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#1 2016-07-05 22:03:45

JohnnyCraig
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High on Colors

this is a world im working on some help please? - http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWaaGmM60ZcEI (you will get placed in credits if u help me.)


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#2 2016-07-05 22:46:25, last edited by Koya (2016-07-05 23:05:19)

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Re: High on Colors

Good job not using mineral blocks when talking about a world based on colour.

You have a good dot trail mini straight off, but then an exploit which you could fix by extending the red blocks downwards or the boosts upwards; the next minis are just non-existant, just an empty room with spikes in the corner, then unchallenging stairs.

My suggestions:
• group multiple colours together, rather than having red or blue minis make the walls rainbow or colour pairs that change fluidly.
• maintain a difficulty, make the colours distracting (makes the walls uneven) and make the minis fiddly
• don't allow your world to have obvious exploits


Edit: please do not put me in the credits.


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#3 2016-07-06 02:08:17

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Re: High on Colors

Koya wrote:

Good job not using mineral blocks when talking about a world based on colour.

You have a good dot trail mini straight off, but then an exploit which you could fix by extending the red blocks downwards or the boosts upwards; the next minis are just non-existant, just an empty room with spikes in the corner, then unchallenging stairs.

My suggestions:
• group multiple colours together, rather than having red or blue minis make the walls rainbow or colour pairs that change fluidly.
• maintain a difficulty, make the colours distracting (makes the walls uneven) and make the minis fiddly
• don't allow your world to have obvious exploits


Edit: please do not put me in the credits.

k thanks for the positive feedback and the suggestions


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