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#1 2015-09-27 23:00:00, last edited by Freckleface (2015-09-27 23:00:26)

Freckleface
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Tutorial Mistakes/Suggestions

Didn't know where to put this


So about the update, it is great and all and i was doin the tutorial and it doesn't seem right :/
SUGGESTIONS
Well first of all, the tutorial needs to be more hands on. Like for example when it says "lets head over there (shop) now" (something like that) it should remove the tutorial box and make you need to click it.

MISTAKES
"replay tutorial:mthought you missed..."(options menu part)
"Click tutorial #1 to join the world, and to end this interactive menu tutorial."( Should be: Click tutorial #1 to join the world and end this interactive menu tutorial.)

Will add more as I find stuff.


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#2 2015-09-27 23:01:38

Anak
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Re: Tutorial Mistakes/Suggestions

Oxford commas aren't mistakes

#3 2015-09-27 23:18:09

SirJosh3917
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Re: Tutorial Mistakes/Suggestions

Anak wrote:

Oxford commas aren't mistakes

Freckleface wrote:

and to end

Freckleface wrote:

and end

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#4 2015-09-27 23:18:43

Anak
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Re: Tutorial Mistakes/Suggestions

ninjasupeatsninja wrote:
Anak wrote:

Oxford commas aren't mistakes

Freckleface wrote:

and to end

Freckleface wrote:

and end

That isn't a mistake either

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#5 2015-09-27 23:24:38

SirJosh3917
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From: USA
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Re: Tutorial Mistakes/Suggestions

Anak wrote:
ninjasupeatsninja wrote:
Anak wrote:

Oxford commas aren't mistakes

Freckleface wrote:

and to end

Freckleface wrote:

and end

That isn't a mistake either

first time i read it it sounded wrong, but you have a point.

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