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Muftwin

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Do Not Abort

My sci-fi contest entry

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWumV_W_3gbkI

leave any feedback / suggested changes here

Mr. Force

Guest

Re: Do Not Abort

The story is amazing, the art could be better but i like it. In-game art is good too. The minis areeee....i'd say a 7/10
I didnt like 1 mini, but the others are good.
Nice job m8!

nlmdejonge

Member

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 1,264

Re: Do Not Abort

(mirror)

Had to replay it, because I first got a bad ending.

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I have permanently left the game and forum.
EE is an entertaining game and I enjoyed playing it...
...but it's time for me to move on.

skullz17

Member

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 6,699

Re: Do Not Abort

It's fun. Interesting story.

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thx for sig bobithan

Blackdeath

Member

Joined: 2015-03-12

Posts: 88

Re: Do Not Abort

Great map. I'm too lazy to post the win pic. I almost failed because i was just half of a block of fixing a leg .
I like the in-game art of a child. Minigames are cool. Very interesting story. Good idea with those comupters.

Pyromaniac

Official Caroler

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,868

Re: Do Not Abort

Well i got the wrong ending but it was good! I feel like the story could have been developed more, I know you're working with the signs which makes things tricky, but I just thought that the story was disconnected in parts (and there were a couple typos, but idk if that matters ^^)

I really liked it overall though,    

Last edited by Pyromaniac (Nov 24 2014 6:47:48 pm)

Kangxp

Member

From: Ponyville, Equestria

Joined: 2015-02-24

Posts: 587

Re: Do Not Abort

Circled in red are mistakes that the mirror did not reflect properly.

Also, just after I finished the mini before fixing the part, I disconnected. I had to cheat the game and get back to that area (also explains why I have a hologram smiley in the win area).

P.S: It's a bit strange why you would want to climb into an air vent out of boredom.

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derp
go watch mlp
everyone will be proud of u
just search "mlp sweep"

Muftwin

Guest

Re: Do Not Abort

thanks for informing me of those errors that area was renovated a fair bit and i wasnt careful enough fixing it i guess. anyways its fixed now.