Vol. 1 ABVE - EE Epic Story (Final Chapter - Day Eight, Segment Two)

N1KF · Before February 2015

I'll probably like the next chapter

tak4n · Before February 2015

Updated, a bit of a crazy chapter. I had been wanting to write this chapter since like beginning of the story.

I have a feeling that a lot of people just check the second post to see who is added to the story and who is eliminated, well if you look now you'll spoil a pretty interesting thing that would make you want to read the story. That is why I strongly suggest reading the story first as this is a pretty cool chapter.

Fradeshan · Before February 2015

tak4n wrote:

One living thing remained...

has thwinkt turned into the horse

(assuming you're not counting the unknown figure and only participants)

iPwner · Before February 2015

Can you transfer me to a group with norwegianboy and mrflame? No clue who Fiendishllama is. o.O And reidolol isn't associated with me in any way. And why are we savage animals?

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tak4n · Before February 2015

ipwner wrote:

Can you transfer me to a group with norwegianboy and mrflame? No clue who Fiendishllama is. o.O And reidolol isn't associated with me in any way. And why are we savage animals? <img src="http://eeforumify.com/img/smilies/tongue.png" width="15" height="15" alt="tongue" />

But you're a cat, so you go into a group with other savage animals <img src="http://eeforumify.com/img/smilies/wink.png" width="15" height="15" alt="wink" />

Also @Fradeshan no the unknown figure picked up Deetz's horse after eliminating him.

iPwner · Before February 2015

No I iz not. I iz humanzie that actzez like a kitteh sometimes. =3

Fdoou · Before February 2015

if "them" is shared accounts, i will love you forever

tak4n · Before February 2015

Updated the story, we are 3-4 battles away from end of Volume 1. This means there is only a few chapters left of Volume 1 in this story.

In other news, I am really enjoying writing this story. However this means that I make a lot of simple yet annoying spelling mistakes when miss-typing some words or structuring it not the way I want it to be. This is why over the next few days I'll be slowly going through the story and fixing any small mistakes that I find.

Fdoou · Before February 2015

it looks like a very easy story to write: a lot of the characters are easily confused with one another because they all talk so alike

tak4n · Before February 2015

Updated the main post. Interesting event will happen this chapter.

@Fdoou I am doing my best to give each character their own personality. Master1, GKAbyss, Matt, and Honeybuckles44 speak similar to each other because they are a group of friends with similar personalities. Everyone else has a significant personality difference from this group though and the little dialogue and development everyone else gets still shows the difference so I think I am doing well on it.

Ty for the feedback on it though, I do need to work on this either way.

Xfrogman43 · Before February 2015

I'm loving the story tak4n. <img src="http://eeforumify.com/img/smilies/cool.png" width="15" height="15" alt="cool" /> It's looking good. Do you know how many chapters there will be?

tak4n · Before February 2015

Xfrogman43 wrote:

I'm loving the story tak4n. <img src="http://eeforumify.com/img/smilies/cool.png" width="15" height="15" alt="cool" /> It's looking good. Do you know how many chapters there will be?

Volume 1 (This Topic) is almost finished, not more than 4 chapters are left with 2 battles remaining.
Volume 2 (New Topic) will have a lot more. I think it might have more chapters than this one.

I am not planning to make more than 2 Volumes of this story therefore Volume 2 is going to have a decent ending.

tak4n · Before February 2015

Updated the story.
Today's chapter was inspired by the song "Falling towards the Sky"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fmi5KlKXs3o
The music video starts out slowly to represent the female dressed in black coming into the scene.
Then the rap begins to represent the events that follow <img src="http://eeforumify.com/img/smilies/wink.png" width="15" height="15" alt="wink" />

EDIT: Would be nice if someone could post so I could update the topic.

Last edited by tak4n (Jul 18 2014 6:07:02 am)

tak4n · Before February 2015

Ok, I am sorry for the triple post I really didn't want to go into double or triple posting, but since no one posted for a long time after my last message I have nothing else to do as there is a lot of information I need to explain.

Chapters 14, 15, and 16 have all been released, I did not tell it on here because I didn't want to triple post. This also means that Volume 1 of ABVE is fully finished which is why I am allowing myself to triple post this time. The unknown figure that destroyed teams had been finally unveiled.

I have not been getting much feedback lately, I really want to know whether I should post Volume 2 of this. This story has grown so much but it still has a long way before ending. Everyone that has posted in this topic but has not been shown the the story till this point will come in for Volume 2, 100%. So guys, who actually likes this story? Who wants me to make Volume 2?

Fradeshan · Before February 2015

love it
just y'know details and confusing parts

with the fact i didn't know who some of the people were

continue please

GKAbyss · Before February 2015

I very like the story so far.

They want volume 2 though.

Will update post when I have finished reading the update.

skullz17 · Before February 2015

I just started reading this. I've only read Prologue Chapter 1, and I'm liking it. Is "which was the real Mobon?" a reference? If it is, nice one, lol. I remember, the first time I ever discovered shared accounts, it was Mobon that I heard about.

Creature · Before February 2015

Who is the new beast at my group?

tak4n · Before February 2015

@Skullz16 Mobon's ability to create holograms of himself directly relates to him being shared in the game. It's the fact that it seemed like he was more than one person in the story.

@Creature Wait until Volume 2 to find out <img src="http://eeforumify.com/img/smilies/wink.png" width="15" height="15" alt="wink" />

Atikyne · Before February 2015

Yay me finally read this! <img src="http://eeforumify.com/img/smilies/tongue.png" width="15" height="15" alt="tongue" /> Now make it into a film. <img src="http://eeforumify.com/img/smilies/big_smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="big_smile" />

tak4n wrote:

-Everyone that has posted in ABVE Volume 1 topic will have a role in ABVE Volume 2, it does not mean that you're guaranteed to be in a team as you might play a different role.

yes plz - and if i have a special power make it time distortion ^-^

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