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A Matter of Time (Contest World - First Round)

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Luka504

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From: Serbia,probs never heard of it

Joined: 2015-02-19

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Re: A Matter of Time (Contest World - First Round)

It's um... Eh??

I like the gimmick introduced looked pretty sweet, but it felt very underdeveloped and not utilized to it's potential. I know you didn't have a lot of space to work with, but couldn't you have made one larger and more complex minigame instead of a bunch of small, overly simplistic ones?
The art is very, very bland. Right now it looks extremely monotone and lifeless, and would look much nicer with different blocks and backgrounds, as well as some decorations here and there. I would have liked a torch decoration more than a torch made out of background blocks, and instead of using invisible portals you should have just used regular ones.

It's the first round, so you have a decent chance of winning, but in the future try to put a bit more 'oomph' into your worlds.

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Slabdrill

Formerly 12345678908642

From: canada

Joined: 2015-08-15

Posts: 3,402

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Re: A Matter of Time (Contest World - First Round)

you should change what the npc says on the ice side, since its significantly harder (but still possible) to reach the house there

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peace

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From: admin land

Joined: 2015-08-10

Posts: 9,226

Re: A Matter of Time (Contest World - First Round)

It's um... Eh??

I like the gimmick introduced looked pretty sweet, but it felt very underdeveloped and not utilized to it's potential. I know you didn't have a lot of space to work with, but couldn't you have made one larger and more complex minigame instead of a bunch of small, overly simplistic ones?
The art is very, very bland. Right now it looks extremely monotone and lifeless, and would look much nicer with different blocks and backgrounds, as well as some decorations here and there. I would have liked a torch decoration more than a torch made out of background blocks, and instead of using invisible portals you should have just used regular ones.

It's the first round, so you have a decent chance of winning, but in the future try to put a bit more 'oomph' into your worlds.

he uses bg for portals

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thanks hg for making this much better and ty for my avatar aswell

Introduction

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Joined: 2018-08-15

Posts: 153

Re: A Matter of Time (Contest World - First Round)

The concept was good and the gameplay is a little clever, however maybe you should've improved art?

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PTU

Formerly Pipec

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Joined: 2017-04-15

Posts: 862

Re: A Matter of Time (Contest World - First Round)

Very fun world, I liked gameplay.

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