis for sure.

It is a fun, and quick level. +Rep

arteem

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Re: Blue Tree

Thanks everyone for posting feedback.

Deetz

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Re: Blue Tree

I really like this level, fun yet kind of tricky minis (you should definately keep them)

Art 10/10
Minis 8/10
Overall 9/10

Stagecrew

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 289

Re: Blue Tree

I really like this level, fun yet kind of tricky minis (you should definately keep them)

Art 10/10
Minis 8/10
Overall 9/10

Thanks! I've decided to keep the minis because they are generally liked.

denteza

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Re: Blue Tree

excellent level
+Rep

guynm

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Re: Blue Tree

wasy
fun: 10
minis:5
art:7
22\30

Arceus64

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Re: Blue Tree

Deetz

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Re: Blue Tree

Just won 6 times in a row

You saw me most of the times.

Arceus64

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Re: Blue Tree

Just won 6 times in a row

You saw me most of the times.

I approve of this post.

Stagecrew

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 289

Re: Blue Tree

Thanks for all your feedback on the level and positive comments!
Does anyone have more feedback on the art? (Like what I could change or add to it)

Last edited by Stagecrew (Aug 28 2012 8:54:07 am)

Michal

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Joined: 2017-07-04

Posts: 283

Re: Blue Tree

The level was wonderful like always.

Legoking2000

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Joined: 2015-04-19

Posts: 649

Re: Blue Tree

pretty easy, but the art is amazing

Stagecrew

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 289

Re: Blue Tree

pretty easy, but the art is amazing
http://i.imgur.com/iuYAc.png

Thanks! And yes, it is easy. The minis were meant to be easy and fun.

Polis

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Joined: 2015-02-23

Posts: 440

Re: Blue Tree

Great art + minis, Y u no make a bigger version of this. That would be cool
So uhm keep the work and hold on and blie bla blu

Saintcool

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Re: Blue Tree

I can use Polis' pic, yeah as I said before I love the art, reminds me of Shade, Minis were a tad easy. But they were good all the same.