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LegoLover

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LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

Hi. These comics are made by LegoLover (Legolover on EE) and cr2000 (Lego101 on EE).

The Secret Underground Water Cave - Part I:

The Secret Underground Water Cave - Part II:

Superhero Factory Workers - Part I:

The Smiley Hacker:

The Annoying Student - Part I:

Don't Drink That!:

Progressing:
EE Miner Part I - LL1 Comics.
Vikings Vs Wizards - LL1 Comics.
Factory Days Part I - LL1 Comics.
Superhero Factory Workers Part II - LL1 Comics.
The Annoying Student Part II - LL1 Comics.

We take requests for new comics.
Comment if you wish.
Our current comics per day average: 1.75

Fun Challenge!
Try to spot the deliberate and subtle mistake in one of these comics.
The answer wil be revealed on 29-07-12.

Last edited by LegoLover (Jul 25 2012 1:24:29 pm)

Gryllus

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

Good story, but it is slightly choppy and needs transition. However, I think you have a resplendent start to what could be a great comic.

Also, your organization of the screenshots makes it easy to read, unlike some other comics I've read.

When sizing your boxes, remember that the more important/ dramatic scenes are larger, and adding different shaped comic scenes (such as a circular shape if the focus is on a certain character or object), it would definitely make it more eye catching. Facial expressions also help convey the mood the characters react to any certain event.

If you follow this advice you would have an awesome advantage to your comic making.

I'm really excited to see how the sequel turns out.

Last edited by Gryllus (Jul 22 2012 4:49:06 pm)

cr2000

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

ok we will thanks for   advice

we are makeing part 2 now

Last edited by cr2000 (Jul 23 2012 3:16:42 am)

LegoLover

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

Thanks for the feedback, Gryllus.
Also, TSUWC Part II is finished.
-Edit- A new comic called Superhero Factory Workers is finished.

Last edited by LegoLover (Jul 23 2012 11:01:47 am)

cr2000

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

the first part is finished

Viveo

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

Nice comics.

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

Nice. I'll be sure to check this topic every few days!

29-07-12

Do you live on a planet with 29 months? Just wondering.

LegoLover

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

I write dates like: Date:Month:Year.
Remember to post your ideas.

C3po345

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

Is Don't Drink That a rip of my Red Smilies?
If so, then you copied a comic that I copied.

LegoLover

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

I didn't even know about that. What is the topic for 'Red Smileys'.

Lexa2004

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Re: LegoLover And cr2000's EE Comics

Yes.
Red Smilies? Did this after me and copied you. C3po,