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Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Since my old writing thread was destroyed with the old forums, what better way then to start anew?

These are the writings and linguistic stylings of me, Calicara. I will update the topic as I see fit.
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Original Fiction

The Mouse and the Mole
The Harp

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Original Poetry

Campfire

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Original Other

Amare

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Calicara

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Can't you make something more interesting?

I'm sorry if my writing is to complex for your first grade reading level.

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Can't you make something more interesting?

I'm pretty sure she's not writing based off of what you want to read. She's writing what she feels like writing. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it.

Please stop feeling obligated to leave a comment on every single topic someone makes. Most of your comments are pointless because of this.

Nice work failgirl :>

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Excellent, Calicara.

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Calicara

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Thank guys!

Legitimate critique is also welcome. I do think I write well, but I always aim to improve.

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Can't you make something more interesting?

I'm sorry if my writing is to complex for your first grade reading level.

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Thank guys!

Legitimate critique is also welcome. I do think I write well, but I always aim to improve.

Creature hates for the fact of hating.

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Calicara

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Thank guys!

Legitimate critique is also welcome. I do think I write well, but I always aim to improve.

Creature hates for the fact of hating.

Yes I'm aware. And I also found Pingohits post quite humorous. But the more you guys run the joke the more control you're giving Creature over the topic. Please don't let one uneducated post ruin the whole thing. Thank you.

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Calicara is right, you're making this topic a "Creature hate" topic.

Btw, what I mean't was that the poetry was too short, and I don't like it, I also saw Amare and didn't liked it much too, I didn't thought you were going to be offended by it. Anyways, I liked the story, but I think it's too short and a bit boring.

Now my first post has no matter, i'm going to delete it. Congrats for ruining the joke.

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Calicara

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Calicara is right, you're making this topic a "Creature hate" topic.

Btw, what I mean't was that the poetry was too short, and I don't like it, I also saw Amare and didn't liked it much too, I didn't thought you were going to be offended by it. Anyways, I liked the story, but I think it's too short and a bit boring.

Now my first post has no matter, i'm going to delete it. Congrats for ruining the joke.

I'm sad that you didn't like the poetry, but that's ok. Amare isn't a story, that's why I put it under other. I had an assignment where the goal was to create a 'magical world'. So the world I created was Amare. Lastly I'm not offended, it's just that your OP was posted moments after I posted my topic (meaning you couldn't have had a chance to possibly read anything other than the poem.), and it had nothing to contribute as far as constructive feedback. It's ok to not like something, but you should have a good reason why. If it's boring say why it was boring. That's all.

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

my writing style is so far down the calicara spectrum it's not even on the spectrum

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

A world ruled by emotion... are you writing about feminists?

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my writing style is so far down the calicara spectrum it's not even on the spectrum

my writing style is so far down the pingohits spectrum it's not even on the spectrum
Yes but mine is lower than yours.

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

A world ruled by emotion... are you writing about feminists?

I didn't have feminists in mind when I wrote this, but you are welcome to interpret it as you will. The original idea was about a land called 'emoshen', and the center was love. From there I expanded by making the name Amare, which in Italian, literally means 'to love'. I personified the providences based on the general reactions I've observed when people experience certain emotions. Generally we smile when happy, cry when sad, want to be alone when we're miserable, are hot-headed when we're angry, and peaceful in forgiveness (or at least meaning to be.) And though it is not perhaps a perfect analogy, I did try my best to add complexity. If there's anything you had a suggestion for I'd appreciate the feedback.

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Woah man I was just making a witty comment, I don't need your whole life story!

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

Added, The Harp. It's a long one clocking in at seven pages. Please only leave critique if you read the whole thing. Thanks.

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

clocking in at seven pages.

Can you explain me why you think it's seven pages? I only see one.

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Re: Calicara's Writing (2015 and Beyond!)

clocking in at seven pages.

Can you explain me why you think it's seven pages? I only see one.

Seven pages in a microsoft word document, double spaced.

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