Official Everybody Edits Forums

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Hey guys, I just wanted to let you all know, that I have college to attend, and I?m gonna have to cancel the sto-Just kidding! Enjoy the show folks!

Chapter 3 ? The Road to a Rampage

SBeam: Eureka! We?ve finished the potion!

SBeam: I couldn?t have done it without any of you though, so I thank you for your assistance.

Chris: We?re glad we could help.

Chewy: So does this mean we can stop the darkness now?

SBeam: Precisely.

FailGirl101: It doesn?t look like Shiny put much effort into changing the colo-

BOOM!

Fdoou: What the hell?

???: Aha! We have found you at last!

Toby: Who are you?

???: Dark matter is who we are! And we?re here to destroy you!

Aoitenshi: Dark matter? Didn?t SBeam say that was who attacked our planet?

???: Yes, we did attack your planet! Now we?re here to attack and destroy you all!

TakoMan02: But you all look like regular smileys?.

???: It may seem that way, but we?re the dark matter that took over the numbskulls who were left behind!

DarknessPr0ject: :O

KingOfTheOzone: Alright, then what players did you take over?

???: All of the guests.

Different55: Oh, darn, I completely forgot about them.

MIHB: Chris, how many guests did you add to the game?

Chris: 9000?. o_o

SquadFS: Well, that?s not good.

???: Yes, you fools are outnumbered! There?s no chance of you winning!

Rurigok: Yeah, but what you didn?t realize?

BEE: Actual players are always better than guest noobs!

???: You wanna bet on that?

Play this for the next part
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Kv4k2KxOPU

ShinyPorygon5: Yes, as a matter of fact I do!

???: We?ll crush you fools!

muffin: We?ll see about that!

skullz16: We?re always gonna win! >:D

Bimps1002: GET READY FOR A BEATING YOU TWITS!

???: Fine, you had your chance, but you blew it! Prepare to die!

Guest ? 1:

Chris: You! You all tried to take over our planet, but I won?t let that happen!

Guest ? 1: Huh!!?!?!

Chris quickly jumped on top of Guest -1 who was leading them all, and they started to battle.

Guest ? 1: Ugh, you think you?re all that, huh? Let?s see how well you do against the forces of dark matter!

Guest ? 1 threw Chris against the wall, and as Chris was flying at top speed, he quickly placed a boost arrow on the wall, which reflected him towards Guest ? 1.

Chris then smashed into Guest -1, which seemed to defeat him. Afterwards, he had looked back to see most all of the guests had been defeated.

Chris: Yes! We?ve won!

BEE: I told you we would win!

YoukYou: Hooray!

ayushman: yay

Mr Void: Now we can move on!

Guest -1: Hah?.hah?..wait?

Toby: Hmm?

Guest -1: You may have?.defeated us this time?.but this isn?t?.the last you will see of us?..

Cyclone: If you come back again, we?ll beat you again!

Guest -1: We?ll?see about that?.everyone?escape back to the lair?..

Guest -1 had thrown a smoke bomb that covered the whole cave.

SBeam: cough hack Everyone, keep your guard up!

Processor: I think we?re safe. I believe that they are gone.

Hojaki: Well, that was odd.

MIHB: It certainly was, but we need to move on regardless.

Chris: Is everyone okay?

Everyone: Yes! I?m fine! We?re okay!

SBeam: Alright then, let?s continue to move on. Hopefully no more things like that will stall us again.

DarkStar32: I hope.

________________________________________________________________________________________

Credit goes to Echo for the animated pictures in the smiley fights.

Arceus64

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Those animated pictures were great. I'll be stalking this for a while. :3

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Those animated pictures were great. I'll be stalking this for a while. :3

Well, I didn't make them;I only made the story line. Echo made the animated pictures.

Terence22205

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Those animated pictures were great. I'll be stalking this for a while. :3

Today you made a little boy happy in his pants

Also, he made none of those photos aside from the still ones of himself chatting.

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Those animated pictures were great. I'll be stalking this for a while. :3

Today you made a little boy happy in his pants

http://i.imgur.com/9nGtwb5.png

Also, he made none of those photos aside from the still ones of himself chatting.

Nice photoshop.

Hater much?

Terence22205

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Those animated pictures were great. I'll be stalking this for a while. :3

Today you made a little boy happy in his pants

http://i.imgur.com/9nGtwb5.png

Also, he made none of those photos aside from the still ones of himself chatting.

Nice photoshop.

Hater much?

That's just pathetic. ._.

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Today you made a little boy happy in his pants

http://i.imgur.com/9nGtwb5.png

Also, he made none of those photos aside from the still ones of himself chatting.

Nice photoshop.

Hater much?

That's just pathetic. ._.

Please don't start another argument, I'd prefer to stay on topic.

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 4 ? A slow start

SBeam: Okay, let?s hope that this will work.

SBeam held up the potion into the air

play this up to 0:10http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IYUAMlzcvH4

Arceus64: It?s beautiful?

Thanel: I agree.

Helvi: Now I feel like I could take on anything.

Different55: I do too, but how can we be sure it?s going to work?

SBeam: I?m afraid we?ll have to make a?.gulp?.sacrifice?

GravityFractal: whos it gonna be?

everyone looks at each other

Sharkguy123: I guess I?ll go out.

ShinyPorygon5: Shark, no!

Sharkguy123: It doesn?t matter if I die, I just recently joined this game and it?s not like I am some super cool player.

hummerz5: Be careful.

Sharkguy123 walked outside

BuzzerBee: So, how do you feel?

Sharkguy123: I feel?.

?

Sharkguy123: BETTER THAN EVER!

Everyone: Yayyy! Gayy-er, yayyy!

Chris: Now we can stop the darkness, right SBeam?

SBeam: Right, so let?s get a move on!

?..http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RFIBUshL1vQ

DarkStar32: We?ve been walking for a pretty long time.

meowmeow222: Does anyone know where we are?

AndreiTan: I don?t really recognize it. But it looks like we?re in a grassy area.

SquadFS: Woah Shiny, way too real there.

ShinyPorygon5(ascreator): Whoops. Sorry.

Different55: Well, hopefully some action will happen soon so that the people reading this don?t get bored.

ShadowF0XX: Speaking of reading, did you know somebody keeps flagging all the posts on Kongregate?

TakoMan02: Oh wow, what idiots.

Chewy: We still have our other copy on forumify.

ALEXTHEMENTALONE: True, true. However, the forums are down.

(EDIT: I said this when they were, sorry!)

Patience Is Key: Don?t worry guys, we?ll be to our destination soon. Plus, remember. Patience is key.

Rurigok: You?re probably right.

Patience Is Key: Am I?

Master1: Since the viewers might be bored, here?s a picture of a balloon.

SuperXSuper: I have to admit, that?s pretty random.

Master1: Yeah but, it keeps ?em readin?.

ChaosDemon: Is there any other way we can get there other than just walking?

SBeam: Not that I know of?unless someone has some sort of aircraft we can use.

Muffin: Hey hold on one second.

Doh: What is it muffin?

Muffin: Chris, didn?t you place boost arrows back when you were fighting guest ? 1?

Chris: I did, yes.

Muffin: Great, then, can?t you just place boost arrows in front of us to get us there faster?

Chris: I actually can, great idea muffin.

Muffin: :3

So, Chris placed boost arrows near everyone, and they all jumped on them and went really far.

Unfortunately though, everyone landed in different places, splitting them up.

The players were split up into three different groups.

If you expect me to name who was in the groups, you?re out of luck.

This is the end of the chapter. Thank you for reading.

Last edited by ShinyPorygon5 (May 10 2013 3:45:07 pm)

rocktheworld313

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

EX Crew Shift... oh, I should have known that. You took a picture of the interior, so I didn't really recognize it... meh.

Also, Porygon, I would be on your side, but since you reacted so violently, I'll just slink away into this corner here...

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Also, Porygon, I would be on your side, but since you reacted so violently, I'll just slink away into this corner here...

On my side for what?

plat aka kingpooultra

Member

Joined: 2017-05-27

Posts: 3,873

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Aw I wish I was in the story, good job though!

krubby

Member

Joined: 2015-06-23

Posts: 1,190

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Again, you really should focus more on making people sound more in character. Still good, though.

Onjit

Member

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 9,709

Website

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Aw I wish I was in the story, good job though!

This.

---

:.|:;

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 5 ? Lost and Left Out

??

??

?hey?

can?..hear?

?

?Can you hear me?

Ugh?.

HEY!

ShinyPorygon5: Ahh! What?s going on? Where am I?

???: Oh, good. I?m glad you finally woke up. I was getting worried for a second.

ShinyPorygon5: Who are you?

SquadFS: Shiny, it?s me.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4a7Tv6U-pi8

ShinyPorygon5: Oh. Where is everybody else?

SquadFS: Don?t you remember?

ShinyPorygon5: Remember what?

SquadFS: After Chris placed the boost arrows and we all went on them, we went really high and got seperated.

ShinyPorygon5: Oh?I remember.

SquadFS: Yeah.

ShinyPorygon5: So wait, is it just us here?

SquadFS: MIHB, Arceus64, Sharkguy123, Processor, Highfive55, Onepiece88 and Cyclone are here.

ShinyPorygon5: Ok, so, where do you think everyone else went?

SquadFS: Well, I?m not sure. But they must have not gotten too far.

ShinyPorygon5: So, where did we land?

SquadFS: I think we?re near the summit of a mountain.

ShinyPorygon5: No wonder it?s so cold.

MIHB: The higher the altitude, the lower the temperature.

Cyclone: I don?t really find it fond to be here in cold temperatures.

Processor: I don?t like it that much either.

Sharkguy123: How are we going to find everyone?

Arceus64: Well, it?s going to be tough, but, we?re going to have to.

Onepiece88: And that isn?t going to happen anytime soon if we just sit around and keep talking.

Highfive55: Right, so what are we waiting for? Let?s get a move on.

________________________________________________________________________________________

In le forest

www.youtube.com/watch?v=IANa72lSetc

Kingpooultra: Oof?that was a pretty hard fall.

AndreiTan: Hey, it?s cool with me, I landed on something soft.

Xfrogman43: Ugh! Get off of me!

AndreiTan: Oh, sorry, I didn?t c u thar.

ALEXTHEMENTALONE: So, where are we?

SuperXSuper: Well, it appears that we?ve landed in a forest.

krubby: Do you think the others are near?

Toby: They couldn?t have gotten too far. We all went on the same object in the same direction at the same speed, so we should be fairly close to them.

hummerz5: This forest seems to be really eerie, don?t you think?

BuzzerBee: I concur. It does seem a tad bit creepy.

TakoMan02: Well, I suppose that we should find the exit to this forest, then search for the others.

krubby: What if they?re close by?

Toby: Then we?ll all call their names. Let?s start moving people.

________________________________________________________________________________________

In le ocean

www.youtube.com/watch?v=MXWX7nIJqZo

?..

?..

Player who isn?t unconscious: (Oh no! Everyone is unconscious!)

The player looked up.

Player who isn?t unconscious: (This isn?t good, I?ll have to get everyone back up there individually.)

Player who isn?t unconscious: (I?m not gonna let you all drown! Hang in there!)

In another place people fell

Everyone: WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=x6SaTghhaP8

GravityFractal: Ow my head

hummerz5: Okay, now those bricks have got me really suspicious (Let me know if you get the reference)

RPGMASTER2000: Great, just fantastic. Now we?ve been seperated from the rest.

ShadowF0XX: Don?t worry RPG, it?s not that bad.

Fiendish Llama: Yeah, what could go wrong?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=rbusENG6hCE

RPGMASTER2000: Nice job, Llama. -.-

Last edited by ShinyPorygon5 (Apr 27 2013 5:23:54 am)

Arceus64

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Nice, though I wish it had been longer, I can't wait for the next part.

Edit: But that balloon though. So intense.

Last edited by Arceus64 (Apr 26 2013 8:58:43 pm)

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Apparentely, I forgot to upload one of the pictures for the pipe maze part, but it's there now.

some woman

Member

From: 4th dimension

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 9,289

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

There were only three locations displayed on the map, yet you listed 4.

---

10 years and still awkward. Keep it up, baby!

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

There were only three locations displayed on the map, yet you listed 4.

I know, I got the underground idea after I made the chapter, and I needed to have another place so I could list more players.

skullz17

Member

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 6,699

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

I want to be in more than just Chapter 1

---

thx for sig bobithan

some woman

Member

From: 4th dimension

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 9,289

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Me too, I made one cameo in the chatroom and I was never seen again.

---

10 years and still awkward. Keep it up, baby!

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

I'm sorry if I haven't listed you in the newest chapters, it's just a tad bit difficult to list as many players as possible in the story, but you both will be, don't worry.

rocktheworld313

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

;_; Haven't been in a single one

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

chapdur siz ? evrybdy mod

mr shoe: hi

me: hi

mr shoe: evrybdy mod nao

me: kk

evrybdy: yay

. _ .

Chapter 6 ? Unique Re-Unitation

www.youtube.com/watch?v=V7bPQTpCAt8

Cyclone: Well, it seems to have gotten very cold.

MIHB: I don?t want to get hypothermia, so let?s hurry up.

SquadFS: You guys have to understand, it?s a bit difficult to move swiftly in snow.

Processor: Hey, wait, does anyone see that?

Onepiece88: See what?

Processor: Over there, it looks like a cliff.

SquadFS: Oh yeah, it does. Let?s go check it out.

Cyclone: Oh goodness, get me away from that. I?m afraid of heights.

Onepiece88: lolwut

ShinyPorygon5: I really want to get down and find everybody else, but then again, this looks too risky to go down.

Sharkguy123: Yeah, let?s find another way to ge-

josefeliasson: JJ

Arceus64: Huh?

josefeliasson: JJ

MIHB: Who are you?

josefeliasson: JJ JJ JJ

Highfive55: Okay, don?t get too riled up pal, we?re right next to a cliff and could fall off any seco-

josefeliasson:
JJ!

SquadFS*: Woah!

Suddenly, the crazed josefeliasson had pushed everyone off the cliff.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=dmVGNTeDcYI

MIHB: Ahh! Everybody! Get close together to soften the impact!

Soon after everybody tightened together, they started to gather snow on them.

ShinyPorygon5: Pleah! I don?t think that this is the best ide-PLORF

Then, after that, Shiny?s mouth got filled with snow, and get this, they started to form a snowball!

Onepiece88: Woah, this is crazy!

(But here's my number...)

Cyclone: It is! Everybody, look, there?s a ramp up ahead!

Everybody:
AHHHHHHHH!

Meanwhile, in the forest?

some_man: Nobody say ?we?ve been walking pretty far? or something like that. We?ve already said that eight times in this story.

skullz16: Does anyone hear voices?

?
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
The snowball which contained everyone else had gone off of the ramp and was about to land in the forest onto everyone else.

AndreiTan: What the-

Toby: Woah! Heads up!

Kingpooultra:
EVERYBODY MOVE!

________________________________________________________________________________________________
www.youtube.com/watch?v=mYjk9TGkMcU

GottaAskTheMan: Finally, I got everybody back up to the surface.

Groan?.ugh?.ohhh?..

GottaAskTheMan: Hey, I think they?re waking up.

Thanel: Eh, what happened?

DarkStar32: Ugh, where am I?

GottaAskTheMan: We all landed in the ocean, and everybody else was unconscious, so I had to pull you all up or you would have drowned.

Helvi: Hey, thanks! You really saved me there pal!

GottaAskTheMan: No problem.

Rurigok: Wait, where are the others? It doesn?t look like everybody is here.

SBeam: still waking up Do you really think everybody else survived an explosion like that? We were only able to survive since we landed in the water, and even then, we still almost died.

Chris: That is true, but, there?s still a chance they made it.

Different55: So, are you saying that we should go look for them?

Chris: Yes it does, let?s go look for them-
CRASH!

Helvi: What in the world was that?

GottaAskTheMan: I don?t know, but let?s go check it out. Be careful.

The Underground Peeps

www.youtube.com/watch?v=QImV3SdZZ9c

*GravityFractal*: Hah! Hey!

*Gravity jumped on a koopa, and sent it's shell towards 2 other goombas.*

*doh*: Hey, watch it!

*GravityFractal*: Sorry! o.o

*RPGMASTER2000*: Hurmph! *Boom*

*RPGMASTER2000 stepped on a goomba.*

*Lirum053*: Ahh! Ow!

*Lirum053 was being stepped on repeatedly by a large amount of koopas and goombas.*

*Lirum053*: Ugh, I can't fight them off!

*The koopa shell which GravityFractal kicked earlier hit a block next to Lirum053.*

*rocktheworld313*: Lirum, quick! Look!

*Lirum053*: Huh?

*Lirum quickly grabbed it, and then something happened.*

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yysnM407rjE

*Lirum053*: It's payback time fools! >:D

________________________________________________________________________________________________

This is the final finished version of chapter 6, hope you all liked it.

Supershadow30

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Can I... Be added in this... story?

P.S.: Here's a suggestion for battle music: the first, for a battle VS a great group and the second, better for a boss. Here's the links:

1) http://laurashigihara.bandcamp.com/trac … le-in-game
2) http://laurashigihara.bandcamp.com/trac … ac-in-game

Last edited by Supershadow30 (May 11 2013 4:37:38 am)

Arceus64

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

There. I read it. Happy?