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ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 11 ? Super Success

Darkness Bomb: INITIATING COUNTDOWN TO DETONATION.

Mr Void: What?

Darkness Bomb: 10.

Helvi: Oh, it?s our last ten seconds alive.

Darkness Bomb: 9.

Arceus64: Oh no?

Darkness Bomb: 8.

Bass5098: I guess this is the end?

Darkness Bomb: 7.

sensei1: I never thought this is how I?d die?

Darkness Bomb: 6.

Mr Void: I wish we could say goodbye to all the others one more time?

Darkness Bomb: 5.

Helvi: Is this truly our fate?

Darkness Bomb: 4.

???: Nope, it isn?t!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=wubN9O34TkY

Mr Void: Huh?

Mr Shoe: Hey, everyone!

Mr Shoe suddenly was next to the cage, and appeared to be flashing different colors.

Bass5098: Mr?Shoe? :O

Mr Shoe: In the flesh!

Arceus64: What are you doing here?

Darkness Bomb: 3.

Mr Shoe: I don?t think this is the time to talk about that right now, so I?ll get you all out of here while I can!

Darkness Bomb: 2.

Mr Shoe quickly pressed a button outside of the walls, and it opened them up.

Mr Void: Okay, even though we?re out, there?s no time to run!

Darkness Bomb: 1.

Mr Shoe: I came prepared.

Darkness Bomb: 0. INITIATING DETONATION NOW.

Suddenly, Mr Shoe used some power to teleport all of the players away from the bomb!

Fwoosh

KA-BOOM!

Millions of darkness particles engulfed the air, but the heroes had escaped just in time.

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General ? Maxi: YOU CAN?T KEEP THIS UP FOR MUCH LONGER! YOU MIGHT AS WELL SURRENDER NOW!

GravityFractal: Never!

Bonk!

Another guest was impaled onto the Space Stuff.

Onipede: Gravity, he?s got a point. We really can?t keep this up forever.

GravityFractal: Okay, then let?s race back to the castle.

SBeam: There?s most likely a free space to land now.

Aoitenshi: Okay, go!

SBeam turned the Space Stuff around and went zooming back to the castle.

General ? Maxi: WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU?RE GOING NOW? AFTER THEM!

Guest ? 1337: Yes sir!

Shortly, after a while, the players made it back to the castle and landed.

Chris: I don?t see them anywhere, but we should keep it safe and hurry in.

Everyone ran into the castle.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=fGrhNmSn29Y

Toby: Hmph, seems dark enough.

He he he!

KingPooultra: What was that?

SquadFS: raises hands   I don?t know man, I don?t know.

Ho ho ho!

Sharkguy123: o.o What?s going on?

Awww?.hehehehe!

Cola1: Reveal yourself, you coward!

GirforGod2000: Eek! Let me go!

ShinyPorygon5: GFG?!?!

Cass6869: Ugh, get your hands off of me!

FailGirl101: Help me!

itlives: Girls, what?s wrong? Where are you?

The ladies didn?t respond.

RPGMASTER2000: This isn?t funny, what?s going on?

MawkM233: Girls, where are you? Girls?!?!?

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There you go! I hoped you liked it as much as I liked making it!

Last edited by ShinyPorygon5 (Jun 8 2013 7:15:32 am)

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 12 ? Mission for the Missing

Fwoosh

Mr Shoe had teleported to the spot where Chris and the other players were gathered.

Mr Void: Why is it so dark here?

Chris and the others: Mr Shoe?

Mr Shoe: Hello everyone!

Toby: I can?t see you, but hi!

Different55: This darkness is an issue.

Theeditor: What do you expect? It?s called Dark Castle for a reason.

TOOP: I have an idea. Everyone use their nightvision smilies.

Everyone turned on their nightvision smiley.

KillingPepper123: Nice! I can see now!

Bill33: So, where?s somewhere to go?

NOW!

ShinyPorygon5: Huh?

Commander ? Obscurum and a bunch of other guests had gathered around the players.

Commander ? Obscurum: So, it seems as if Maxi has failed. Hmm, typical?

DarkStar32: So, what do you have planned for us this time? We?ll take down your guests again if we have to.

Commander ? Obscurum: Oh, I have another trick up my sleeve?.

Then, Commander ? Obscurum placed a strange object which resembled a world portal.

itlives: What are you planning on doing with that? It?s just a world portal.

Commander ? Obscurum: Not just any world portal.

Commander ? Obscurum snapped his fingers and then the world portal started to suck in the players.

Muffin: Wah!

KingOfTheOZone: Oh no!

michaelan: Woah!

Chris was the last one to be sucked in, yet he dug his hands that smilies don?t have into the ground as he struggled to keep in.

Chris: You..monster! Where does this lead??!?!?!

Commander ? Obscurum: It?s a suprise. Have fun!

?No!!!? Chris yelled as Commander ? Obscurum pryed his fingers off the ground and as he was sucked into the portal.

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Chris: Wha?Where are we?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=450s8mYLVrw

Bimps1002: ? O-O

Last edited by ShinyPorygon5 (Jun 8 2013 7:05:21 am)

skullz17

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

I love the ending to that chapter.

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thx for sig bobithan

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

I love the ending to that chapter.

Then you'll love the next few.

rocktheworld313

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

That song at the end... it's just perfect

kooldude9000

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

That song at the end... it's just perfect

I don't actually listen to the music, I'm so imaginative that I create my own music in my head
And, btw, story is great and easy to follow (for me). Nice work

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

That song at the end... it's just perfect

I don't actually listen to the music, I'm so imaginative that I create my own music in my head
And, btw, story is great and easy to follow (for me). Nice work

You should listen to the music, it really helps mental imaging of the story.

rocktheworld313

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Your writing style is better than mine. I have trouble writing three lines of storyline about a two week event.

Supershadow30

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Wow!! I wait the next chapter with good thinking... *think to Nyan Cat.* Oh wait... bad subject... *think to the next chapter...*

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 13 ? A Blast from the Past

www.youtube.com/watch?v=3zIf4lj5rFY

BEE: Uhh, what happened to us?

Arceus64: Everything here looks so?retro.

Deetz: Yeah, including us.

Processor: Where are we? Why is everything like this?

SBeam: According to my knowledge, the supposed world portal Commander ? Obscurum threw us into led to some sort of alternate dimension, where apparentely graphics are different.

DarknessPr0ject: Well, this isn?t good. What are we going to do?

RPGMASTER2000: If world portals exist in our dimension, shouldn?t they exist here?

MIHB: I guess it?s worth a chance of them being here.

Helvi: So, I guess we should explore and look for an exit, right?

SBeam: Precisely. However I think we should try and stay together, because we?ve all been separated way too many times in this story.

With that, everyone began searching around the alternate dimension looking for an exit.

Soon, everyone reformed their group, to find no sight of a world portal.

SBeam: Hmm, that?s not good. You?re sure you checked everywhere?

Everyone: Yes. Yeah. We did.

SBeam: Hmm..this is certainly unfortunate?

HEY!

GravityFractal: Huh?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=zbgYHmEbbAw

General ? Maxi: HEY, STOP RIGHT THERE!

Toby: General ? Maxi? What are you doing here?

General ? Maxi: I DO NOT HAVE TIME FOR FOOLISH QUESTIONS. I AM HERE ONLY TO SEEK REVENGE, AS YOU DID NOT FOLLOW MY ORDERS WHEN I INSTRUCTED YOU TO STOP EARLIER.

Onipede: Well, duh, of course we?re not going to follow them. You?re the evil ones.

General ? Maxi: REGARDLESS, I AM STILL GOING TO HAVE MY VENGEANCE! GUESTS! ATTACK!

Chris: Alright, bring it! Everybody, into battle!

Guests: YAH!

Players: YAH!

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Meanwhile, with the trapped females?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=dw2blmvEcQE

Commander ? Obscurum: Maxi couldn?t have been more ignorant than to enter the alternate dimension in pursuit of the players, such a fool?

GirlforGod2000: Let me out of here! Who are you? What are you going to do with this planet?

Commander ? Obscurum: Why should I give you such valuable information? It is none of your business.

GirlforGod2000: It is; it?s our planet!

FailGirl101: Yeah, tell us.

Commander ? Obscurum: Very well. I?ll explain to you our intentions. Not that you?d be using them for anything since you?re caged.

Commander ? Obscurum: Our goal, is to engulf this planet with darkness. Which we?ve managed to succeed in. Unfortunately, you all survived the attack. I don?t care to know how that?s possible, but carrying on, after we?ve engulfed this entire place in darkness, we?re going to neutralize it.

FailGirl101: Neutralize??

Commander ? Obscurum: Exactly. Once we neutralize it, our master will be able to control the physics here in any way he wants. Which means, you and all of your friends in there will be no more. Whatever device you created won?t be enough to handle it, and you will disintegrate from all of the unworldly power and pressure.

GirlforGod2000: Why do you want this planet?

Commander ? Obscurum: Why do we want it? Ha, you?re digging too deep for information there. That?s something I cannot explain to you. Only our master knows.

FailGirl101: Why do you express loyalty towards him though? Why do you worship him?

Commander ? Obscurum: All of the members of the darkness are composed of it. Our master is as well. He created us, and we return the favor by following his orders. Everything in the guest?s minds are controlled by other parts of darkness, which feel the same way. However, we must retain a physical form to fit the physics of this planet. That is why we are given the ability to possess them.

GirlforGod2000: Well, what abo-

Commander ? Obscurum: I do not have time for fifty questions. I have other tasks I must complete at the moment. Good-bye.

FailGirl101: Wait!

Too late. Obscurum had left.

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END

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 14 ? Breaking into Bits

www.youtube.com/watch?v=bfYdto7cL4M

Everyone: YAH!!!

The players jumped into battle, followed by the guests.

Helvi: Hah!

Guest ? 1337: Die!

Toby: Ack!

Toby was almost hit by a dark laser shot by General ? Maxi.

General ? Maxi: YOU CAN RUN, BUT YOU CAN?T HIDE!

As the laser was nearing toward Toby as he was dashing furiously, Kentiya came down from a platform above and crashed into General ? Maxi.

SMASH!

Meanwhile, Arceus64 was having an all-out brawl with Guest ? 32.

Arceus64: Hah! Yah! Die!

Guest ? 32: Oof, Ka-bah!

Rurigok was being kicked back and forth between Guest ? 666 and Guest ? 911.

Punch!

Rurigok: Ouch, well that hurt!

Kick!

Rurigok: Ooh! Stop it!

BEE was shooting off random guests which tried to attack him.

BEE: HYUSUKEN!

BLAST!

Guest ? 56, 788, 211: AHH!

Fighting occured everywhere, it was an epic 8-bit battle.

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Meanwhile, with the females held hostage?

FailGirl101: I?ve got a plan to get out of here.

GirlforGod2000: What?

FailGirl101: If we keep swinging this back and forth, we can get out.

Honeybuckles44: I?m in.

All of the girls started shaking the cage back and forth, slowly gaining speed.

CRACK!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=UqLtN_mMgi8

Guest ? 94: Hey, what?s going on in there?

FailGirl101: Faster, hurry, before they get in here!

CRACK!

Guest ? 94: Alright, I?m coming in there!

SNAP!

The cage fell to the ground, followed by the door being pushed open.

Honeybuckles44: Make a run for it!

Guest ? 94 walked into the room.

Guest ? 94: Hey, they?re getting out! Quick sound the alarm! All troops! Escaped hostages!

GirlforGod2000: Keep running! Don?t look back!

The girls ran down a seperate hallway while the remaining guests were in pursuit of them.

Guest ? 94: After them! They?re getting away! Someone go get Commander. O!

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So, sorry for not getting this chapter in! As I said before, I barely have had a chance to connect to the internet!

But, don?t worry now, it won?t be as long before the next chapter comes. Stay tuned.

Last edited by ShinyPorygon5 (Jun 12 2013 10:16:12 pm)

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 15 ? Eagerly Escaping

While Kentiya was delivering damage towards General ? Maxi, he finished him with a hard uppercut, which appeared to have knocked something out of him.

Kentiya: Hmm? What?s this?

Kentiya bent over and looked at the item Maxi had dropped on the ground accidentally.

Kentiya: This looks like?a world portal!

Kentiya: Everybody, look! It?s a world portal!

Hyproblast: Where?

Kentiya: Right here!

Chris: Quick, everybody RUN! Let?s get the heck out of here!

General ? Maxi: UGH, NOT SO FAST!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=Im9O1hZsdR4

Chris: Run!

General ? Maxi: GUESTS, GET THEM!

lewis4455: Ahh, run!

GravityFractal: Dodge them and keep going!

Everyone was running as fast as they could past General ? Maxi?s guest soldiers to escape.

General ? Maxi: WAIT A SECOND, IF THEY GET OUT WITHOUT US, WE?LL BE TRAPPED IN HERE TOO! FORGET ABOUT THEM, GET OUT OF HERE!

So now, the players and the guests were running for their lives in a desperate attempt to get out of the alternate dimension.

Mr Shoe: Make way!

BEE: Tally-ho!

ShinyPorygon5: Move it or lose it!

General ? Maxi: DON?T THINK YOU CAN GET AWAY!

hyproblast: Bye 8-bit world!

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www.youtube.com/watch?v=J2mtd-HbsJ4

GirlforGod2000: They?re gaining on us!

Failgirl101: Oh no, look ahead!

A crowd of guests were up ahead, making the girls surrounded by guests.

Soon through the crowd, Commander ? Obscurum stepped up to the front.

Commander ? Obscurum: This is almost too funny. Did you really think that you could escape that easily? It?s an entire army of possessed guests vs you. Really, what are the odds?

Honeybuckles44: Can it, Obscurum. You?d better let us and all the other trapped ones out of here right now.

Commander ? Obscurum: Hmph. I wouldn?t count on seeing your little friends again. General ? Maxi wouldn?t have let go of the escape route he took to some incoherent useless life forms.

GirlforGod2000: So then what are you going to do to us now?

Commander ? Obscurum: Well, you obviously can break out of the cage. And because of our limited supplies due to being on an alien planet, we?ll just have to get rid of you with brute force.

FailGirl101: Wait, you?re going to kill us!?

Commander ? Obscurum: As extreme as it seems, yes. If that?s how you want to phrase it.

Honeybuckles44: WHAT? You can?t! That?s cruel!

Commander ? Obscurum: Don?t worry. It?ll be quick and painless.

One of the guests took out a large gun like weapon.

Guest ? 666: Ready?

Suddenly, an electric noise occurred from somewhere.

Guest ? 666: Aim?

The electric noise occurred again this time, but a spark of light was seen with it.

Guest ? 666: FIRE!

Just then, right before Guest ? 666 shot the laser, a world portal appeared, and TheGreenTroll fell out from it, smack dab into Guest ? 666 and made a large interruption.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=ocnSg8CikkA

Guest ? 666: UGH!

Guest ? 666 was thrown back a few feet.

Commander ? Obscurum: What the devil?

In sequence to TheGreenTroll coming out, tons of other players and guests came out of the world portal.

GirlforGod2000: Quick! Move!

Soon, after everyone had come out of the portal, it closed, and the players sorted on one side, while the members of the darkness sorted onto the other.

Commander ? Obscurum: Grr, Maxi! How could you be so foolish as to let them get the world portal?!

General ? Maxi: IT SLIPPED AWAY WHEN I WAS CAUGHT OFF GUARD. BUT DO NOT WORRY, WE?LL ALL JUST FINISH THESE MEDDLING JOKES ONCE AND FOR ALL.

Cyclone: Do you ever give up?

Guest ? 554: Not until our goal is fufilled!

Toby: Then we?ll keep fighting for our planet!

General ? Maxi: I CAN GURANTEE THAT YOU WILL ALL LOSE THIS MATCH. YOU MIGHT AS WELL SURRENDER NOW.

Chris: I wouldn?t count on it!

Commander ? Obscurum: Troops! Attack!

Chris: Everybody, let?s do this!

Players: YEAH!

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Man, they never stop fighting do they? Oh well. Stick around for the next action-packed chapter of?

A DARK STORY

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 16 ? A Well Known War

Commander ? Obscurum: You. Right there. I?m taking you on.

Mr Shoe: Me? Alright. Let?s do this.

So, Mr Shoe and Commander ? Obscurum engaged in an epic duel, while meanwhile, the players and the guests could be seen in the background having a large war.

MIHB: Hah! You can?t win!

General ? Maxi suddenly sneaked up to MIHB and hit him which launched him across the room

?Ow!? Said MIHB as he landed against something hard.

MIHB looked up, to see something strange that had apparently come out of the object he hit.

MIHB: What is that..? Oh well, I guess it must be useful later on.

MIHB jumped up to the object as it came down, and something in him changed.

MIHB: I feel?different?I feel?.POWERFUL!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=JP47Uc2Yhzk

MIHB suddenly became encloaked in flames, and seemed to be ready to take on anything.

MIHB glared at General ? Maxi, then swiftly dashed toward him leaving a trail of fire in his tracks.

General ? Maxi: WHAT THE-

BAM!

MIHB smashed straight into General ? Maxi while in flames, then, while he was down, quickly threw a large amount of fireballs at him.

After that, while General ? Maxi was down again, he took the time to prepare an attack.

MIHB: This is it! You?re finished!

Meanwhile, other players were fighting with guests.

ShinyPorygon5: Ehh! There?s too many! IT?S NO USE!

SquadFS: We have to fight them off!

LuigiLuma jumped in the air and landed on top of one of the guest?s heads.

Guest ? 699: Augh!

LuigiLuma: Take that!

Next, MissingNo had defeated a guest, and noticed something on the ground.

MissingNo: What the heck?

MissingNo got closer for a better look at the strange object, and picked it up for better examination. However, upon touching it, the strange object suddenly changed his appearance.

MissingNo: As comfortable as this is, it?s really weird?oh well.

MissingNo spotted a bunch of guests headed toward him.

MissingNo: Ahh!

As one of the guests was about to pounce on him, his appearance changed again.

Poof!

Guest ? 264, 55, 999: OW!

They said, as they hit the hard rock statue.

After the guests fell off onto the ground, MissingNo turned back to his original suit form.

MissingNo: That was weird?but, whatever?

More players and guests were fighting, but the battle wasn?t completely over yet?

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END

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 17 ? The Devious Difference in the Darkness
www.youtube.com/watch?v=77gv9lEQLUU

*As MIHB prepared up his final attack, he shouted, ?This is it Maxi! This is the end for you!?

General ? Maxi: ?..

General ? Maxi could not do anything other than watch, and he knew he had been defeated?

MIHB: ARGH! TAKE THIS MAXI!

MIHB: AGHH!!!

MIHB shot out a large, fiery, and powerful laser.

PSHHHHHHH!!!

MIHB fell to the ground as he reverted back to his original form.

MIHB: Hah?hah?I?I beat him?

MIHB looked over to where General ? Maxi was.

There, General ? Maxi lie. He knew he was defeated for good.

General ? Maxi: UGH?YOU?HAVE DEFEATED ME?BUT, OUR MASTER?THE LORD?OF THE DARKNESS?BEYOND, HE AWAITS YOUR PRESENCE. HE AWAITS THE FINAL CHALLENGER?

General ? Maxi fell to the ground as he blacked out. Two guests came up and took Maxi away, muttering, ?You haven?t won yet??

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Mr Shoe VS Commander ? Obscurum
www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGyWBZloMTo

Commander ? Obscurum: Let?s do this.

Mr Shoe: Alright!

Mr Shoe pulled out something from his pocket.

Commander ? Obscurum: What?s that you got there, hmm?

Mr Shoe: Oh, just something I found on my way here. I knew it would be useful.

Mr Shoe consumed the ice flower.

Commander ? Obscurum: Hmph. Strange, but, whatever.

Mr Shoe?s body temperature suddenly started to drop, followed by his body starting to become encased in ice.

Mr Shoe: Woo! It?s time to chill out! Let?s do this!

Mr Shoe said as he skated toward Obscurum in a joyful matter.

Mr Shoe: Ha Ha!

Commander ? Obscurum: What the devil? Is this some kind of joke?

Mr Shoe: Not unless you want it to be.

Commander ? Obscurum: Alright, then, prepare yourself!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGyWBZloMTo

The two skated and dashed toward each other.

?Hah!? Obscurum yelled as he dodged Mr Shoe?s ice ball that was pelted towards him.

The two ran across the castle, oftenly clashing against each other.

Commander ? Obscurum jumped in front of Mr Shoe blocking his path, then, swiftly charging up for an attack.

Mr Shoe wasn?t able to dodge it, and got hit by his attack.

?Oof!? Mr Shoe said as he was pushed away by the large impact.

Mr Shoe: That?s not going to stop me!

Mr Shoe breathed freezing air onto Commander ? Obscurum.

Commander ? Obscurum: Brr?T-That?s?.S-So c-cold?.

Mr Shoe: And for my final move here tonight ladies and gentlemen, the Deep Freeze!

Commander ? Obscurum: W-what??

www.youtube.com/watch?v=pws4rRGPgS0

Mr Shoe began skating around Commander ? Obscurum, and snowflakes which gradually increased in size started to form around him.

Commander ? Obscurum: W-What?s going on?.?

The ice particles began to stick to Commander ? Obscurum, and his body started to freeze.

Commander ? Obscurum?s words disappeared after the ice froze across his entire body.

Commander ? Obscurum: ?..

Commander ? Obscurum was frozen.

Mr Shoe?s ice powers wore off.

Mr Shoe: Woo, what a deal.

Chris and the majority of the other players gathered back together.

Toby: Well, we beat the guests.

MIHB: I defeated Maxi.

Mr Shoe: Obscurum?s frozen at the moment.

Chris: Wait, so, is that it? Is all the darkness gone now?

???: No?

Everyone: !

Guest ? 876 crawled closer to the group.

Guest ? 876: Our master?our leader?the ruler?of all darkness?he awaits your challenge?behind those doors?

Everyone looked where Guest ? 876 pointed.

Guest ? 876: He contains all of our power?he is even stronger than all of you combined?

Guest ? 876 fell to the ground.

Muffin: So?it?s behind those doors?

Darkstar32: The final challenge.

F0x_Boy: In there?

Chris: Everyone, this may be the toughest battle we?ve fought yet. We all should be cautious and proceed. Are you ready?

Everyone: Let?s do this!

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There. Done. I put more work into the animated gifs. So, hoped you like!

<3 ? Shiny

rocktheworld313

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

I like it! You did an awful lot of chapters...

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

I like it! You did an awful lot of chapters...

Well, I upload them all to Kongregate my home site first, and I was behind with forumify, so I caught up last night.

rocktheworld313

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

... but I'm not on kongregate. I'm here.

skullz17

Member

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 6,699

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Someone's been writing a lot...

I love the latest chapters, the music works so well, especially when MIHB uses the fire flower (or whatever those are called).

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thx for sig bobithan

rocktheworld313

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Yes, it's called a fire flower.

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 18 ? Road to the Real Villain

As the door opened, it revealed a long flight of stairs.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=09Q2ytBo54E

SBeam: This must be the way to the master of the darkness.

muffinator99: Let?s go?

Everyone began their journey up the stairs, remembering their entire adventure to get here, everything they went through?

Cyclopsicle: I wonder what it will be like?

ALEXTHEMENTALONE: Will we even be able to defeat it? Obscurum stated that it is more powerful than all of us combined.

ChaosDemon: There has to be a way. There must.

Chewy: Let?s pick up the pace?who knows how much longer we have until our planet is overrun by darkness and engulfed in it.

The players were halfway there, as they looked ahead to see the last large set of stairs.

Nou: I?m feeling really anxious about this entire thing?I hope we have a chance.

Cola1: There must be. We have to win this.

After Cola said that, everyone made it to the summit of the stairs to see another large door ahead.

KingOfTheOZone: Behind that door, lies the head of the darkness.

KanibalFrost: Look! It?s opening.

The door opened before the players to reveal?

Guy in shower: Ahh!

DarkStar32: Wrong door! Close it! Close it!

krubby: My eyes!

JadElClemens: O_O

The door closed.

Chris: Oops, heh heh. I think it?s that one over there.

The real door opened?

The players entered it, to find the peak of Dark Castle.

Chris: Well, where is he?

Nou: This better not have been a wild goose chase.

SBeam: No, it has to be real or else there would be no more darkness.

BuzzerBee: Well then, where is it?

???: Look before you.

Everyone: Huh?

Everyone looked in front of them, to see a strange figure come into sight?

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END OF CHAPTER 18

We?re almost there, just a few more chapters!

Atikyne

Formerly Kentiya

From: United States

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 1,113

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

My eyes!

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Kentiya / Atikyne — EE & EEU lead artist 2018-2020

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 19 ? The Terrible Truth Behind the Darkness

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As the figure appeared?it began to take a circular shape?

BlackSpider: W-What?s that..?

The figure began to lower itself onto the floor, as the players stepped a few feet back.

???: You have come a long way. But, unfortunately, this is where your quest ends.

Chris: Who are you?

The darkness around the figure lifted itself?

???: I am?the Dark Lord.

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GKAbyss: The Dark Lord?

Dark Lord: Yes. I am the one who controls all of the darkness. I will also be the one who controls your planet soon.

ShinyPorygon5: No you won?t!

As Shiny said that, he leaped toward The Dark Lord, but was deflected off by some sort of force field constructed of dark energy.

ShinyPorygon5: Ugh!

Dark Lord: You cannot damage me. I am far more superior than any of you.

Bass5098: We may not be able to damage you, but we can stop your plans!

Dark Lord: That is impossible. However, you are welcome to attempt such an act. Now, if you?ll excuse me, I?ll be finishing up the last bit of work to take over your planet.

Suddenly, to everyone?s suprise, the Dark Lord flew up into the sky, past the atmosphere, into space.

Chris: No!!! Darn it! We missed our chance!

UltraBass: What are we going to do now?

SBeam: Well, I could make a few adjustments rather swiftly to the Space Stuff, and then we could try to pursuit him.

Toby: Okay, hurry! We?ve got minutes!

Everyone ran as quick as they could back to the entrance of Dark Castle.

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One chapter left?it won?t be long?

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 20 ? An Epic Ending

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SBeam: We?re successfully in space, so, it shouldn?t be long before we reach the Dark Lord.

Everyone stared off into the distance of space, seeing the Dark Lord about to completely consume the planet.

Chris: We?re almost there, but, what are we going to do?

SBeam: I?m not sure. The Space Stuff couldn?t deal much damage, so, I suppose we?ll just have to take it on in person.

As everyone neared closer to the core, they noticed something.

Atilla: Holy crap?l-look?.

Toby: I never thought it would look like that?

SBeam: Still, we can?t give up now. Let?s go.

The Space Stuff raced into the planet.

SBeam: Everyone, brace yourself.

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As the players rushed into the darkness consumed planet, the Dark Lord floated out.

Dark Lord: Curses! It?s all of you! Quick, fire at them!

Suddenly, the large eye on the planet fired a laser at the Space Stuff, knocking it out of balance.

SBeam: My goodness, we?re going down!

Everyone: Ahh!

The Space Stuff began to plummet downward, and everything went black.

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Meanwhile?back inside the Everybody Edits planet?

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josefeliasson: JJ?

Mario: Mama mia?

General ? Maxi: IT IS NOT LONG UNTIL THE DARKNESS TAKES OVER. THEY MAY HAVE DEFEATED US JUST PREVIOUSLY, BUT NONE ARE ABLE TO DEFEAT THE DARK LORD.

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Chris became conscious, as he opened his eyes to find that he was standing on a strange mystical platform somewhere.

Chris: Where am I?

Suddenly, the Dark Lord appeared before him.

Dark Lord: I have created a battlefield through materials in space to do battle with you.

Chris: With me? Where are the others?

Dark Lord: They are in a different place. Right now, you should focus on your life first.

Chris: Wait, I-

Dark Lord: No more waiting. Get ready to be destroyed.

Chris: Fine, this is it!

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They both leaped toward each other and jumped from platform to platform, while also performing other attacks towards each other.

As Chris attacked, he remembered his attacks did nothing, due to his dark energy shield.

Dark Lord: Hahaha..

Chris: Hey, what?s so funny?

Dark Lord: Oh, nothing. It?s just the fact that your attacks won?t do anything, and nothing you or anybody else does can stop me.

Chris: ?

As Chris continued to attack, he knew his attacks did no damage, and, all hope was lost.

Chris: sigh I?ve?failed.

Dark Lord: What?

Chris: No matter what I do, I can?t attack you. I?ve failed.

Dark Lord: Well-

Chris: I failed all of the users. I?ve failed the planet. And, most of all?I?ve failed EE?

Chris shed a tear.

Dark Lord: Indeed you have. But, you won?t have to worry about it for long. See you in the underworld?

As the Dark Lord charged up his attack, Chris thought he saw some light appear in mid-air.

Chris: Huh?

The light shined brighter, and brighter, and something started to appear in the air?

Chris: Isn?t that the potion?

Suddenly, Chris heard a faint voice somewhere, which he recognized quickly.

SBeam: Chris?use the potion?USE THE POTION?..it will help you defeat the Dark Lord?.

Chris: I will?I?ll?use?the?POTION!

Chris absorbed the potion?s power, and became super powerful!

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Chris: Aghhh!!!!

Dark Lord: What in the-

There was a huge flash, and Chris started levitating with his new power?

Dark Lord: So what if you have a little rainbow? You still can?t hurt me.

Chris used his power to make the Dark Lord?s shield shatter.

CRACK!

Dark Lord: ? How did you?my shield?GRR, I CAN STILL TAKE YOU DOWN!

Chris started preparing an attack with the potion?s energy, while the Dark Lord prepared one of dark energy.

Dark Lord: I?ll show you who?s more powerful!

Chris: We?ll see about that!

They both fired simultaneously at each other, but they were equally matched in power.

Chris: AGGHH, YOU?LL NEVER WIN!

Dark Lord: YES I WILL, THIS IS THE END FOR YOU!

They both kept using their strongest might, and the laser continued to go back and forth between both sides.

Chris: This is it! You?re finished!

Chris pushed a mite harder, and it was enough to overpower the Dark Lord?s laser and hit him.

Dark Lord: GAH!!!

As Chris slowly decreased on his power, everything started to fade out?

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Chris became conscious, and opened his eyes, to see himself on a bed and two other smiles in front of him.

Chris: What happened..?

Chris said as he recognized the two as Mr Shoe and Cyclone.

Chris: Guys! You?re safe! Did I win?

Mr Shoe: Yes! You did. Everyone was transported back into a prison at Dark Castle when we got seperated by the Dark Lord.

Chris: Ah! The Dark Lord! Where?!

Cyclone: Calm down, he?s not done.

Mr Shoe: Anyways, we thought all hope was lost, until we saw guests starting to panic for some odd reason.

Chris: Then what happened?

Mr Shoe: After that, everyone felt tremors. We knew something had happened, and that?s when during when the guests were panicking, one of them accidentely pressed the switch to open the doors. We got out, and let everybody else out.

Chris: What was going on?

Mr Shoe: Well, over the loudspeakers, General ? Maxi announced that Dark Castle was collapsing, and it was an emergency evacuation.

Chris: So, how did you all get out?

Mr Shoe: As we were searching for an exit, we found a world portal which lead us close to here, so we all entered it, and here?s how we got back.

Chris: But, how did I get here?

Mr Shoe: Oh, right, well, then we noticed something falling out of the sky, and we got a closer look and realized it was you. So, we placed a gravity dot for you to land on, and you had passed out.

Chris: Oh?well, how about the darkness?

Cyclone: I?ll tell you about that. As we were escaping Dark Castle, I looked back to see it completely crumbling down, and many bits of dark energy that possessed the guests were leaving the castle. Later, when we got back, after you fell out of the sky, it seemed like the dark energy was suddenly disappearing.

Chris: Hm?

Cyclone: So, we got a telescope and looked up high to see what was going on outside of the planet, and, the large eye lifted itself and all of the other dark matter from the planet, and faded away.

Chris: Wow, really?

Cyclone: Yep.

Mr Shoe: Anyways, in the meantime, everyone decided to throw a party for the darkness going away.

Chris: Oh, cool! Where is it?

Mr Shoe: It?s, uh, right outside.

Chris glanced out the window.

Chris: Sweet. Let?s go.

Mr Shoe: Alright. So, you gotta tell me. What happened to you?

The three walked out the door and went to join the party.

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STAFF CREDITS

A ?Dark? Story was produced by: ShinyPorygon5

Based on: Everybody Edits by Chris Benjaminsen

Invincible Mr Shoe, Tanooki MissingNo and Fire MIHB sprites are by: GravityFractal

Possessed Guests, Commander ? Obscurum, General ? Maxi and Dark Lord sprites are all by: ShinyPorygon5

8-bit EE sprites are done by: ShinyPorygon5

Images are done by: ShinyPorygon5

Chapter 3 Battle gifs are done by: Echo!

Help with music choice is done by: GravityFractal

Mario is owned by: Nintendo

Usernames of EE players in story are all owned by their real life counterparts.

Special Thanks: GravityFractal

And most importantly of all, thank YOU, viewers. None of this could have been done without your support.

Thank you everyone, for reading my story. It was truly a great experience for me, and I hope it was for you.

The End

skullz17

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapters have been short recently, but still good. Getting tense!

Can't wait for the final chapter!

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thx for sig bobithan

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapters have been short recently, but still good. Getting tense!

Can't wait for the final chapter!

T'was already posted.