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Legoking2000

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A Quest for Water

A level I made while the forums were down.   I hope you like it.

Water
Elixir

Winners *Tiralmo *D-rock2308 *ipwner * *

*Added a blue coin, box storage room.

Last edited by Ikaros (Nov 7 2012 9:18:53 pm)

D-rock2308

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Re: A Quest for Water

This world is good for minigames, but the ingame art killed. The houses at the start are eyerape and the clouds as well. Try using solid or basic blocks. Then the prison backgrounds are really bad for in game too and it kills. You should also either put the yellow brick background behind the crowns or remove the crowns and add a background there. I circled some of the places where the backgrounds should change and on the minimap the houses because they are bad looking in game.

Good though, for fun, but it would be tons better if those problems were fixed. These include checker backgrounds, prison background, treasure chest blocks, the new factory block with wires at the start, and you should put backgrounds behind one-ways and crowns because it shouldn't look black in game, it should look the same color as on the minimap right?

iPwner

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From: CaliforNYAN Land.

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Re: A Quest for Water

it was O K. the art was a bit mediocre as well. Also, the difficulty balance wasn't too relevant - it started out really hard, and got harder, until like a fourth through the level it was super easy from then on.. good luck next level, but this wasn't too bad like most levels! So...

5/10 !

also i won ;p.. add me to list ?

Last edited by ipwner (Nov 7 2012 9:03:28 pm)

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Codfoshie

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Re: A Quest for Water

Didn't like the eye rape background/decorations in the room to the side of the win,
However I won.
http://i48.tinypic.com/105ekd3.png

bliske

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Re: A Quest for Water

eye-rape so bad i left.

Legoking2000

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Joined: 2015-04-19

Posts: 649

Re: A Quest for Water

Comments-
I suck at ordering my mingames from easier to harder,
Eye-rape backgrounds contain great blending colors (so complain to Mr. Shoe about how the backgrounds look), and
This was a teaser map more along the lines to test art and blending schemes, not really a map I took forever to make.

Edit-This map is scheduled for deletion to make my second part in the gizmo lab series.

Last edited by Ikaros (Nov 8 2012 12:03:59 pm)