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polter

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first map: Caste (not finished)

Hi!

I'm new on the forum, but I have been playing EE for a while now.

Now I have made my own level for the very first time and I would like to have some feedback.

Here is the link:

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWP4ZUmIFoa0I

I have tried to make it different from all the other mini games maps. Have I tried but failed? It's your call.

So what do you think?

PS: Not finished.

Different55

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Joined: 2015-02-07

Posts: 16,577

Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

Pretty good.

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Gamer1120

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Joined: 2015-12-29

Posts: 2,659

Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

It's good, I really enjoyed the minis.

Tako

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From: Memphis, Tennessee, USA

Joined: 2015-08-10

Posts: 6,663

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Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

First, these mini-games are DA BOMB
And second, in the maze, if you don't collect 1 coin you end up trapped, like so:

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Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

polter

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Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

Thanks! I haven't seen that.

I will try to fix this as soon as possible. But for now I can't get past the "everybody edits" loading screen just like a lot of us.

robban39

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Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

the art was good but i like harder minis

Koto

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Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 3,269

Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

It's too easy to cheat on some of the minis, you need to fix up the level a bit, but besides that, it's not bad at all.

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Jojomanjo

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Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

Good I liked the art. It was amazing for a beginner.

supadorf24

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Joined: 2015-02-26

Posts: 2,675

Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

Wow, that's your first map? Nice job! You already had coin doors and the factory pack? Only suggestion: try to avoid hook jumps. If you do choose to use hook jumps, use them like you did in the first part of the level, where there's an optional way to bypass them. Can't wait to play this when it's finished!

polter

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Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

I have finished it now for a while, but I'm still busy with making some improvements. (Like the knights where i'm working on for better decoration)

What do you think?

( http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWP4ZUmIFoa0I )

(And a special thanks to the guy who wrote "polt" for me in the level. )

0176

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From: Brazil

Joined: 2021-09-05

Posts: 3,174

Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

That's EPIC for a first level o.o
Even I can't make that.

Cola1

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From: We will meet again as stars

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 3,281

Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

As soon as I saw the hook jumps I left.

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Cyclopsicle

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Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

*Jaw Drops*

Fir3Fli3

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Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

As soon as I saw the hook jumps I left.

Oh cmon. =.=
I'm getting so tired of this, ONE HOOKJUMP, IS THAT SO BAD?
Really, you go in a level, play some mini's, like it, and then.. 1 hookjump... OMG THIS SUCKS.

Hate that, what your doing. =.=

Anyways.. very good for your first level.

polter

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Re: first map: Caste (not finished)

All the hook jumps in the level are passable by alternative paths.