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shadowda

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From: somewhere probably.

Joined: 2015-02-19

Posts: 1,015

Undergarden Number Twelve

Undergarden Number Twelve

Jump bottomless pits, avoid toxic mushrooms, and more as you traverse through the twelve rooms of the undergarden. 
Swing, climb, and jump, you way past the various obstacles.

100% tested
Minis range form hard to medium.
Some minis take a few tries.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWd_MJ9U0ncEI

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grass is mostly for decoration. sometimes its placed to help. mostly its not. don't plan on looking to grass for help.

grass is usually under a portal

During construction there were some times when upwards of 8 to 12 people were playing. it was great. except for the massive lag that made building harder.

Originally "number Twelve" was just a name. i liked the sound of it. plus it was my 12th great world.

i added the first gear for decoration. then started to add more in for minis

the gears are from pictures that i shrunk down to small pixels

Fitting twelve rooms was hard. i could barely do it.

the dark room is the shortest and the easiest. it was originally empty but i needed another room to make 12 so i put in a mini.

this world started as a single block section with moss placed randomly near the center. then a second. the first wall. then the spawn. then i expanded. added more floor. a pit. the first mini. ceilings. i just kept the the patterns and tried to fit in minis.

if you lined up the rooms they would make a staircase shape.

some minis are inspired by other minis.

Please give feed back!

SHADOWDA: epic story conclusion

that was what he wanted... not what he got...

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Sensei1

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From: The land of saunas

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 1,112

Re: Undergarden Number Twelve

Good job with the art, it  really felt like I was underground! It was nicely decorated and you kept the background simple enough for it to look clean. Maybe the rooms could have had different elements in them, like you had mushrooms in some, just to bring more variation to the art - and maybe gameplay too!
The minis were nice too, but some of them (mostly some wall jumps) were too hard, and by too hard I mean so hard that winning it had more to do with luck than skill. Also in some rooms you easily fell down after failing, so that you had to replay stuff to get up again, which got a bit frustrating over time. Other than that, I liked how you made your checkpoints kinda hidden.

▼One wall jump I thought was too hard

Yeah, cool world

Kirby

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Joined: 2015-04-04

Posts: 4,311

Re: Undergarden Number Twelve

nice

i really hated the mini that first introduced the mushrooms though, please change that one. I couldn't tell what to do and it was really annoying

other than that, that was pretty fun