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Drew12345

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

One caveman picks a blossom thinking it could be used to cure the disease

ChaosDemon

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

Before the man could bring the blossom   the disease spreads to a few more men

The men who had the disease a few posts ago lose their hair as a side effect

The blossom man must move quickly!

Last edited by ChaosDemon (Aug 12 2012 12:45:20 pm)

DryKirby

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The woman with the rose has put it in her hair, thus we are able to distinguish her from the rest. The bone that was once in her hair is now on the dirt.

The man with the blossom has fed it to the man who thinks they are food, and he is cured from the disease. The leader, seeing this, demands that the blossoms be gathered to be fed to the sick men.

The man who was mining has returned home, no more rocks for today.

The monster in the water has revealed more of itself, and one of the fish is strangely missing...

One woman, seeing that two men have lost their hair, has built them a hospital to rest in. Unfortunately, as she does not know of the medicine, she simply leaves them to lie down.

The sun is almost set and the sky has darkened.

(One of the cherry blossoms is missing since the man picked it.)

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if a girl does not have yuri then she is lost

but that same girl can be lost in the yuri

ChaosDemon

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The "Healer" is given red clothes so that he could be distinguishable from everyone else, the healer also goes to the hospital cave, the third sick man rushes to the hospital cave after noticing that his hair fell out

Two people stand on the cliff so that they could collect a sapling of the tree so that they could grow the "Healing Tree" at the village

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ILoveBacon

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

someone should add petroglyphs of the sick people.

ChaosDemon

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

Another village chief (In orange clothes) arrived for a trade, you see his village was also infected with the disease so he's asking for about 4-6 healing blossoms in exchange for 14 large pieces of rock does the chief accept?

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DryKirby

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

The chief accepts! This has opened up trade routes between the two tribes.

2 cherries have blossomed, which are worth twice than regular blossoms. Two more blossoms have grown.

Most people finally are able to be distinguished. The man and woman on watch of the tree are given different haircuts, while the "nurse" is given white clothes. The chief himself is given longer hair and brows.

Inside the "hospital", it is discovered that the blossoms can be torn apart, each able to heal 1 person for a total of four people. Cherries can heal up to 8 people.

The child continues into the cave, not knowing of the sunset.

The sun has completely set, and twilight has fallen. Most people have returned to their homes. The water monster turns away.

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if a girl does not have yuri then she is lost

but that same girl can be lost in the yuri

Wolf exile1

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

Meanwhile in the cave, The child finds some pink, Glowing crystals.

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KanibalFrost

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A lost dog wandered into the village following the smell of bone.
The 'orange' tribe started carrying the stones to the place where a stone hut is being built.
Just as a man and a woman on the top of the cliff pick up the blossoms a lightning strikes into the tree and sets in on fire.
The rest of the two menhirs collapsed because of the strike.
A little girl that heard the lightning ran out of the cave.

Drew12345

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The fire starts to burn brighter!
The two chiefs notice the fire but don't know what to do!
One man gets an idea from the water. What could it be?

ChaosDemon

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^^^^ Hey what?! I said "Declare" why'd you post?

It starts raining and extinguishes the fire
One of the sick guys dies because cure took too long to do it's magic
The cherries burned
The chief and sick guy left to their village

Drew12345

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

sry I didnt see it I musta started before you... i never say declare...

with the rest of the rocks moved the orange tribe leaves
work continues on the hut

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DryKirby

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

(May I ask what a declare is?)

The orange tribe has returned and set up a tent using cloth found in their village.

The rainclouds have moved to the right.
It has stopped raining temporarily.

Due to the lightning strike, a cherry seed was released. The raining has caused a seedling to sprout.

The dog has taken the bone and ran away.

The dead body has decayed, and the people on watch have given the blossoms to the hospital.

The water levels have risen slightly due to rain.
One man has stabbed his sword in the water and has caught a fish!

Last edited by DryKirby64 (Aug 13 2012 1:09:20 am)

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if a girl does not have yuri then she is lost

but that same girl can be lost in the yuri

ILoveBacon

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Not many changes, a path was made, to get to the other village.

A sick man is able to stand and started re-growing his hair. His skin is still greenish though.and he hasn't grown his nose back.
The man continues fishing. It seems to be some kind of salmon.

Petroglyphs are made of the sick and the blossoms and some more words appeard. It means "Sick" and one letter seems to have been copied from one rock to the other. Maybe they're both the letter 's' because its in both words.

It got darker and someone claims to see a face on the moon.

No more work on the stone house, being as its night and everybodies at home.

Last edited by ILoveBacon (Aug 13 2012 1:42:34 am)

DryKirby

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(^congrats on 1400th post)

Seriously, what is a declare? Is it like "calling" a post?

(I'll post whenever I can tomorrow as I am on my 3DS right now.)

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if a girl does not have yuri then she is lost

but that same girl can be lost in the yuri

ILoveBacon

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Yes, a declare is calling a post. If you say declare you're saying that you're making the picture, because sometimes it takes a while.

Drew12345

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The fisher catches more fish.
The sapling grows a bit.
A sign that says trade is put in front of the tent.
One man aproaches the crystals feeling a strange "godly" power eminating from them.
He also notices a strange symbol in the dirt above them.

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Bobithan

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

While everybody is in their homes for the night, a man in a black robe arrives and tries to steal a boulder. The fisherman notices the thief.

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aka towwl

DryKirby

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__________Problem? v

The fisherman has stabbed the thief with his spear, and he drops dead. The rock is safe, but it's revealed that the spy has no face!

Meanwhile, the fish are starting to swim away after seeing their brothers being caught.

The first sick man can finally walk again, and the second can stand. However, his hair is growing in black instead of brown.

The moon is rising and the stars are starting to come out. Some say they look like the pictures they draw on rocks.

The rain clouds have moved to the right more. It seems it won't rain anymore today.

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If anyone's wondering where I'm getting the emoticons from, they're from Pokémon HeartGold and SoulSilver.

Last edited by DryKirby64 (Aug 13 2012 2:19:15 pm)

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if a girl does not have yuri then she is lost

but that same girl can be lost in the yuri

Drew12345

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The man from the cave hurridly interupts the chief to explain his find.
Upon searching the faceless thief, the fisherman discovers that the thief was carrying a precious stone...

Zakleo

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

Snow on the mountains to make them look more realistic.

Someone turns the light on inthe tent.

Oh and the moon is sad now.

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Tachyonic

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Someone turns the light on inthe tent.

How can there be light if fire/electricity hasn't been invented?

Drew12345

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^^ they caught a bunch of lightning bugs

poof its daytime

Last edited by drew12345 (Aug 14 2012 10:23:05 am)

ChaosDemon

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

Extended the map to reveal a village of faceless black clothed men blocked from the views of the Stone Village by rocks

The back story is that when a person dies from the disease he descends underground and tunnels to the village to become on of "them" and since women are immune to the original disease there are no women in the black faceless village

One of the sick people is regaining his color

Fact the Faceless men hate the blossom

Last edited by ChaosDemon (Aug 14 2012 12:00:51 pm)

ILoveBacon

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Re: Developing Picture: Stone Age Village

Ohhh no. The wars are coming. Not again. Tell me when they're over. I'll be in my cave.