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Zoom

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I am From

I, Zoom, was given an assignment in my Comp 101 class to write a poem based on: this

I really enjoyed the assignment, and wished to share it with my fellow forumers.

Where I am From
By: Zoom

I am from instant coffee
from fast food and drive-thrus

I am from long school days
boring teachers and classes
preparing for tests to prove my worth

I am from hurry up
no time wasted

I am from apple
using my ipod
playing my theme music wherever I go

I am from computers
driven by technology

I am from cellphones
talking without talking

I am from television
pre-processed information
and commercial brain-washing

I am from evolution
letting machines do my work
while I sit back
and let them control me

Last edited by Zoom (Aug 28 2012 6:33:46 pm)

Fdoou

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Re: I am From

You, Zoom, are really annoying when you start sentences like this.

N1KF

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Re: I am From

You, Zoom, are really annoying when you start sentences like this.

I, Number(1)KirbyFan10, disagrees.

Zoom

Guest

Re: I am From

You, Zoom, are really annoying when you start sentences like this.

Dude seriously get over it, it's just the way I, Zoom, like to type. Reading my posts are optional and you do not have to read them. Stop complaining about the way I, Zoom, speak. I do not criticize you, besides this topic is about the poem that I have written and if you have nothing to say about it please do not post here. Thanks much.

Saintcool

Guest

Re: I am From

Saintcool likes to talk in 3rd person to sometimes, haven't you ever heard her?
Anyways Saintcool thinks that Zoom likes to make weird poems into weird poem pie. Which is a pie that will bring weirdness onto anyone who chows down on such a pie.

Last edited by Saintcool (Aug 28 2012 7:31:56 pm)

Zoom

Guest

Re: I am From

Cool beans Saintcool. I, Zoom, am indeed a very strange being. Though you make fun of me thanks for at least attempting to comment on my poem.

Saintcool

Guest

Re: I am From

Saintcool quotes:

If we shadows have offended,
Think but this, and all is mended,
That you have but slumber'd here
While these visions did appear.
And this weak and idle theme,
No more yielding but a dream,
Gentles, do not reprehend:
if you pardon, we will mend:
And, as I am an honest Puck,
If we have unearned luck
Now to 'scape the serpent's tongue,
We will make amends ere long;
Else the Puck a liar call;
So, good night unto you all.
Give me your hands, if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends.

Different55

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Posts: 16,575

Re: I am From

Different55 thinks this topic needs to get back on topic before someone gets smacked.

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