Kirby's Summer Contest Level Reviews

Kirby · 2016-07-11 09:01:14

Zoey said I could post a topic if I had more than 10 so here you guys go

Scoring system:
Gameplay /20
Difficulty /10
Theme /10
Creativity /10
Ingame art /10
Minimap /5
Enjoyment /5
Divided by 7
Difficulty and Theme are usually pretty easy points from me. Creativity can refer to how creative your minis are, concept is, or creative use of the theme. Whichever one you went for in your level, basically. Enjoyment is basically my personal opinion, a way for me to get some opinion points in without affecting the overall score too much.

Rankings (in no particular order)
1st place
200 summer minigames
Phat Roast Ducks
Sensei's Supercute Sunshine Sensation
Nobody Appreciates Novels Anymore
We Gonna Lose

2nd place
Trix RIP
Summer Savory
The Kingly Jesters
Gabriel Team
43jj~jj<

3rd place
Zero Is The Loneliest Number
Sticky
Dank Memes
Eggz
Fire Wolves

Honorable Mentions
Music Man
Through the Fire and the Ants
Fruit
Creative Team
Key to the Galaxy

▼Hi this was 19 pages in google docs so open at your own risk

Sensei’s Supercute Sunshine Sensation

Gameplay: 20
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 10
Creativity 10
Ingame Art 8
Minimap: 4
Enjoyment 4
Score: 9.4
Side notes: This was a very straightfoward level. The concept was simple, yet original, which was great, as there wasn’t much sign reading. The minimap art got a 4, because there was the occasional randomly not shaded part (the gray thing on the right), and it could’ve used a sun. Ingame art got an 8, which is the highest score I’ll probably give unless someone goes, like, all out, and that’s a focus of their level (Like badoosh’s levels). Overall, a very good map.

The bros

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GCrew

Gameplay: 10
Difficulty: 7
Theme: 8
Creativity 3
Ingame Art 5
Minimap: 2
Enjoyment 2
Score: 5.2
Side notes: It was just a minigame level. The minis started out nice, but they started to get worse. Some of them didn’t feel tested (like the boost one with the very long sign before it, and the last mini.) The second to last mini was just arrow and block spam, it looked lazy. The ingame art score is the lowest I’m going to give if the level is not eyerape. The theme still gets points because it’s sandy, which I guess is summer, but the level doesn’t really have anything to do with it. I would advise testing minis more, and if a mini takes you more than like, 20 tries to do, get rid of it. It’s better for a level to be too easy than too hard.

Zero Is The Loneliest Number

Gameplay 15
Difficulty 9
Theme 6
Creativity 8
Ingame art 9
Minimap 5
Enjoyment 3
Score: 7.8
Side notes: It was a nice level, though it didn’t feel very summery. The black background with the stars decoration almost reminded me of a winter level. The difficulty was pretty easy, but then at the 14th coin, there was a really tough jump. Ingame art got a 9 just because of that one checkered room (checkered blocks never work). Overall, a pretty nice level, but the theme could use some work

SWKD Summer Kidz!

Gameplay 8
Difficulty 3
Theme 10
Creativity 8
Ingame art 9
Minimap N/A
Enjoyment 1
Score: 6.3
Side notes: It was a nice idea (last day of school), but it was another story level. It was really… random at some parts (jump to listen to tree what). Crossing the ocean was… really difficult. Your difficulty got docked quite a bit for it. It was a nice concept, but it needed to be easier and… make more sense.

Music Man

Gameplay: 15
Difficulty: 5
Theme: 10
Creativity: 5
Ingame art: 10
Minimap: 4
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 7.7
It was a nice level, but it was WAY too easy. This is something you could’ve entered for the spring contest and the difficulty would’ve been acceptable. If a level is too easy, I’ll give 5 points for difficulty, as it’s better to be too easy than too hard. Creativity was marked down slightly because it is just a coinhunt (along with gameplay). Enjoyment remains at a 5, though, because it is still an enjoyable level.

Peace and Bahar

VISFALSE

Trix RIP

Gameplay: 19
Difficulty: 8
Theme: 6
Creativity: 9
Ingame art: 9
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 8.7
Side notes:Another NSFW world. It has the classic style of mini, nice art, something you would expect. In terms of summer, it’s a little… off. Having some sand and a sunset doesn’t make it feel summery, which is why the theme was marked down slightly. The difficulty was a little hard, but not as hard as people are saying tbh. Creativity was marked down (very slightly), because it’s kinda an odyssey ripoff tbh. Regardless, It’s still a nice level, and the score reflects that.

The Defenestrators

IPWNEREVIEW:
Gameplay: 15
Difficulty: 9
Theme: 8
Creativity: 10
Ingame art: 5
Minimap: 4
Enjoyment: 3
Score: 7.7
Side notes: I applaud this team for trying something new… the result however turned out okay, not great. The segments where you went underwater were annoying at first because of how little time you got in addition to the extremely fast motion and accidentally going above water, but once you got your first upgrade (which can be somewhat tedious) the gameplay improves drastically. There are accessible little areas which let you play minis for blue coins, which I truly enjoyed, and wish there were more of. Unlocking all the blue coins is simply a joy. However, the gameplay takes a stark turn above water…. Above water there are these wave sections that are almost totally luckbased and you have very little control, and originally you needed all of them to beat the level; thankfully that is no longer needed. It still seems like the waves are a wasted opportunity however, because they are an annoyance at best, and once you fall to the bottom of the waves you cannot ride the waves again which is frustrating. As for the art I like what they were doing, the only thing was that the orange color gave me the feel of being in this long neverending summer day; the feeling of tedium. However it was very nice on minimap and looked ok-ish ingame too. I had trouble having fun at first but this is really a level you need to LEARN to have fun on… kind of like in those Learn to Fly games, they’re only fun if you really get into them. So overall it was a bit overwhelming (WAVES SUCK) but I liked that they tried to do something new and the result was good, albeit not great.

wmX10

Gameplay: 10
Difficulty: 8
Theme: 7
Creativity: 10
Ingame art: 6
Minimap: N/A
Enjoyment: 1
Score: 5.5
Side notes: This level felt… unfinished. It was very empty, and the instructions were very unclear. Though the concept was neat, it wasn’t very practical at all. It wasnt like “oh hey, lets see the sights and have some fun!” as much as “hit 3 switches, go back. Rinse. Repeat”. There’s not very much to it. That being said, if it was like, an ultra wide, and you made the ingame art like REALLY cool, like bee’s pretty how town or something, The concept would have felt better, as it could’ve felt like you were actually vacationing and seeing the pretty sights.

The Fearless Five

Gameplay: 10
Difficulty: 7
Theme: 10
Creativity: 5
Ingame art: 0
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 1
Score: 5.4
Side notes: DEAR GOD EYERAPE. Carnival BG is a nono. Try using colors that are 1 constant color, like canvas, or the normal backgrounds. Almost all the backgrounds in the carnival pack are complete eyerape. The minis aren’t anything special either, just some regular jumps, with the occasional pretty hard challenge (difficulty curve didn’t seem to exist). If the carnival BG wasn’t there, your level would’ve gotten a MUCH higher score.

Jakub321 and the Nublets

Gameplay: 5
Difficulty: 5
Theme: 8
Creativity: 5
Ingame art: 2
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 1
Score: 4.4
Side Notes: That was eyerape. I would’ve put a 0 for ingame art, if the clouds weren’t okay to look at ingame. Inside the castle was horrible though. The minigames were nothing special again, just some jumps with arrows. There was the occasional hard mini (lack of difficulty curve), but when the mini was hard, it was annoyingly difficult. Try not to sacrifice how it looks ingame for minimap art.

Sticky

Gamplay: 17
Difficulty: 8
Theme: 8
Creativity: 8
Ingame art: 6
Minimap: 3
Enjoyment: 4
Score: 7.8
Side notes: Overall a nice level. The minis were nice, they flowed pretty well, and the difficulty curve was pretty good. I enjoyed it. The theme would’ve been a 10, though, if you made the mountain include a bit more sand instead of grass, to make it look a bit more beachy/summery. Ingame was dropped a bit due to the white bg’s looking almost identical to the gray bricks near the start of the level.

Dank Memes

Gameplay: 16
Difficulty: 7
Theme: 9
Creativity: 9
Ingame art: 7
Minimap: 4
Enjoyment: 3
Score: 7.8
Side notes: Nice level, the minis flowed nicely. The background felt a little awkward, which is why the ingame art score was decreased a little bit. The gameplay was ok, some minis near the end just didn’t flow well. I feel like the quality of the minis gradually decreased, as the difficulty increased (second part is good, difficulty curve). I felt like switches weren’t necessary though, and you could’ve used coins instead.

guy

Gameplay: 12
Difficulty: 9
Theme: 1
Creativity: 8
Ingame art: 7
Minimap: N/A
Enjoyment: 3
Score: 6.0
Side notes: This did not feel summery at all. Most of it was indoors, so that didn’t help. The minis were pretty nice, they flowed pretty nicely. I was kinda annoyed how you didn’t fill the empty space with black blocks (you didn’t get marked down for it, it was just a little annoyance). It was kinda odd how the trials were harder than the rest of the level, you should make them easier to keep a difficulty curve going. Overall a pretty good level, but if I was disqualifying I probably would make sure you didn’t get 1st due to lack of summer. The hat thing was dumb though.

Pizza

Gameplay: 13
Difficulty: 3
Theme: 8
Creativity: 5
Ingame art: 7
Minimap: 4
Enjoyment: 2
Score: 6.0
Side notes: This level was ok. Didn’t feel all that summery though, you should’ve used sand instead of dirt I guess. The minis got really difficult, with some pixel perfect jumps. As for ingame art, there wasn’t really anything special there. This level was alright, if you nerfed like 90% of the minis it would’ve gotten a much better score.

Fire Wolves

Gameplay: 15
Difficulty: 6
Theme: 4
Creativity: 10
Ingame art: 7
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 7.3
Side notes: That was actually not bad. It was pretty cool to go through all the different tasks that the jobs had you do, which is a bit different than your average story level. The absolutely horrendous grammar on the signs was hilarious too. Minimap was pretty good, ingame was ok, and overall it was a pretty decent map. Some of the minis were pretty difficult though, I would make them flow better (like the ice mini, that one was very nice)

The campaign masters

Gameplay: 8
Difficulty: 7
Theme: 6
Creativity: 10
Ingame art: 7
Minimap: N/A
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 6.6
Side notes: wat

Torbes and his…

Gameplay: 15
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 0
Creativity: 9
Ingame art: 8
Minimap: N/A
Enjoyment: 4
Score: 7.1
Side notes: Though that score is good, you’d get disqualified for lack of theme. It did not feel like a summer level at all. It was a neat level, but summer is like, bright, beach, water, ice cream. Not jungle shipwreck survival etc.

The Plebs

Gameplay: 5
Difficulty: 3
Theme: 5
Creativity: 2
Ingame art: 5
Minimap: 2
Enjoyment: 1
Score: 3.3
Side notes: God, I really hate giving scores this low, but this level needed work. The minigames were very uncreative, with mazes, hookjumps, edge jumps, stalactites, etc. The minis were also pretty hard. The unoriginal difficult minis brought down your creativity and gameplay scores quite a bit. Minimap was… bad. The random waterfall looks so random. If only the mini were easier, and more original...

200 Summer Minigames

Gameplay: 19
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 10
Creativity: 10
Ingame art: 10
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 9.9
Side notes: pele blocks like 80% of my attacks wtf

TheSurv$

Gameplay: 8
Difficulty: 0
Theme: 7
Creativity: 6
Ingame art: 8iat don’t really help you with the level, they are just there to be there. The difficulty was also WAY too high (especially at the forest part). I would disqualify this one if I was an actual judge.
^hi sorry that review got messed up I guess it somehow got deleted, but I don't want to go back and redo it. Difficulty was way too hard, so it'd've been DQ'ed anyway

Happyeditor

Gameplay: 19
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 10
Creativity: 8
Ingame art: 7
Minimap: 3
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 6.9
Side notes: This was a very fun level. The minis flowed very nicely, and the difficulty was reasonable. The minimap art and ingame was meh, but it wasn’t eyerape, so that’s ok. Nicely done. Edit: marked down your score 1 point because you can get trapped . Edit2: you can skip half of the level too so marked it down again D:.

The Nubs

Gameplay: 6
Difficulty: 0
Theme: 9
Creativity: 8
Ingame art: 4
Minimap: 4
Enjoyment: 2
Score: 4.7
Side notes: The white and black contrast between the sand and the windows really hurt my eyes. The minis were pretty annoying, with annoying fallback and a lot of boost movement. One of the minis, after like 20 minutes of trying, I just gave up on. It didn’t seem possible at all, and if it was, it was with some very unclear path.

We Gonna Lose

Gameplay: 17
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 9
Creativity: 8
Ingame art: 8
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 4
Score: 8.7
Side notes: Nice world. The gameplay is consistent, there is the occasional “meh” mini, but nothing too bad. Not much else I can say about this level, as you didn’t really do anything “wrong”, that I can give suggestions to improve.

The Turbo Builders

Gameplay: 7
Difficulty: 2
Theme: 7
Creativity: 5
Ingame art: 6
Minimap: 2
Enjoyment: 1
Score: 4.3
Side notes: God that was hard. Please nerf everything. Everything else was fine, but the minis were way too hard.

Eggz

Gameplay: 17
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 2
Creativity: 6
Ingame art: 7
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 7.4
Side notes: This level would’ve been disqualified, were I a judge. It didn’t have any summer in it in my eyes. That being said, it was still a very nice level. Short and sweet, nice minis, nice art, etc. I just wish it looked a bit more like summer.

Elite Artists

IPWNEREVIEW:
This level simply blew me away. Consider me born again -- fresh. Into my life ushered in a new era of sheer magnitudiousial impromptu, of spectaculous, unobstructed qualaphonia, of unmitigated, raw,
matrimonial proportion.

….Matrimonial CRAP proportionnnnnnnn BABYYYY!!!!

….Yeah, much isn’t needed to be said about this level (so why even use the grading system?)... it’s a carbon-copy of their previous level plus more layered unnecessary shenanigans much like a woman’s face that is layered, relayered, and triple-decked with thousands upon thousands of cancerous creams and facial make-ups that would make the original mice that occupied our humble earth spin and twirl roundabout their cutey-sized graves; it really tries to be something new, but when you pick off these sun-dried, crinkly, and frankly low quality L’Oreal encrusted doos, you’ll see that it is a clone of the already awful entry that came before!-- so basically it is their spring contest entry except a little worse (see, told you I’d keep it short, after all this whole review is just one sentence ;O)... I believe I gave the spring contest entry a 3/10, so I’ll give this one a 2.5/10!

The Megatronz

IPWNEREVIEW:
Gameplay: 3
Difficulty: 6
Theme: 4
Creativity: 3
Ingame: 2
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 2
Score: 3.7
Side notes: Let me start off by saying the minimap is phenomenal. And I wanted to start there because, well, there’s not really anywhere to go forward from the start because from here on out we’ll only be going backwards. I’m not joking -- it’s really...that… bad. Think of this level like some shady businessman: he hands you this wonderful postcard and tells you about how great this vacation spot is. Then, when you actually get to the place, it’s the bloody Pacific War. That’s essentially what this level is; it tries to make you think it’s good by having a marvelous minimap when in reality the gameplay is just a sack of complete and utter garbanzo baked *PUM*. This level is essentially a dumb blonde, with no interesting personality or backtraits or gameplay to be seen and the only appeal are it’s visual a e s t h e t i c s. It’s shameworthy to meagerly SLAP your half-processed arrow OATMEAL and just BLORP it all over your crappy art, sorry to say! ;( If you wanted to go with the 3d-art look, at least don’t make me look at it ingame, considering how awful it looks - honestly if I got a snapshot of the ingame look I would have trouble finding a snapshot of sewage and NOT mixing the two up. Maybe you could separate all this minimap shizz into one corner of the minimap, and then have quality and fitting gameplay in the other? You can still feel as though you’ve made this beautiful Michelangelo and still have some nice gameplay with fitting ingame art to top it off! Also, another detractor from the level were the golden drops… they were littered throughout this playable landfill and you need to pick up ALL OF THEM to beat the level; it takes the average person over 1 hour and 30 minutes to beat this level, which is a huge bukaka in the jardin at least from my perspective! If one word could sum this up, it’s that this level is Peena and the Rose 2: cliche storyline and arrowminis except this time instead of the main gameplay feature being traversing up dark, ominously endless towers of signs, the main feature is aimlessly wandering through the swamp of arrows and confusion, repeating the same minis over and over merely in the pursuit of golden raindrops. The best way to describe it is in sonatic form as Smitty Washingburry put it; “it goes on and on, and on, and on, my frieeeeeends… ohhh you know it goes on and on and on and on and on and on and on.”. This is exactly how you will feel in this labryinth of burbling arrow dhiarrheum and bomboozlingly cryptic “relic quests”. Can I also mention that this will probably get 1st place again? We all know the overly expensive toop-badoosh combomeal ADORES boring stories about monotonous incidents in nonexistant yet somehow more unimaginative than life streets of boring day life that have awkward dialogue and maybe have a little “~TWIST~” like SOMEBODY DYING!! *gasp* A story is automatically deep if SOMEBODY DIES, guys!! and automatically deserves first place prize did you know that I think you knew that NOT!!!! Anywho, I still have like 2-3 more pages of stuff to say but at this rate I am never going to get to bed, and I didn’t want to make this so damn long, but it appears I already did ...so basically my advice to you is to STOP. just stop. plz. ;-; im begging u

43jj~jj<

Gameplay: 14
Difficulty: 8
Theme: 10
Creativity: 8
Ingame: 6
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 8.0
Side notes: Dude the minimap on this level is so rad yo. Definitely the best minimap out of all the contest entries. The minis are ehh. None of them were particularly, well, good, but none of them were bad either. Still a pretty good level nonetheless.

Creative Team

Gameplay: 15
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 10
Creativity: 4
Ingame: 6
Minimap: 3
Enjoyment: 2
Score: 7.1
Side notes: It was an ok level I guess. Not much else to say here.

Sigma Crew

VISIBLE FALSE

Unnamed

Yeah sorry this is the only level I really didn’t want to review. I hate signs. Go to 12345678908642's docs, he probably has a good review on it

MLG Editz

Gameplay: 10
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 7
Creativity: 5
Ingame: 8
Minimap: 3
Enjoyment: 2
Score: 6.4
Side notes: The level was pretty meh. The switch mini was pretty boring, and it was just another minigame level with some useless signs, like most of the other contest entries are.

The GRULMs

Gameplay: 8
Difficulty: 3
Theme: 3
Creativity: 4
Ingame: 2
Minimap: 3
Enjoyment: 1
Score: 4.0
Side notes: This level would get disqualified. It was way too hard, you wouldn’t be able to get anywhere without the signs that you had to place every. Single. Minigame. The level didn’t even look summer themed, but spring themed (with the dirt in crops). Half of the level was eyerape, the minigames didn’t make any sense, and it didn’t help that you were teleporting me around while I was trying to play.

Summer Savory

Gameplay: 17
Difficulty: 7
Theme: 7
Creativity: 10
Ingame: 9
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 4
Score: 8.4
Side notes: Nice level. The concept was pretty original, and it was pretty well made. The difficulty was marked down a bit because the level was pretty easy tbh, and the theme was marked down because idk when I think of summer I don’t think of mountains/forests.

Through the Fire and the Ants

Gameplay: 16
Difficulty: 8
Theme: 5
Creativity: 7
Ingame: 7
Minimap: N/A
Enjoyment: 4
Score: 7.2
Side notes: Short level. The few minigames that the level did have were nice, though the concept was a little off. Could you not think of anything else to use than… easter eggs? If you had a different object to search for your score would’ve gone up a bit.

Fruit

Gameplay: 10
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 10
Creativity: 5
Ingame: 10
Minimap: 4
Enjoyment: 1
Score: 7.1
Side notes: It’s a glorified coin hunt. That’s… that’s really all there is to it.

Toasted Spicy Ding

Gameplay: 12
Difficulty: 6
Theme: 7
Creativity: 4
Ingame: 9
Minimap: 3
Enjoyment: 2
Score: 6.1
Side notes: What is it with all these story levels? These signs don’t help you beat the level at all, and the “story” if you want to call it that is super boring. If you’re gonna make a story level, better be a 10/10 writer. Minis weren’t anything special, a bit difficult at times, which marked that down a bit. This level would’ve done fine if there wasn’t a single sign in the level. Why signs.

Phat Roast Ducks

Gameplay: 18
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 10
Creativity: 10
Ingame: 9
Minimap: 4
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 9.4
Side notes: perf yo

The Kingly Jesters

Gameplay: 17
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 10
Creativity: 6
Ingame: 6
Minimap: 5
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 8.4
Side notes: That was… better than I thought it was going to be. I was expecting signspam and trashy, eyerape minigames, but I was pleasantly surprised when I saw backgrounds that weren’t stupidly eyerape, minigames that flowed nicely, and very few signs. Nicely done.

Gabriel Team

Gameplay: 17
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 8
Creativity: 7
Ingame: 7
Minimap: 3
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 8.1
Side notes: That was actually a very nice level. The challenges were nice, it was a “story” level without signspam, which is good because signspam makes me want to kill myself, and the grammar on the signs were absolutely hilarious. In all honesty though, this was a well made level. Well done.

Nobody Appreciates Novels Anymore

Gameplay: 20
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 9
Creativity: 10
Ingame: 10
Minimap: N/A
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 9.9
Side notes: Simply a wonderful level. Super duper underwater part lost 1 theme point, but other than that it was amazing. Definitely worthy of first place.

Key to the Galaxy

Gameplay: 16
Difficulty: 10
Theme: 6
Creativity: 5
Ingame: 5
Minimap: 3
Enjoyment: 5
Score: 7.1
Side notes: This level was pretty good. I was honestly expecting signspam, because from looking at the map it looks like thats something that would happen, but I was pleasantly surprised when I found minis, and pretty good ones too. They flowed nicely, and they didn’t need hint flowers or signs telling you what to do. I do have to say, though, If you are gonna make your entire map focusing on minimap art… the art has to be good. Your minis are so much better than your art (that’s a compliment), I think you should showcase them and make simple art around it in the future. Regardless, nice world.

Svabci

Gameplay: 4
Difficulty: 3
Theme: 2
Creativity: 4
Ingame: 5
Minimap: 3
Enjoyment: 1
Score: 3.1
Side notes: The minis were bad, they were hard, and after beating the entire level I got sent back to the start. What a waste of time.

Maybe this time?

Nope, not this time, sorry bud. You get trapped when you try to get some ice cream.

Pug Builders

Gameplay: 6
Difficulty: 5
Theme: 10
Creativity: 4
Ingame; 5
Minimap: 2
Enjoyment: 3
Score: 4.0
Side notes: That felt really unfinished, I beat the level in like 3 minutes and exploited the last mini (I think? Couldn’t really tell). I also accidentally missed one of the coins, and it got me trapped, so I marked off 1 point.

realmaster42, The Living SticK, TaskManager, iPwner, Swarth100, Luka504, Raven

Slabdrill · 2016-07-11 16:24:14

for key to the galaxy:
As I helped a lot in the level, I can say that the minis were made around the art, and I'm surprised they're not all super terrible.

Jorc · 2016-07-11 17:34:23

Also. Fire wolves was completely done. Review our FW world again.
We are allowed until today, toop told us ok. so today is last day of building.
k? K???? K!!!?!?!

Slabdrill · 2016-07-11 18:09:49

IamJoranasC wrote:

Also. Fire wolves was completely done. Review our FW world again.
We are allowed until today, toop told us ok. so today is last day of building.
k? K???? K!!!?!?!

they beat the world when they reviewed it, i was there with them.

Jorc · 2016-07-11 18:15:57

12345678908642 wrote:

IamJoranasC wrote:
Also. Fire wolves was completely done. Review our FW world again.
We are allowed until today, toop told us ok. so today is last day of building.
k? K???? K!!!?!?!
they beat the world when they reviewed it, i was there with them.

When did you review them? Also today was completely done. right now.

Slabdrill · 2016-07-11 18:23:48

IamJoranasC wrote:

12345678908642 wrote:
IamJoranasC wrote:
Also. Fire wolves was completely done. Review our FW world again.
We are allowed until today, toop told us ok. so today is last day of building.
k? K???? K!!!?!?!
they beat the world when they reviewed it, i was there with them.
When did you review them? Also today was completely done. right now.

first, you're not allowed to update the world after the submission date, and second, after the submission date.

iPwner · 2016-07-11 18:31:18

By the hay, I wrote 3 reviews here. ;3 Simply Ctrl-F "IPWNEREVIEW" (not IPWNERREVIEW) to read them. The 3rd review I wrote is the most acrylic in my earnest view.

Sidenote: Also, Kirby replaced N UGHTY W RDS with kindergarden-level ouchie words, so when you read "crap" or "crappy" just replace it with the word we all know I actually meant to say. (Unless you are under the age of 2 months developant in the womb because you wouldn't know these words and that's why mods can't ban me for making this suggestion to you all isn't that right mods? :3)

Kirby

Jorc · 2016-07-11 19:00:00

12345678908642 wrote:

IamJoranasC wrote:
12345678908642 wrote:
IamJoranasC wrote:
Also. Fire wolves was completely done. Review our FW world again.
We are allowed until today, toop told us ok. so today is last day of building.
k? K???? K!!!?!?!
they beat the world when they reviewed it, i was there with them.
When did you review them? Also today was completely done. right now.
first, you're not allowed to update the world after the submission date, and second, after the submission date.

You don't understand. We can build only today. Toop said. If captain of our team banned 3 days. then he gives us time after submission. That's how. And toop is very fair judger.

Luka504 · 2016-07-11 21:15:44

Ipwner's reviews legit made me laugh
Nice reviews guys!

Latif · 2016-07-11 21:49:34

Kirby wrote:

The Turbo Builders
Gameplay: 7
Difficulty: 2
Theme: 7
Creativity: 5
Ingame art: 6
Minimap: 2
Enjoyment: 1
Score: 4.3
Side notes: God that was hard. Please nerf everything. Everything else was fine, but the minis were way too hard.

Wow my world is really bad
Thanks! Now I know I won't win!
Next time better... *sigh*

Click here to play my world (if you want..)

What's the difficulty of my world? Medium-Hard?

skullz17 · 2016-07-11 22:44:10

While my level did not feel summery, it was undoubtedly summer themed. The basic structure of a story is that the characters are presented with a problem, and they must overcome it. In my story, the problem was the draught. And the draught was caused by the hot, dry weather - an attribute of summer. I made it clear that the draught was caused by summer. So we can say the the problem in my story was summer, and the task was to overcome the problems that summer brought to the country. When summer is such a large part of the story, I do not see how you can doubt whether it is summer themed. However, I do understand why you say it doesn't feel summery.

This brings up an interesting question. What matters more when you are building a summer themed level? Whether the events/story of the level have anything to do with summer? Or whether the mood and atmosphere of the level matches summer? For example, the level could be set on a sunny day at the beach, which would feel very summery, but what if it was actually May? On the other hand, you could also have a level like mine which was all about summer, yet it does not convey the atmosphere of summer very well.

matthewapril15 · 2016-07-12 19:09:41

Kirby it suppose to be like that and please don't make this like oh this person is better it seems unfair and sad and btw the world said get all blue coins and it should be like that cause 1 person left 2 germ was not on and help on some 3 Idc now cause to me it was a bad contest in my opium cause I did some all of the work and stuff its just like ugh :/

abdull1 · 2016-07-12 20:29:14

Kirby: Our lvl is awesome,dont be lazy,go and read signs -.-(if you werent too lazy to write all of this ,how can u not review our lvl )

Emma333

Kirby · 2016-07-12 20:34:22

abdull1 wrote:

Kirby: Our lvl is awesome,dont be lazy,go and read signs -.-(if you werent too lazy to write all of this ,how can u not review our lvl )

because story levels are trash and it said in the rules that they were discouraged

abdull1 · 2016-07-12 21:12:38

Kirby : So...you mean that story time campaign , spring campaign and endeavor is a trash?Becouse their lvls have stories

Jorc, jonhvictor2004sonic

Jorc · 2016-07-12 21:21:41

abdull1 wrote:

Kirby : So...you mean that story time campaign , spring campaign and endeavor is a trash?Becouse their lvls have stories

That's very true. Stories is very similiar to movie in EE. But i really like story worlds. i feeling boring without story.
World without story (with perfect mini) = 7-8/10.
Because i like stories :3
And that's bit not fair.

abdull1

Luka504 · 2016-07-12 21:34:28

IamJoranasC wrote:

abdull1 wrote:
Kirby : So...you mean that story time campaign , spring campaign and endeavor is a trash?Becouse their lvls have stories
That's very true. Stories is very similiar to movie in EE. But i really like story worlds. i feeling boring without story.
World without story (with perfect mini) = 7-8/10.
Because i like stories :3
And that's bit not fair.

Now as a (unnofical) reviewer myself im gonna say this:
In every game you play, gameplay should be the most important aspect.
Maybe the world just wanted to be a classical world with no story other than ,,Get to the End,,
While i do agree that a story world would rank higher than non-story worlds (If done correctly), but to halt from a perfect score just beacuse they didnt write a story?

Also abdul your world cant really be classified as a story world, since in my opinion Interactive gameplay =/= Story.
The ,,story,, of your world is just to get to the beach at the end, while along the way you talk with a few people.
The reason both i marked it down is beacuse the gameplay had some dumb minigames which force you to be precise and the fact how its barely even flipping summer.

Slabdrill · 2016-07-12 21:43:30

btw, for Unnamed here was my review, since you told people to check out mine

33) Unnamed
Gameplay: 5
Theme: 7
Creativity: 4
Ingame art: 4
Minimap: 3
Score: 2.6
Side notes: I quit at a mini that required a pixel perfect jump. Combined with how it’s a story level (sorta), I didn’t want to continue playing.

Kirby · 2016-07-12 21:49:44

abdull1 wrote:

Kirby : So...you mean that story time campaign , spring campaign and endeavor is a trash?Becouse their lvls have stories

yep

Luka504 · 2016-07-12 21:56:11

abdull1 wrote:

Kirby : So...you mean that story time campaign , spring campaign and endeavor is a trash?Becouse their lvls have stories

Story time campaings either have an actual story or are a point n click type of game.
Spring campaign? Phina and the Rose? That one had some actual minigames and an actual story and some interactive gameplay.
Enderavor is pretty much the same as Phina and the Rose just.... Harder. And with no interactivity.

skullz17 · 2016-07-12 22:01:11

Endeavour is probably one of my favourite levels in EE. Personally I don't mind story levels, it's just annoying when they have loads of signs to read in a row, and not enough gameplay in between. I think Endeavour did it well. It just introduced you to the task with some signs, then you did the task (almost all gameplay and 0 signs), then you got an ending with some more signs.

Kirby · 2016-07-12 22:03:03

skullz17 wrote:

Endeavour is probably one of my favourite levels in EE. Personally I don't mind story levels, it's just annoying when they have loads of signs to read in a row, and not enough gameplay in between. I think Endeavour did it well. It just introduced you to the task with some signs, then you did the task (almost all gameplay and 0 signs), then you got an ending with some more signs.

well yeah, endeavor is mainly gameplay. I dont dislike that level as much, because if you wanna know where to go next, theres legit an area that tells you (in 1 sign) where to go, instead of story levels that have 10 signs in a row that make it vague wtf you need to do

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