Loadscreen

kreacher · 2017-09-03 11:52:54

I made a Loadscreen for any time but pretty much a spring one. this is the link to the world: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWI7Xu9cu3cEI

Offensive Ray · 2017-09-03 11:57:58

Don't like it much,
But good start.

TaskManager · 2017-09-03 12:03:18

that bunny looks terrified

Xfrogman43, Jorc, SirJosh3917, Jedpogi

kreacher · 2017-09-03 12:17:03

maxi123 wrote:

that bunny looks terrified

It's been through a lot

Guest. · 2017-09-03 16:59:10

weird block choices, team effects, and lack of players make this look off

kreacher · 2017-09-03 19:40:24

I know what you mean about the team affect and players but whats wrong with the block choices?

skullz17 · 2017-09-03 20:08:44

kreacher wrote:

I know what you mean about the team affect and players but whats wrong with the block choices?

I'm not ernesdo but here's my opinion. I think the central tree looks like a mess; there are too many blocks. All the different blocks have different textures and look awkward together. The mineral blocks and half blocks definitely feel out of place. The dark green leaf blocks also look kinda weird because their colour doesn't blend well with the rest. I also don't really like the fairy pack leaves in general, but that's just a personal preference. Besides the tree, you also could have made the water look prettier. I don't like the choice of colours and I also don't see the need for the glass (im guessing you were going for a light reflection effect on the water surface? doesnt really work though imo). I also don't like the use of one ways for the fishing line, what about half blocks? Or decorations? And it's weird that it turns blue/green when underwater. Finally, I would have preferred a smiley holding the fishing rod rather than a person made of blocks (the way he's holding the rod also looks really weird).

kreacher · 2017-09-03 20:54:27

skullz17 wrote:

kreacher wrote:
I know what you mean about the team affect and players but whats wrong with the block choices?
I'm not ernesdo but here's my opinion. I think the central tree looks like a mess; there are too many blocks. All the different blocks have different textures and look awkward together. The mineral blocks and half blocks definitely feel out of place. The dark green leaf blocks also look kinda weird because their colour doesn't blend well with the rest. I also don't really like the fairy pack leaves in general, but that's just a personal preference. Besides the tree, you also could have made the water look prettier. I don't like the choice of colours and I also don't see the need for the glass (im guessing you were going for a light reflection effect on the water surface? doesnt really work though imo). I also don't like the use of one ways for the fishing line, what about half blocks? Or decorations? And it's weird that it turns blue/green when underwater. Finally, I would have preferred a smiley holding the fishing rod rather than a person made of blocks (the way he's holding the rod also looks really weird).

I see what you mean, I shall try and edit it to make it better

skullz17

kreacher · 2017-09-03 22:29:57

Any better? Please criticise as much as you want, I want it to be as good as it can be

skullz17

Guest. · 2017-09-03 23:09:26

kreacher wrote:

Any better? https://i.imgur.com/H9HuhGn.png Please criticise as much as you want, I want it to be as good as it can be

i still think theres too many blocks but its getting better

Offensive Ray · 2017-09-04 08:43:21

I think you should add like background mountains using the cyan candy block, It'd make it better and try to add more stuff as decorations

kreacher · 2017-09-04 13:07:14

I added a house to make it bigger so it would fit the screen and made it so theres only two colours on the willow Also what sort of decorations and where Oray?

Offensive Ray

Guest. · 2017-09-04 14:38:11

kreacher wrote:

I added a house to make it bigger so it would fit the screen and made it so theres only two colours on the willow https://i.imgur.com/Y4KmW5M.png Also what sort of decorations and where Oray?

now its too big to all fit

drunkbnu

kreacher · 2017-09-04 18:07:18

Ernesdo wrote:

kreacher wrote:
I added a house to make it bigger so it would fit the screen and made it so theres only two colours on the willow https://i.imgur.com/Y4KmW5M.png Also what sort of decorations and where Oray?
now its too big to all fit

Whoops I'll cut a bit of it out

Offensive Ray · 2017-09-04 18:14:54

Kreacher, Add me on EE so i can help you a little bit with fixes.

kreacher

kreacher · 2017-09-04 18:49:22

It fits now Invite sent Oray

mutantdevle, skullz17

kreacher · 2017-09-22 10:21:39

Here is Oray's load screen:
And here is Ernesdo's:
I shall add more smiley's if you want just reply to this post.

Filip2005 · 2017-09-22 15:24:10

ernesdo's is ugly, i can make a better one

V Just like one here V

Luka504 · 2017-09-22 16:26:31

Filip2005 The Junior help wrote:

ernesdo's is ugly, i can make a better one

V Just like one here V

Ernesdo's is better than yours imo.

LukeM, mutantdevle, Hans, Jedpogi, Pingohits, PTU

SirJosh3917 · 2017-09-23 00:09:16

offtopic:
flip2005 take an L you toxic heccer

ontopic:
staff wont care

tl;dr: im a very helpful member of the community and my posts are of utter most quality

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