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#1 Before February 2015

Muffy
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A Harsh World

My soul has been eaten by the hungry people on the sidewalks,
Eyes filled with despair and hatred for those who took their belongings
Forever they will want revenge,
But not pity.
I say these words that come to me
I translate them from the experiences I've had,
Those who don't understand the wanting of wealth,
You soon will when we all turn against each other
Chaos ruling us,
And with nothing at our feet but blood,skin and hope,
For a better furture,
But that will never come,
Because you see,
Our civilization was never meant to be.
We are an experiment,
By god,
To test the greediness and faith we have,
And we have failed,
Or soon to have.
For as you see nothing will ever reachable golden age,
Just a world with people who dont even know they are being eaten alive
By themselves.....

#2 Before February 2015

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Re: A Harsh World

Wonderful poem.

(If you care, you spelled future wrong in line 11)


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#3 Before February 2015

Muffy
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Re: A Harsh World

Yeah,thanks for the feedback,i would like some more good or bad

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