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AmdS

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From: Brazil

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Fossil Excavation

Hello, I finished my new world called Fossil Exacavation.

"You're in a cavern with fossils, you will need to excavate your way through to get to the Big Bang was the beginning of the universe so there wouldn't be fossils from that"
Play!

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All the art and minigames were made by me, thanks for Chiscorey for drawing the pipes circule!

AmdS

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From: Brazil

Joined: 2015-05-27

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Re: Fossil Excavation

This was getting off the room list, so bump. Need feedback

Gosha

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From: Russia

Joined: 2015-03-15

Posts: 6,211

Re: Fossil Excavation

This was getting off the room list

Sometimes always it happends. no need to remain people

Need feedback

This black area doesnt look verly well, do something there

rgl32

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 543

Re: Fossil Excavation

At the end (in the pic) either make the checkpoints or remove curse right below the invisible portals, I had to do the last mini 3 times because I didn't hit the checkpoint, I think there was another area where you didn't force people to hit checkpoints, might want to change that too.You also didn't make a way back if someone entered the portals where that blue coin was, no one could tell that is a way to the start and could be forced to go through all the minis again with levi to get to the trophy, make a way back for them, probably by either switch or team door (probably this since you end with cyan team anyway) at the start of the level.

The level was fun though, I liked the difficulty, it wasn't annoyingly hard. A few minis felt repetitive compared to each other, but still different enough to not feel like you are doing the exact same movements, overall I enjoyed it.

AmdS

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From: Brazil

Joined: 2015-05-27

Posts: 2,384

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Re: Fossil Excavation

At the end (in the pic) either make the checkpoints or remove curse right below the invisible portals, I had to do the last mini 3 times because I didn't hit the checkpoint, I think there was another area where you didn't force people to hit checkpoints, might want to change that too.You also didn't make a way back if someone entered the portals where that blue coin was, no one could tell that is a way to the start and could be forced to go through all the minis again with levi to get to the trophy, make a way back for them, probably by either switch or team door (probably this since you end with cyan team anyway) at the start of the level.

The level was fun though, I liked the difficulty, it wasn't annoyingly hard. A few minis felt repetitive compared to each other, but still different enough to not feel like you are doing the exact same movements, overall I enjoyed it.

Thank you so much for noticing me it, I know that ending is looking ugly and not good for that reason because when I was finishing this level I was very lazy to make the ending. So, I made the ending looking better now. Thanks.

CommanderKitten

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From: California

Joined: 2015-12-12

Posts: 66

Re: Fossil Excavation

Some of the minis felt a little clunky, and not very smooth, but over all its a good level. Nice job!

AmdS

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From: Brazil

Joined: 2015-05-27

Posts: 2,384

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Re: Fossil Excavation

Some of the minis felt a little clunky, and not very smooth, but over all its a good level. Nice job!

Thank you!