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#1 2017-12-02 20:37:48

danielcool1
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Silent Night

This world needs feedback and what I need to improve, to make it better.
Minimap:
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World Links:
Original
or
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or if those didn't work
Copy and Paste this world ID to join in: PWfHeCOlTZcEI
Feel free to express opinions.
Time beaten: 5 Minutes and 44 Seconds

Last edited by danielcool1 (2017-12-02 20:45:48)

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#2 2017-12-03 04:54:31

Doodle
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Re: Silent Night

"The Requested world is set to Friends Only"


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RUN WILD.
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#3 2017-12-03 05:01:46

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Re: Silent Night

Fixed, try playing it again

Last edited by danielcool1 (2017-12-03 05:01:55)

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#4 2017-12-03 06:20:28

Doodle
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Re: Silent Night

First, i don't know your intentions of the world's creation so my judging may not be as precise accurate to what you have built. What was your intention of creating this world: easy-medium-hard? theme? free-run?

otherwise, here's two facts:

As suggested in the story, you did not make the world appear, feel, or seem like a Hometown. There's only one house which is the spawn. There's no "living" town's people. idk why there's skulls.

Snow art style is dull on mini map although its not bad to use a snow block for all the snow.

Some opinions:

I enjoyed the game-play running back and forth, i liked it like that because its been a while since i played a world where its not a cramped room from beginning to end.

The story line was fine until you said a nuke was gonna blow the hometown... what ._. that's so random. How about you give more details in the story-line and develop it better.

Since almost everything is easy, i suggest you decrease the two-three spike paths to two spike paths so the difficulty has a consistent flow near the end.
And since this world appears to be aimed at being easy, i saw a player rage quit at the beginning not able to jump on the Christmas tree so make that a bit easier too.

in less critical thinking, its totally a nub world. smile


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