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Blue Tree
By Ohho and Vous
Please post your feedback here!
Last edited by Stagecrew (Aug 28 2012 3:46:44 am)
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Well it's hard to give feedback when the level isn't really playable, but in terms of art, it looks nice. I liked the tree the most, but the sky and landscape could have improvement. Also, I'd like to add that the border for the picture was quite creative. The sky has a pretty decent transition in the middle, but adding some blue clouds, maybe a blue sun, would make it better. For the landscape, the blue dirt should look like, well, dirt. One can assume that it is dirt because there is a tree on it, however adding a few other shades would bring out the depth and contrast. Here is my critique:
Sky: 3.5/5
Tree: 4/5
Landscape: 3/5
Overall Art: 3.5/5
Maverick: Started up on a 6, when he pulled from the clouds, and then I moved in above him.
Charlie: Well, if you were directly above him, how could you see him?
Maverick: Because I was inverted.
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Well it's hard to give feedback when the level isn't really playable, but in terms of art, it looks nice. I liked the tree the most, but the sky and landscape could have improvement. Also, I'd like to add that the border for the picture was quite creative. The sky has a pretty decent transition in the middle, but adding some blue clouds, maybe a blue sun, would make it better. For the landscape, the blue dirt should look like, well, dirt. One can assume that it is dirt because there is a tree on it, however adding a few other shades would bring out the depth and contrast. Here is my critique:
Sky: 3.5/5
Tree: 4/5
Landscape: 3/5Overall Art: 3.5/5
I agreed with most of your suggestions and added some clouds and improved upon the landscape. However, I did not add a sun because when you look somewhere you do not always see the sun. Also, the problem with adding more shades is that I don't have the blocks for the other shades. Thanks for your feedback! You were quite helpful!
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looks good.
ADD MINIS, YO.
I would have liked it fine being just art. But yeah its good, reminds me of shade of blue. :3
Actually, you came while I was building minis... I'm not sure if I will keep them.
Off-topic-ish: I really liked a shade of blue! It was a great level.
Last edited by Stagecrew (Aug 27 2012 10:02:46 am)
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I'm win you know ;p
i was the first winner ohho see that ohho (im germska)
and it is nice art realy nice work ^^
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Last edited by tzgermska (Aug 27 2012 10:31:17 am)
Looks like nighttime. I like the shape of the roots.
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I like it nice
Great level
Keep the minis for sure.
It is a fun, and quick level. +Rep
Thanks everyone for posting feedback.
I really like this level, fun yet kind of tricky minis (you should definately keep them)
Art 10/10
Minis 8/10
Overall 9/10
I really like this level, fun yet kind of tricky minis (you should definately keep them)
Art 10/10
Minis 8/10
Overall 9/10
Thanks! I've decided to keep the minis because they are generally liked.
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excellent level
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wasy
fun: 10
minis:5
art:7
22\30
Just won 6 times in a row
You saw me most of the times.
Just won 6 times in a row
You saw me most of the times.
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Thanks for all your feedback on the level and positive comments!
Does anyone have more feedback on the art? (Like what I could change or add to it)
Last edited by Stagecrew (Aug 28 2012 8:54:07 am)
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The level was wonderful like always.
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pretty easy, but the art is amazing
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pretty easy, but the art is amazing
http://i.imgur.com/iuYAc.png
Thanks! And yes, it is easy. The minis were meant to be easy and fun.
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Great art + minis, Y u no make a bigger version of this. That would be cool
So uhm keep the work and hold on and blie bla blu
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I can use Polis' pic, yeah as I said before I love the art, reminds me of Shade, Minis were a tad easy. But they were good all the same.
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