Hide and Seek - A Drama Fanfiction - Ep. 2 - Chapter 5 started

Michele · 2015-04-16 15:45:55

Bump!

N1KF, Onjit

Michele · 2015-04-17 18:43:35

Update this already sorry for double post

N1KF, Onjit

Creature · 2015-04-17 21:15:47

Ok, sorry for the delay, I got no idea and decided to take a 2-days break. I will try to get part 4 done today.

▼Chapter 4 part 3

Chapter 4: Downfall Obsession - Part 3/7
Day 3(Afternoon)

Various Worlds
Badoosh

The situation seemed okay, even if Jawapa was here ready to ban Badoosh and Reidolol. There was lot of world portals to go and escape, but both Badoosh and Reidolol refused to hop on early.
- And then we meet again. - Jawapa greets.
- Oh, hello Jawapa, I knew you was going to go crazy like this. - Reidolol answers. - I knew from start.
- You always begged to get banned, and I refused, but now I'm going to accept. - Jawapa warns.
- I never begged to get banned, stop pretending. - Reidolol demands.
- You always begged, by negatively criticizing us. - Jawapa answers.
- And I was true. - Reidolol provokes.
- Did I ever banned you? - Jawapa asks.
- No, but you did banned others, without a good reason. - Reidolol answers.
- Then why do you care? - Jawapa asks.
- You were always a trouble. - Reidolol answers.
- We were friends once, remember? - Jawapa says. - Now you're against me just because I became guardian.
- I don't like kids owning a serious game. - Reidolol answers.
- Hey, let's stop it. - Badoosh suggests.
- Let me have a quick argument with Jawapa. - Reidolol begs.
- Let him do what he wants, I will make sure to get him banned. - Jawapa agrees.
- Like you always did with every other player. - Reidolol continues.
- I'm staying out of this. - Badoosh says as he hops into a world portal.
- Listen me. - Jawapa demands. - You're provoking me how much you want because you have a advantage.
- What advantage? - Reidolol asks. - Truth advantage?
- You should thank 20feedy for doing all this. - Jawapa warns.
- Well, that's true. - Reidolol says. - You must be sad because you can't do your hobby.
- What a nice advantage you got. - Jawapa says. - Just hop into a world portal, I will catch you later anyways.
Reidolol instead clears the world, making himself very vulnerable.
- What about now? - Reidolol asks. - Do it now, what you always wanted to do.
- For sure, you can't change my mind. - Jawapa answers.
Jawapa raises his ban-hammer, but Reidolol dissappeared right after, leaving no powder. The kick reason higlighted: "I always wanted to do this".

Ultrabass

Ultrabass decided to keep the last world portal to hop into another world. Daneeko still had edit to god mode and reach to the last world portal, but he didn't seemed to do it.
- Please, don't ban me! - He begs.
- I'm sorry. - Ultrabass apologizes.
- No, please! - Daneeko begs again, but Ultrabass bans him.
Daneeko turned into powder, as Ultrabass finished banning him. Thanel joins the world after, coincidentally meeting with Ultrabass.
- Hello Ultrabass. - Thanel greets.
- Hello Thanel. - Ultrabass answers. - Got someone?
- Just Zumza123. - He answers. - And you?
- I recently banned Daneeko. - Ultrabass answers.
- This loop is strategic. - Thanel comments.
- But we can take it down easily. - Ultrabass answers.
- What is your plan? - Thanel asks.
- We can clear the worlds and surrender the hiders. - Ultrabass answers.
- Good idea. - Thanel says. - And then these around are already out.
Ultrabass makes a trap right below the last world portal and then hop in, Thanel does the same, ready to do a clean up.

TO BE CONTINUED

N1KF, Onjit

Creature · 2015-04-18 01:42:14

Here's another, enough for today.

▼Chapter 4 part 4

Chapter 4: Downfall Obsession - Part 4/7
Day 3(Afternoon)

Sprite Art
Tak4n

Tak4n, Skullz17, 4thewin and Ak712 all volunteered to distract Nvd. Ak712 managed to take the ban-hammer from Nvd's hand and throw it for 4thewin. Sometimes Tak4n and Skullz17 got the chance to touch the ban-hammer, but not as frequently as Ak712 and 4thewin.
- Catch me, Nvd! - 4thewin calls as he gets the ban-hammer and throws it back to Ak712.
- No, me! - Ak712 calls as he gets the ban-hammer.
Suddenly, the ban-hammer dissappears from Ak712's hand, and Nvd appeared hanging it.
- Enough provokation? - He asks.
- How? - Ak712 asks.
- I was already prepared for this. - Nvd answers.
- Well, time to go. - Tak4n warns.
- Time to listen me. - Nvd corrects as he hits Ak712.
- Ak712! - Skullz17 calls, but he is just powder now.
- I thought you all didn't care being banned. - Nvd says.
Skullz17, Tak4n and 4thewin runs around the world, looking for a way to exit. Skullz17 and Tak4n both was in the right side of the world, while 4thewin was in the other way.
- What do we do? - Skullz17 asks.
- Buzzerbee told me something. - Tak4n answers. - I think it's something related to code.
- What is it? - Skullz17 asks.
- Pressing send many times. - Tak4n answers.
- Hey guys, where I am? - 4thewin asks confused.
- Are we done? - Nvd asks.
- 4thewin, follow to the right. - Tak4n calls.
4thewin runs to the other side, passing by Nvd, who almost got him banned.
- 4thewin, press send the much you can until you get lagkicked. - Tak4n orders.
4thewin, Skullz17 and Tak4n started doing it, 4thewin managed to get lagkicked first.
- You got a good strategy, but I need to do it. - Nvd says.
Nvd throws the ban-hammer right at Skullz17 and Tak4n, it ends hitting Skullz17 and turning him into powder.
- Skullz17! - Tak4n calls, but it's too late.
Nvd runs to retrieve his ban-hammer, but Tak4n already managed to get lagkicked and leave the world.

Safe World
Itsmeandersonlol

Itsmeandersonlol was still here, Toop was right near, and Master1 was gone. Itsmeandersonlol was so close to get banned, but he didn't.
- Toop, what you did? - Itsmeandersonlol asks.
- I just kicked him. - Toop answers.
- Why? - Itsmeandersonlol asks.
- I never liked their idea, I'm trying to save you from this. - Toop answers.
- I already gave myself up. - Itsmeandersonlol says.
- You don't need to. - Toop warns. - This isn't the right thing to do.
- They says things like this is urgent and need to be done to save Everybody Edits, I have to agree you on that. - Itsmeandersonlol agrees.
- We better get out. - Toop suggests.
- I was going to do that. - Itsmeandersonlol agrees.
Toop and Itsmeandersonlol leaves the world, where once it was a community, now it's fallen down.

TO BE CONTINUED

Ok, I think it's time to reveal Episode 3 name.
Episode 3: Unforgettable
It's very clear Episode 3 will be a emotional episode(or not).

Also, time to reveal what the episode and each chapter name mean't in episode 1:
Episode 1: The Big Race - I first thought about making the entire Episode 1 be just everybody running from the seekers as they find a good spot to hide. I kept this title because it mean't much things, race to hide spot, race to safety, race to teamwork, etc.
Prologue: Decision - Very clear, Nvd's decision and the complains about it.
Chapter 1: Time to Run - Also very clear, when everybody starts to run around looking for safety.
Chapter 2: Confidence Vs Deception - I didn't had much good ideas for this title, I was going to put "Confidence Kills", but this didn't sound alright. Confidence Vs Deception just means players who was confident but at end got deceptionated with the results.
Chapter 3: Danger Within - If you read well, you can see how much dangers Safe World and other worlds had without players knowning.
Chapter 4: Resistance - Very clear, Safe World being resistent enough to handle the attacks.
Chapter 5: Game of Trust - The struggle for players believe Toop or not, also staffs(also Different55) trying to trust Nvd.
Prologue: Back Home - I didn't had much ideas for this. This is most likely a review of each group's situation, preparing to the next episode.

N1KF, Onjit

Michele · 2015-04-18 14:12:19

Well, if I'm getting banned, I can get lagkicked. By world code (to edit)

N1KF, Onjit

Creature · 2015-04-18 14:34:34

AntonioS300 wrote:

Well, if I'm getting banned, I can get lagkicked. By world code (to edit)

You must be extremely lucky, doing this strategy takes from 5 seconds to even 1 minute, and usually guardians won't wait you get lagkicked.

Onjit, N1KF

Creature · 2015-04-19 02:56:36

Another part here.

▼Chapter 4 part 5

Chapter 4: Downfall Obession - Part 5/7
Day 3(Evening)

EX Crew Hidden World
Nou

Nou seemed fine now, Minimisaurio, Elionelion and Rgl32 came online, doing their usual things, Anch159 was still here.. What was fine is the fact that there was still some open worlds, giving maybe 2 extra days for them, but Nou still had some doubt.
- Hello Elionelion. - Nou greets.
- Hello. - He answers.
- I think 20feedy created a good distraction for us. - Nou comments.
- I liked their loop, but what if they AFK? - Elionelion ask.
- Then they're doomed. - Minimisaurio answers. - Specially Reidolol.
- A time to remember Gkabyssflorida's and possibly Bimps' banishment. - Rgl32 agrees.
- Well, better not AFK then. - Minimisaurio advices.
- I can't resist. - Rgl32 answers.
- Then you don't have so much forward. - Anch159 continues. - I also AFK sometimes.
- Me too, when I'm bored. - Minimisaurio agrees.
Different55 joins the world, getting the URL from EE Forums by a system, his name was Red and he had a ban-hammer at his back.
- Oh, I sometimes AFK too. - Different55 answers. - But not like Gkabyssflorida.
- Hi Different55, why your name is red? - Anch159 greets.
- And how you joined my world? - Nou asks.
- Answering Anch159, I got a curse and my name is Red, I should have gave myself up. - Different55 answers. - And Nou, I can see which world you are in the EE Forums.
- What? - Nou asks.
- Curse? - Minimisaurio asks.
- Guardians are being harsh. - Rgl32 comments.
- Seriously? I never knew that. - Anch159 comments.
- You're lying! - Elionelion says.
- Oh my god, so much questions. - Different55 talks with himself. - Elionelion is right, I got promoted to do my job.
- I thought I could trust you. - Anch159 says frustated.
- Sorry, Anch159. - Different55 apologizes.
- Go ahead, ban me. - Nou says.
- If you're trying to make me don't ban you, you're failing. - Different55 tells. - But I like failing.
- Anch159, Elionelion, Minimisaurio, Rgl32, run! - Nou commands.
Anch159 and Elionelion manages to reach the world portal first before Different55 could take it out. Different55 hit Rgl32 with his new ban-hammer as he tries to get in too. Different55 throws it at Minimisaurio, who was behind, turning him into powder too.
- Last words? - Different55 asks.
- You did the right thing. - Nou supports.
Jawapa joins the world, by the URL Different55 sent.
- Different55, no! - He warns.
- Why? - Different55 asks.
- Let me take care of him. - Jawapa advices.
- Why can't I simply ban him? - Different55 asks.
- I have plans with him. - Jawapa answers.
Jawapa carries Nou to the Reunion Room, making Different55 a bit confused for his plans. Before Different55 leaves the world, he changes the title to "EX Crew Fallen World".

TO BE CONTINUED

I already got a idea for Chapter 5.

N1KF, Onjit

Michele · 2015-04-19 10:51:37

Meanwhile, if I get surrounded by guardian, I'm extrementely lucky (very high luck) because I can think and repeat the code unill I get kicked, or leave the world.

N1KF, Onjit

Michele · 2015-04-19 18:54:44

Add new part!

N1KF, Onjit

daneeko · 2015-04-23 09:10:28

HERES MY REVENGE PLAN: i create an account named BYDABU with an fake email so nobody could know that i am daneeko.
and if i ever have a meeting with a seeker, i will get lagkicked from code.

N1KF, Onjit

some woman · 2015-04-23 13:04:08

Daneeko wrote:

HERES MY REVENGE PLAN: i create an account named BYDABU with an fake email so nobody could know that i am daneeko.
and if i ever have a meeting with a seeker, i will get lagkicked from code.

dude
when you get banned
you get banned
there are no alts
you are ded
removed from the story
i really hate to break this to you since you seem so incredibly confident about yourself

N1KF, Onjit

Creature · 2015-04-26 21:25:22

Oh my gosh, Zoey2070 almost put this amazing fanfiction to fail.

I managed to write some parts, but during my ban period I got lazy and didn't write much.

▼Chapter 4 part 6

Chapter 4: Downfall Obsession - Part 6/7
Day 3(Evening)

EE Forums
Different55

Different55 was using his new method to find the players still not banned. Everybody was in the lobby currently, except Badoosh, 20feedy and Drstereos, who was in a loop of worlds. There was new topics, one of them was: Different55, seriously?
Anch159: Different55 just turned into a guardian and is against us.
Creature: I knew he would be a deception.
Buzzerbee: I thought I could trust you.
Different55: Sorry, it's a offer I accepted.
Onjit: Why you do it?
Different55: They offered me cash.
N1KF: They need to pay their bills and they give you cash to a additional guardian.
The forum was also filled with discussions about fallen wordls, and surely a lot of duplicated topics, nothing else. One notable topic was "Riot against Different55".
Ipwner: LETS RIOT AGAINST OUR BETRAYER DIFFERENT55!
Different55: Don't start.
Drstereos: Different55 is evil!
AntonioS300: Different55, why you do this? You should've helped us.
Onjit: lol, I like this topic.
Creature: Different55 being a puppet, great.
Anch159: I'm just ****.
Onjit: Different55 has a good clean up to do.
Different55: Sadly I can't ban anyone without taking them off from my radar.
AntonioS300: Then we can spam freely?
Creature: If you want to get banned, at least you're out from Different55's radar.
Different55: Shouldn't have said that.

Various Worlds
20feedy

20feedy was travelling like a time-traveller across the world portals, until he find himself stuck in a empty world.
- Wait, what happened? - 20feedy asks himself.
Reidolol joins later, laughing a bit.
- Hello Reidolol. - 20feedy greets. - We're stuck here.
- Oh nice, my world got cleaned, it was useless anyways. - Reidolol complains.
- Where was you? - 20feedy asks. - And why you're laughing?
- I trolled Jawapa. - Reidolol answers. - I kicked myself before he could ban me.
- But what do we do now? - 20feedy asks.
- The typical way to exit. - Reidolol answers.

Drstereos

Drstereos stopped when he found his world, there was no longer world portals, just the stuff he made on it.
- WTF? Who deleted it? - Drstereos asks himself.
Drstereos tries to fix what he did, but eventually quits.

Badoosh

Badoosh just ended in a world owned by Daneeko, there was only one world portal. Badoosh hopped in and got lagkicked, freeing him from the loop. He saw his friendlist and saw Toop was online in "The Pier".

The Pier
Badoosh

Badoosh joined The Pier, a world he made with Toop and was very successfully. Toop was here, still the same as ever.
- Hi Toop. - Badoosh greets.
- Hello. - He answers.
- Another world got fallen down. - Badoosh warns. - Not one, various.

TO BE CONTINUED

▼Chapter 4 part 7

Chapter 4: Downfall Obsession - Part 7/7
Day 3(Evening)

The Pier
Badoosh

The world was open, free to anyone enter, even the ones who want to take them out. Toop and Badoosh was discussing about something.
- What will you do with everything fallen down? - Badoosh asks.
- I opened this. - Toop answers. - This will last long or not.
- What's your strategy to scare the staffs away from this world? - Badoosh asks.
- Well, I have the power to kick them out. - Toop answers.
- What if they come up with a plan? - Badoosh asks.
- Then you just kick everyone including yourself out. - Toop answers. - I will distract them.
- I don't think this will work, but okay. - Badoosh says.
Tak4n was the first to enter the world, later Anch159.
- Hello. - Anch159 greets.
- Toop! You're still here. - Tak4n greets.
- Yes, I am. - Toop answers.
- I never saw you around. - Tak4n warns. - Aren't you going to ban us?
- No, I'm against Nvd's decision. - Toop answers.
Buzzerbee then came, also 4thewin and Pyromaniac a bit after, Ipwner, Drstereos and N1KF came lastly. Toop managed to explain everything to them.

Various Worlds
Reidolol

Even if Reidolol suggested both of them to exit, he decided to stay in the world along 20feedy. He was just waiting for Jawapa, who came in a short time.
- Uh-Oh, look who's back. - Reidolol says.
- And once we meet another time again. - Jawapa answers.
- Oh no! - 20feedy complains.
- Run, 20feedy, run! - Reidolol orders, sounding like ironic.
- Better you run, or I will ban you all! - Jawapa decides to be ironic too.
- Reidolol, what are you doing? - 20feedy asks.
- Panicking, can't you see Jawapa is here? - Reidolol answers.
- We're doing drama. - Jawapa says. - Enough of that.
- Oh damn, it was so good. - Reidolol answers.
- Reidolol, please. - 20feedy begs. - I'm going.
20feedy hops into a world portal and dissappears, leaving Reidolol with Jawapa.
- Are you going to try to ban me again? - Reidolol asks.
- Yes, but this time it will work. - Jawapa answers.
- I can just do the same as 20feedy. - Reidolol warns.
Jawapa clears the world, removing any kind of world portal, and then he remove Reidolol's owner permissions.
- This is how you do? - Reidolol asks.
- This is the only way. - Jawapa answers.
- Ok, then you want to do your favorite hobby. - Reidolol provokes.
- No, I'm doing my job. - Jawapa answers, as he prepares his ban-hammer.
- Yes, your job was being a Banboy. - Reidolol agrees.
- Do you have some nice last words? - Jawapa asks.
- I always knew you were like this. - Reidolol answers.
Jawapa stays quiet, as he raises his ban-hammer. Reidolol attempts to kick him out, but nothing happens, just Jawapa hits him with the ban-hammer, finally turning him into powder.
- You should thank me I still forgive you. - Jawapa advices.

TO BE CONTINUED

▼Chapter 5 part 1

Chapter 5: This or That - Part 2/3
Day 3(Night)

Reunion Room
Nou

Jawapa brought Nou to the Everybody Edits Reunion Room, a standard reunion room with standard table and around 9 chairs. Nvd was sitting in the edge of the table, as he was the proclaimed owner of Everybody Edits. Kingoftheozone and Master1 was sitting in the right side of the table, while Different55 was sitting at the other side. Nou was trapped in a small cage, with no way to exit, but he didn't really cared.
- Nice place. - Nou comments.
- You said exactly the same thing when I entered this for the first time. - Different55 answers surprised.
- Thank you, but we're here for serious business. - Nvd answers.
- Yes, your serious business, trap me here just to ban me instead of having me banned in my world. - Nou continues.
- Not really. - Nvd answers.
- Then what is it? - Nou asks. - You could've just banned me in my world.
- Nou, we need you. - Nvd answers.
- He is making yourself a guardian. - Different55 warns.
- Why? - Nou asks.
- You're good enough to be one. - Jawapa answers.
- Why do you think that? All I do is make EX Crew maps, not ban everybody. - Nou answers.
- But you have the ability, the bot you made can just remove the visibility of some hidden worlds. - Nvd says.
- Ability to ban all my friends? - Nou asks.
- You know we're doing it for the future of Everybody Edits, and you even agreed with us. - Nvd answers. - Are you accepting this offer ot not?

The Pier
Badoosh

Toop was likely leading the group of survivors. He already explained what he was going to do, now he was just asking questions. Pratically everybody who wasn't banned or missing was here, Stagecrew, Itsmeandersonlol, Anch159, Drstereos, 20feedy, 4thewin, Buzzerbee, N1KF, Pyromaniac, Tak4n, Ipwner and Badoosh.
- Are you sure this will work, Toop? - Tak4n asks.
- I know the guardians will get a little mad on me, but I'm likely your last hope. - Toop answers.
- What if they're doing it right? - N1KF asks.
- No, the guardians are evil. - Drstereos answers.
- I agree with Drstereos. - Pyromaniac agrees, trying to not laugh.
- Whoever thinks guardians are doing what is right for Everybody Edits, feel free to leave the world and give yourselves to them. - Toop answers.

TO BE CONTINUED

I changed Chapter 5 name to This or That, sorry, no Agony Party now, chapter 5 will have 3 parts instead of 4 parts. I will try to finish chapter 5 today and epilogue tomorrow.

Also, sorry, no alts, no matter what, I find it a quite uninteresting, I don't like overpowering users. Registration and login system is broken and you can't do anything once banned.

Oh, I'm making something new for Chapter 5, I hope you enjoy it.

Michele · 2015-04-27 18:17:56

Not like that! I don't want a ban! I finally tricked Jawapa!

realmaster42 · 2015-05-08 07:47:44

1st. this died

2nd. i wasnt added yet after 2 chapters u had promised me to be in

Mouseh · 2015-05-09 01:36:52

When will I appear again?

Creature · 2015-05-09 01:52:36

This died because this got no more attention, I'm coming back once I have a plan and most of you are insisting to I revive this.

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