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#2 Before February 2015

Raon
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Joined: 2015-02-17
Posts: 491

Re: My Worlds

Welcome aboard! 1bigsmile1

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#3 Before February 2015

Fdoou
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Re: My Worlds

Hello! Welcome to the forum! Let me tell you what I think of each of your worlds.

1: Cute music world. Try to limit the smiley art.
2: ON GOD TAKE THAT DOWN THAT HAS UR ACC INFO NEVER GIVE THAT OUT DHJKHJYHTFRYHRFTH
3: No one likes traps. Sorry.
4: Very basic, even undersized boss.
5: Another boss. VNrAE.png Be more creative.
6: These minis are not original. Please make minis you have never seen before.
7: Typical secret path with nothing special. I like the name though.
8: Magic coin afks don't work, and no one likes them.
9: Here at the forum, we don't like pixel art.
10: I'm not sure what AGOU is, but the world makes no sense.
11: Redlands? Interesting. The thing is, the concept is boring. If you try and make some original things, "redlands" could be a great series. 1smile1
12: Now, this is an improvement! Original minigames! Please don't use the secret bricks next time.
13: I like the original concept. //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile
14: Greenlands? Intersting. Not very fun though.

OVERALL: Welcome to everybody edits! My recommendation for you is to stray away from the stuff other people make, and be a bit more creative with your levels.

#4 Before February 2015

Alynee
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Re: My Worlds

Welcome to the forums...Read the rules and GIVE ME + REP Have Fun : )

Last edited by Alynee (Jul 11 2012 1:18:52 pm)

#5 Before February 2015

mukc
Guest

Re: My Worlds

Raon wrote:

Welcome aboard! 1bigsmile1

Thanks

#6 Before February 2015

jemhun
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Re: My Worlds

Welcome!! //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/big_smile
Haffun here in the forums :3

#7 Before February 2015

Flobalob
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Re: My Worlds

1. It's a bit messy and un-original.
2. Noone likes traps that involve going out of the level and coming back in again. Put portals in, and it would be ok.
3. Complicated name that noone will read. Also, the '5x' is a lie. Too small to be a boss anyway.
4. Another boss? It's better than all the others, but still not great. Although in the shop is says that small levels are great for bosses, they're not.
5. Un-original. Also, way too many hooks and suicide coins.
6. Took me less than 30 seconds to complete. Bored.
7. ..
8. Makes zilch sense.
9. It's not 'new' as the name says. Pokeballs are old on EE and highly criticized.
10. As Fdoou said, I think 'Redlands' could be an interesting series of levels, but it needs to be changed. A lot.
11. The name suggests 'very hard minigames'. What I found was 'An average difficulty minigame'.
12. Original. I like it. The presentation could be tweaked, but generally these levels are good.
13. It's just a typical coin doors level. But again 'Greenlands' could be an interesting series.

Overall: 4/10. But you're new to these parts, so it's to be expected.

Just as a question, how new are you? I'm sure I've seen you before...

#8 Before February 2015

Saintcool
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Re: My Worlds

Alynee wrote:

Welcome to the forums...Read the rules and GIVE ME + REP Have Fun : )

Please stop asking for reps I have seen you say this before. -,-
Also welcome to the forums.

#9 Before February 2015

mukc
Guest

Re: My Worlds

Flobalob wrote:

1. It's a bit messy and un-original.
2. Noone likes traps that involve going out of the level and coming back in again. Put portals in, and it would be ok.
3. Complicated name that noone will read. Also, the '5x' is a lie. Too small to be a boss anyway.
4. Another boss? It's better than all the others, but still not great. Although in the shop is says that small levels are great for bosses, they're not.
5. Un-original. Also, way too many hooks and suicide coins.
6. Took me less than 30 seconds to complete. Bored.
7. ..
8. Makes zilch sense.
9. It's not 'new' as the name says. Pokeballs are old on EE and highly criticized.
10. As Fdoou said, I think 'Redlands' could be an interesting series of levels, but it needs to be changed. A lot.
11. The name suggests 'very hard minigames'. What I found was 'An average difficulty minigame'.
12. Original. I like it. The presentation could be tweaked, but generally these levels are good.
13. It's just a typical coin doors level. But again 'Greenlands' could be an interesting series.

Overall: 4/10. But you're new to these parts, so it's to be expected.

[b]Just as a question, how new are you? I'm sure I've seen you before...[/b]

I'm new at the forum, and to all: THOSE WOLDS WERE MADE WHEN I FIRST JOINED!!!!!!! EOpYT.png

#10 Before February 2015

Aoitenshi
Member
Joined: 2015-02-18
Posts: 2,058

Re: My Worlds

mukc wrote:
Flobalob wrote:

1. It's a bit messy and un-original.
2. Noone likes traps that involve going out of the level and coming back in again. Put portals in, and it would be ok.
3. Complicated name that noone will read. Also, the '5x' is a lie. Too small to be a boss anyway.
4. Another boss? It's better than all the others, but still not great. Although in the shop is says that small levels are great for bosses, they're not.
5. Un-original. Also, way too many hooks and suicide coins.
6. Took me less than 30 seconds to complete. Bored.
7. ..
8. Makes zilch sense.
9. It's not 'new' as the name says. Pokeballs are old on EE and highly criticized.
10. As Fdoou said, I think 'Redlands' could be an interesting series of levels, but it needs to be changed. A lot.
11. The name suggests 'very hard minigames'. What I found was 'An average difficulty minigame'.
12. Original. I like it. The presentation could be tweaked, but generally these levels are good.
13. It's just a typical coin doors level. But again 'Greenlands' could be an interesting series.

Overall: 4/10. But you're new to these parts, so it's to be expected.

[b]Just as a question, how new are you? I'm sure I've seen you before...[/b]

I'm new at the forum, and to all: THOSE WOLDS WERE MADE WHEN I FIRST JOINED!!!!!!! EOpYT.png

There's no excuse for rating, mukc. Rating is rating, better world means better rating. That's just how life goes. (Although it may be rude)

Last edited by Aoitenshi (Jul 22 2012 4:11:45 am)

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#11 Before February 2015

tak4n
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Joined: 2015-02-17
Posts: 1,883

Re: My Worlds

mukc don't take the rating as an offence, rating is there for you to improve, if you didn't want us to give you feedback on your levels, why did you paste the topic in the first place?

Just keep improving, you made a great start in making maps, just remember; stay creative //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/wink


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