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Buzzerbee

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BuzzerBee's Poetry

Here is my poetry. I create many different kinds of poems, usually free-verse.

I have a lot more poetry than what is on this topic but I am too lazy to add it.

You can request a poem about anything and I'll try to write it. Just tell me a general theme or something and what kind of a poem you want it to be. (I'm better at free-verse.) I can also write lyrics but I prefer not to.

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Speak To Me (A Religious Lyrical Poem)
by BuzzerBee

Confused and alone; wondering when Your voice will thunder over me with a glorious, melodious tone... but it seems like I can't hear You speak. But I hear all those stories of the "Pastors" and the "good Christians" who say You tell them just what to do. Why can't I know just what to do?

I wanna hear Your voice, God speak to me... speak to me...
I wanna hear just one noise, God speak to me... please, speak to me...

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Cheese
by BuzzerBee, dedicated to Deetz.

People say aging is a curse... But is it?
Aging is what makes fresh milk an edible substance that creates a warmth over you as you indulge on it.
What else brings flavor to a bland piece of bread?
Cheese, syllabically small but surprisingly large in taste.
Muenster, Feta, Parmesan, Swiss, different flavors to pass your lips.
Into your mouth you feel the sensation of happiness, of life. Of complete joy and bliss.
Cheese is the thing that creates a bridge that other food can cross and join to be harmonious.
As you swallow it down you may feel sadness. It's all gone. But you remember you still have more in the fridge...

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Failed Love
by BuzzerBee

True love has failed me once more.
Once was a mistake; twice, who could I blame?
Third time I thought it was real,
but it was cut with a sharp blade.

Why couldn't our souls seal?
Why does she no longer beam?
Is this garbage actually my emotions
that I just couldn't see?

Am I just too young?
Is it not my fault?
Is there any specific reason
why I don't have an atomic bond?

It's not that I didn't love her.
Well I guess it probably is.
But did she love me back?
Or was our future meant to be friends?

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I will try to continue to update.

Last edited by BuzzerBee (Aug 25 2012 4:57:19 am)

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XxAtillaxX

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Joined: 2015-11-28

Posts: 4,202

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Quite some nice work. I can see as one would want a deity to guide them.
However,
The thing that I don't understand about poetry is the way people constantly have to make it seem deep.

In contribution to the poetic stance,
The only poetry that I have not created upon accident is:

"Interject and thou shalt the neural connections flow, integrate the case--understand and obliterate distasteful feelings."

Similarly it could be interpreted as calling to a deity, however it is just my wish to clear my mistakes.

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*u stinky*

Honeybuckles44

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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Roses are red, violets are blue. I wrote this poem, just for you! <3

No really though here's a poem for you. XD

How can the ocean be blue to you when it is clearly red to me ?
If you could see the world through my eyes, you would think its pretty crazy.
The sky is grey the birds are white, there is no day only night.
Your eyes are black and full of hate, this darkness really is my fate.
You came along and gave me life, for granted my world was taken.
Your world is odd and strangly made, I miss my perspective but it will fade.
I thought the world to be magical, you taught me practical.
I'm going back where the sea was red, where roses made my soft bed.
Where magic was spoken and rarely seen, unless your with the one to be.
Where night was bright and day was dark, where when you kiss there is a spark.
I'm going back to my perfect dream, where it can be real or atleast it seems.

Physic

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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Roses are red, violets are blue. I wrote this poem, just for you! <3

No really though here's a poem for you. XD

How can the ocean be blue to you when it is clearly red to me ?
If you could see the world through my eyes, you would think its pretty crazy.
The sky is grey the birds are white, there is no day only night.
Your eyes are black and full of hate, this darkness really is my fate.
You came along and gave me life, for granted my world was taken.
Your world is odd and strangly made, I miss my perspective but it will fade.
I thought the world to be magical, you taught me practical.
I'm going back where the sea was red, where roses made my soft bed.
Where magic was spoken and rarely seen, unless your with the one to be.
Where night was bright and day was dark, where when you kiss there is a spark.
I'm going back to my perfect dream, where it can be real or atleast it seems.

Your a good poem maker.

Deetz

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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Write a poem about Cheese pls.

Fdoou

Banned

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

I have a really deep and meaningful poem:

dfsgdsfgs
fdgsdfgdf
sdfgsdfgg
retrtwrtw

I don't like poetry because the more nonsensical it is, the deeper it is

Zakleo

Guest

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Me like to go
Down to the church
To drink some hooooly water...
And if you don't
Give me a cookie
I will keel, your daughter. ;p
HoneyDuckles, Buzzerbee, nice poems. As you can see I am crap at poetry. +rep.

Last edited by Zakleo (Aug 27 2012 2:57:55 am)

Honeybuckles44

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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

I have a really deep and meaningful poem:

dfsgdsfgs
fdgsdfgdf
sdfgsdfgg
retrtwrtw

I don't like poetry because the more nonsensical it is, the deeper it is

Yours is teh best imo. I would have +repped you but I can't l:<

Buzzerbee

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From: Texas, U.S.A.

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,575

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Added Deetz's poem.

c:

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Deetz

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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

o. m. g. that. is. AMAZING!!!! Now I'm going to challenge you. Make a poem about Radioactive Elements that decay in less than an hour please.

Buzzerbee

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From: Texas, U.S.A.

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,575

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

o. m. g. that. is. AMAZING!!!! Now I'm going to challenge you. Make a poem about Radioactive Elements that decay in less than an hour please.

Hahaha I'll get on it soon ;p

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Honeybuckles44

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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Poem about EE pls.

Sixty Seven

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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Roses are red, violets are blue, stfu, or i'll ignore you.

Roses are red, violets are blue, I have five fingers, and the middle one if for you. t(-_-t)

Roses are red, violets are blue, I love Teddy and he loves me too.   Lol jk

Last edited by Sixty_Seven (Aug 23 2012 10:09:30 pm)

Muffy

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Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

I'd thought I'd share my exapmles here.
All right here's another peom,I'll be adding more in here instead of flooding the forums.

NEW!
My heart is aching,
She is gone,
I lost her because of my rage,
I didnt trust her,
Now i have nothing,
Trust is all,
Most of love,
I wish i could turn time,
But thats just a wish,
She trusted me,
Which is a gift,
I didnt return that present,
But Ruined hers,
And now I regret all,
Maybe theres a chance,
Of reliving those moments,
Or even create more,
But hey,
Thats only a wish...
(Took me a while to write because of the emotions)

NEW!
I lay there on the grass,
Looking at the sky,
I wonder whats up there,
If theres someone looking back,
I see shapes,
That remind me of things,
Bringing back memories,
So much is happening,
Up in the starry night,
Dying,
Birth,
Of the stars,
Just like us,
So much things that are different,
Kind of are the same,
When I look up at the stars,
I have a million questions,
Just like how many stars are in the sky,
But no answer to them,
Just like Life...

New!
The spider,
A marvelous creature,
Though feared by many,
Its talent is hidden,
Spinning amazing and beautiful art,
But not just for show,but to help survive...
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New!
A leaf is hidden,
covered by many other beautiful plants,
Though this leaf,
A rigid edged,
Plain green color,
Nothing to look at,
But it has a power,
And aroma of lemony dreams,
And some beauty are meant to be found...
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The sky is always gray,
Falling teardrops hit me,
Storms approaching us soon,
The earth trembling with a quake,
Fires burning everywhere,
And chaos ruling all our souls.
We so all become self aware,
That we will be soon turning on each other,
Just for another mere day of survival,
Living in a chaotic and unstable world,
How will the world end?
Well that we will find out soon,
For we won't last long,
...Thou has no idea of the things our own creation can do to us...
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My soul has been eaten by the hungry people on the sidewalks,
Eyes filled with despair and hatred for those who took their belongings
Forever they will want revenge,
But not pity.
I say these words that come to me
I translate them from the experiences I've had,
Those who don't understand the wanting of wealth,
You soon will when we all turn against each other
Chaos ruling us,
And with nothing at our feet but blood,skin and hope,
For a better furture,
But that will never come,
Because you see,
Our civilization was never meant to be.
We are an experiment,
By god,
To test the greediness and faith we have,
And we have failed,
Or soon to have.
For as you see nothing will ever reachable golden age,
Just a world with people who dont even know they are being eaten alive
By themselves.....
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My hands,
Numb from working,
Blisters filled with blood tears and pain,
My feet,
Scrapped from the hard concrete floor,
Blood gushing out,
Some cuts closing,
Others reopening,
And my back,
Whipped and bloody,
Cuts as long as my thighs,
And as aside as my thumb,
I take time to look up in the sky,
But it doesn't last long,
When the clouds of tears come,
And then I see shapes,
Telling the future,
This isn't good...

Buzzerbee

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From: Texas, U.S.A.

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,575

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Updated OP with a new poem and more organization.

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Tachyonic

Guest

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Another
Brilliant,
Creative
Design -
Effective
For
Good
Heir
Immortality.
JUST
KIDDING
LOL!!
My
Number
One
Principal -
Questioning
Relevant-less
Surprises
To
Understand
Villains
Who
X-ray
Your
Zebras

What is this I don't even?

Last edited by Tachyonic (Aug 25 2012 5:37:38 pm)

Buzzerbee

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From: Texas, U.S.A.

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,575

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

random alphabet acronym

Um. That's nice. Should I be concerned for your mental health?

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Tachyonic

Guest

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

random alphabet acronym

Um. That's nice. Should I be concerned for your mental health?

I would.

Deetz

Guest

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

I wantz da radioactive quick decaying elementzorz! Wer iz dat?

Zakleo

Guest

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

I'd thought I'd share my exapmles here.
All right here's another peom,I'll be adding more in here instead of flooding the forums.

NEW!
My heart is aching,
She is gone,
I lost her because of my rage,
I didnt trust her,
Now i have nothing,
Trust is all,
Most of love,
I wish i could turn time,
But thats just a wish,
She trusted me,
Which is a gift,
I didnt return that present,
But Ruined hers,
And now I regret all,
Maybe theres a chance,
Of reliving those moments,
Or even create more,
But hey,
Thats only a wish...

Oh... My... God... That's the most beuatifull thing I've ever heard! And it came from you!

I would totally give you a +rep if your rep was enabled.

Last edited by Zakleo (Aug 27 2012 3:02:16 am)

Muffy

Guest

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

I'd thought I'd share my exapmles here.
All right here's another peom,I'll be adding more in here instead of flooding the forums.

NEW!
My heart is aching,
She is gone,
I lost her because of my rage,
I didnt trust her,
Now i have nothing,
Trust is all,
Most of love,
I wish i could turn time,
But thats just a wish,
She trusted me,
Which is a gift,
I didnt return that present,
But Ruined hers,
And now I regret all,
Maybe theres a chance,
Of reliving those moments,
Or even create more,
But hey,
Thats only a wish...

Oh... My... God... That's the most beuatifull thing I've ever heard! And it came from you!

I would totally give you a +rep if your rep was enabled.

Surprising if it came from a 13 year old jock, maybe : P

Thanks, but ill hold that rep for sometime later. If you like it, i would appreciate it if you posted in my topic

Buzzerbee

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From: Texas, U.S.A.

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,575

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Thanks everyone for advertising their poems and not giving a damn about mine.

:c

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Tachyonic

Guest

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Thanks everyone for advertising their poems and not giving a damn about mine.

:c

What about mine?

Muffy

Guest

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Thanks everyone for advertising their poems and not giving a damn about mine.

:c

Sorry, but hey I said it was great, and I wasn't the first to advertise.....

normaluser

Guest

Re: BuzzerBee's Poetry

Roses are red, violets are blue, I think I need to use the loo.