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Creature

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The end(A interactive gamebook story)

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A long time ago, the Mayans predicted that the world would end at the beginning of the XXVI century, but no one believed, and the consequences have been severe. You were walking down the street in New York and suddenly an earthquake appears and you become unconscious. Will you survive the end of the world?

The story is not complete, I will try to update the story every week, that's it for now, but keep an eye out.

The history may be long, it would be nice if you let me know if I did something wrong.

Since Creative become a library, i solve to make a story, but a interactive one, i hope who read will like. If you don't like, please, have tolerance, give a constructive criticism, not swear and discouraging.

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mrjawapa

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

I honestly think we have enough stories on this forum...

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some woman

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

There's not enough actions in the story. Allow custom actions please.

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10 years and still awkward. Keep it up, baby!

Fdoou

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

jesus christ it is so amazing
“Let’s now know others identity” Thinks yourself.

im going to die of laughter

Fdoou

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

custom actions
i don't think you understand how stories work

some woman

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

custom actions
i don't think you understand how stories work

The point is it's not truly 100% interactive unless you allow people to command the main character.

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10 years and still awkward. Keep it up, baby!

Creature

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

Sorry, i can't add custom actions, the inklewriter.com doesn't allow it and everyone ignore my forum games here.

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tak4n

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

Creature you made a few similar forum games that have all failed. It seems that you're learning from your previous mistakes because this story was good for what it was.
Custom commands is what made your stories fail before, try to keep away from making custom commands.

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Creature

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

Creature you made a few similar forum games that have all failed. It seems that you're learning from your previous mistakes because this story was good for what it was.
Custom commands is what made your stories fail before, try to keep away from making custom commands.

You are the first to say the correct thing. Thanks!
Also, i'm making next part.

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Fdoou

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

The point is it's not truly 100% interactive unless you allow people to command the main character.

have you never read a choose your own adventure book you scrublord

NOTHING will truly be 100% interactive except real life.

Last edited by Fdoou (Jul 25 2014 10:01:27 am)

Anch

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

Try this. You can make interactive games (story, OR exploring game) on a site without ads or anything.

Creature

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Re: The end(A interactive gamebook story)

Try this. You can make interactive games (story, OR exploring game) on a site without ads or anything.

It's exactly the first thing i found, you may find my account too, but i prefer inklewriter.com, because its not too hard to add pages.

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