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code_man4000

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Feedback -- Escape the Lava Pits

I recently completed an "adventure" styled wide world, and opened it to the public. The first thing I noticed is that I had a lot of ragequitters in the first few "rooms" of my level and I cannot understand why.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWvNdYYFppa0I

Constructive criticism, misc feedback, and additional comments are welcome and encouraged; I wish to improve this level and make better levels in the future.

-CodeMan

Kaosslasher

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Re: Feedback -- Escape the Lava Pits

Ok, the art looks good, i will edit this post when im done mini's

[edit]:

Ok, i finished the minis and well...

Im not a big fan of hook jumps myself~

but here's my rating's

Art:7/10 ( the sand/gold needs a little something )

Mini: 3/10 Hook jumps, and most were easy/unoriginal

overall 5/10

BUT! this is one of those levels witch will get VERY popular

Last edited by kaosslasher (Feb 7 2011 3:08:31 pm)

code_man4000

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Re: Feedback -- Escape the Lava Pits

Thanks for the quick reply!

Im not a big fan of hook jumps myself~

I'll admit those were a bit hastily thrown in there as a filler, and I did overuse them. In hindsight including those was a bad idea, luckily they are easy to gimp/remove.

but here's my rating's

Art:7/10 ( the sand/gold needs a little something )

Mini: 3/10 Hook jumps, and most were easy/unoriginal

overall 5/10

BUT! this is one of those levels witch will get VERY popular

The focus of the level was a test to incorporate minis into a landscape styled world, so I was quickly making minis that were familiar to me and wouldn't be too hard(I guess I overcompensated a bit and made them too easy xD).

But now that I am sure that I can (successfully?) put minis in a landscape, the next thing I need to do is experiment with making new minis, this should be interesting. Back to the drawing board!
Thanks again
-CodeMan

D-rock2308

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Re: Feedback -- Escape the Lava Pits

Less hook jumps would be nice in your future   map. Theres my criticism of the day. You should feel lucky.