Do you think I could just leave this part blank and it'd be okay? We're just going to replace the whole thing with a header image anyway, right?
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Hey! I'm new
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rm4zJSyxlOQ[/youtube]
I want to show you my worlds, I know nothing about this place, so no complaints.
In order of plays:
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWloIGmr_hbEI
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAEABeO2Sa0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWABQkt1KTa0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWIu9ezKMkbEI
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWiunysNa9bEI
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAOD9qTGUa0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAPyfFXyTa0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAKzpJeGSa0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWdJJ58K2Sa0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWZQMCFVaSa0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW0aMtA-uSa0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWABxNFJ6Ra0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAADjWA2Ra0I
Go to all of them, please.
Last edited by BEE (Jul 12 2012 12:06:43 pm)
Hello! Welcome to the forum! Let me tell you what I think of each of your worlds.
1: Cute music world. Try to limit the smiley art.
2: ON GOD TAKE THAT DOWN THAT HAS UR ACC INFO NEVER GIVE THAT OUT DHJKHJYHTFRYHRFTH
3: No one likes traps. Sorry.
4: Very basic, even undersized boss.
5: Another boss. Be more creative.
6: These minis are not original. Please make minis you have never seen before.
7: Typical secret path with nothing special. I like the name though.
8: Magic coin afks don't work, and no one likes them.
9: Here at the forum, we don't like pixel art.
10: I'm not sure what AGOU is, but the world makes no sense.
11: Redlands? Interesting. The thing is, the concept is boring. If you try and make some original things, "redlands" could be a great series. 1smile1
12: Now, this is an improvement! Original minigames! Please don't use the secret bricks next time.
13: I like the original concept.
14: Greenlands? Intersting. Not very fun though.
OVERALL: Welcome to everybody edits! My recommendation for you is to stray away from the stuff other people make, and be a bit more creative with your levels.
Welcome to the forums...Read the rules and GIVE ME + REP Have Fun : )
Last edited by Alynee (Jul 11 2012 1:18:52 pm)
Welcome aboard! 1bigsmile1
Thanks
Welcome!!
Haffun here in the forums :3
1. It's a bit messy and un-original.
2. Noone likes traps that involve going out of the level and coming back in again. Put portals in, and it would be ok.
3. Complicated name that noone will read. Also, the '5x' is a lie. Too small to be a boss anyway.
4. Another boss? It's better than all the others, but still not great. Although in the shop is says that small levels are great for bosses, they're not.
5. Un-original. Also, way too many hooks and suicide coins.
6. Took me less than 30 seconds to complete. Bored.
7. ..
8. Makes zilch sense.
9. It's not 'new' as the name says. Pokeballs are old on EE and highly criticized.
10. As Fdoou said, I think 'Redlands' could be an interesting series of levels, but it needs to be changed. A lot.
11. The name suggests 'very hard minigames'. What I found was 'An average difficulty minigame'.
12. Original. I like it. The presentation could be tweaked, but generally these levels are good.
13. It's just a typical coin doors level. But again 'Greenlands' could be an interesting series.
Overall: 4/10. But you're new to these parts, so it's to be expected.
Just as a question, how new are you? I'm sure I've seen you before...
Welcome to the forums...Read the rules and
GIVE ME + REPHave Fun : )
Please stop asking for reps I have seen you say this before. -,-
Also welcome to the forums.
1. It's a bit messy and un-original.
2. Noone likes traps that involve going out of the level and coming back in again. Put portals in, and it would be ok.
3. Complicated name that noone will read. Also, the '5x' is a lie. Too small to be a boss anyway.
4. Another boss? It's better than all the others, but still not great. Although in the shop is says that small levels are great for bosses, they're not.
5. Un-original. Also, way too many hooks and suicide coins.
6. Took me less than 30 seconds to complete. Bored.
7. ..
8. Makes zilch sense.
9. It's not 'new' as the name says. Pokeballs are old on EE and highly criticized.
10. As Fdoou said, I think 'Redlands' could be an interesting series of levels, but it needs to be changed. A lot.
11. The name suggests 'very hard minigames'. What I found was 'An average difficulty minigame'.
12. Original. I like it. The presentation could be tweaked, but generally these levels are good.
13. It's just a typical coin doors level. But again 'Greenlands' could be an interesting series.Overall: 4/10. But you're new to these parts, so it's to be expected.
[b]Just as a question, how new are you? I'm sure I've seen you before...[/b]
I'm new at the forum, and to all: THOSE WOLDS WERE MADE WHEN I FIRST JOINED!!!!!!!
Flobalob wrote:1. It's a bit messy and un-original.
2. Noone likes traps that involve going out of the level and coming back in again. Put portals in, and it would be ok.
3. Complicated name that noone will read. Also, the '5x' is a lie. Too small to be a boss anyway.
4. Another boss? It's better than all the others, but still not great. Although in the shop is says that small levels are great for bosses, they're not.
5. Un-original. Also, way too many hooks and suicide coins.
6. Took me less than 30 seconds to complete. Bored.
7. ..
8. Makes zilch sense.
9. It's not 'new' as the name says. Pokeballs are old on EE and highly criticized.
10. As Fdoou said, I think 'Redlands' could be an interesting series of levels, but it needs to be changed. A lot.
11. The name suggests 'very hard minigames'. What I found was 'An average difficulty minigame'.
12. Original. I like it. The presentation could be tweaked, but generally these levels are good.
13. It's just a typical coin doors level. But again 'Greenlands' could be an interesting series.Overall: 4/10. But you're new to these parts, so it's to be expected.
[b]Just as a question, how new are you? I'm sure I've seen you before...[/b]
I'm new at the forum, and to all: THOSE WOLDS WERE MADE WHEN I FIRST JOINED!!!!!!!
There's no excuse for rating, mukc. Rating is rating, better world means better rating. That's just how life goes. (Although it may be rude)
Last edited by Aoitenshi (Jul 22 2012 4:11:45 am)
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mukc don't take the rating as an offence, rating is there for you to improve, if you didn't want us to give you feedback on your levels, why did you paste the topic in the first place?
Just keep improving, you made a great start in making maps, just remember; stay creative
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