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STD

Formerly BenWanted

From: Binary by 0 and 1

Joined: 2015-08-19

Posts: 1,113

Opinions

So I started making a level for submission to a crew. Maybe got accepted. idk

Inspired by this

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Here's as far as I got. So should I finish or leave it as is?

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Krosis

Formerly Arkonagames

Joined: 2015-06-17

Posts: 2,279

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Re: Opinions

i like the sand, but you should try better on the clouds

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Schlog

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Joined: 2015-07-21

Posts: 1,960

Re: Opinions

Sky is too dull. It's just a solid color; you need more clouds.

STD

Formerly BenWanted

From: Binary by 0 and 1

Joined: 2015-08-19

Posts: 1,113

Re: Opinions

i like the sand, but you should try better on the clouds

Sky is too dull. It's just a solid color; you need more clouds.

NOT Finished. I know about the sky and clouds. I plan on finishing that if I feel like finishing the level. There's still a lot to add that I am aware of.

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skullz17

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 6,699

Re: Opinions

Well if you're aware there are those problems, why even ask if you should finish? It has a very unfinished look, and you should definitely polish it. This isn't releasable imo, releasing it now would appear lazy. However, it does look pretty good so far.

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Prodigy

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From: The United States of America

Joined: 2015-07-15

Posts: 2,613

Re: Opinions

need the trees... the sky should look like if its together and not seperated and also more clouds

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Br0k3n

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From: Serbia

Joined: 2015-04-04

Posts: 1,451

Re: Opinions

not bad for now, id like to see a finished version of this

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STD

Formerly BenWanted

From: Binary by 0 and 1

Joined: 2015-08-19

Posts: 1,113

Re: Opinions

not bad for now, id like to see a finished version of this

I'll work on it here and there. If I don't finish this week then I'll work on it all day Saturday and Sunday

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Hexagon

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Joined: 2015-04-22

Posts: 1,213

Re: Opinions

Add a little dithering to the sky, and I think it'll look a bit more smooth.

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CatoniC

Formerly Elizabeth53999

From: sleepys

Joined: 2015-08-21

Posts: 512

Re: Opinions

i think the sky needs more shading..

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if i had one

Anch

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Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 5,447

Re: Opinions

At first glance it looks really nice but if you look at it more I think you can improve on the shading of the clouds.

!nb4

Formerly AYB

From: New In Package (NIP) Pole

Joined: 2015-07-18

Posts: 767

Re: Opinions

idk.... the sky has different colors you know so I guess the sky. All whom criticized about the clouds, I like it. it looks pastaly and looks like a cool artwork.

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Minisaurus

Banned

Re: Opinions

Well i dont want write about this so much because here are much noobs in art and a big mouth, but okay.

1° The world is a cube, WHAT IN THE **** HELL you think you go to get, try with the same size, if is 1024 W 576 H you should use 341 W 192 H

2° Sand is so TALL, make shorter, because if you continue the art, shading and fixing cloud and making the threes you go to get a ****, first should fix the sand or all the other go to **** UP.

3° Dont want try get a perfect soft combination of colors, ee have a VERY limited color options, so dont try get the same, you should put your own style.

4° You ask i answer.

4° Dont reply crap,  thanks.

CatoniC

Formerly Elizabeth53999

From: sleepys

Joined: 2015-08-21

Posts: 512

Re: Opinions

Well i dont want write about this so much because here are much noobs in art and a big mouth, but okay.

1° The world is a cube, WHAT IN THE bimpsing HELL you think you go to get, try with the same size, if is 1024 W 576 H you should use 341 W 192 H

2° Sand is so TALL, make shorter, because if you continue the art, shading and fixing cloud and making the threes you go to get a poop, first should fix the sand or all the other go to bimps UP.

3° Dont want try get a perfect soft combination of colors, ee have a VERY limited color options, so dont try get the same, you should put your own style.

4° You ask i answer.

4° Dont reply crap,  thanks.

noobs? how rude are you

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trump's forehead is brighter than my whole future
if i had one

Anch

Member

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 5,447

Re: Opinions

Well i dont want write about this so much because here are much noobs in art and a big mouth, but okay.

1° The world is a cube, WHAT IN THE **** HELL you think you go to get, try with the same size, if is 1024 W 576 H you should use 341 W 192 H

2° Sand is so TALL, make shorter, because if you continue the art, shading and fixing cloud and making the threes you go to get a ****, first should fix the sand or all the other go to **** UP.

3° Dont want try get a perfect soft combination of colors, ee have a VERY limited color options, so dont try get the same, you should put your own style.

4° You ask i answer.

4° Dont reply crap,  thanks.

What?

Pingohits

Banned

From: aids lizard

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 7,591

Re: Opinions

clouds need to be fluffier, and remember, they're not shiny

sand is fine, but try to be neater with the dunes

water is alright, it's a work in progress, so i won't judge it

sky should have a smaller contrast

it is much too light on the bottom, as it is much darker on the top
again, you're still working on it, so i wouldn't call it a fault unless you somehow manage to blend those colors in

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