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Calicara

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Practice song: Need help!

I am working on a short pirate song just for practice, but I hate the ending. Can anyone suggest a better ending?

Here's the score: http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/d … 556252d876

jj4

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

nahhhh, thats a great ending, and song! nice! +rep

EDIT: i just made a song too! http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/8 … a1d98f0138

Last edited by jj4 (Jun 3 2011 6:33:37 pm)

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Have the last note go down instead of up?

edit: Oh lord, that site will be so helpful for me in the future, just what I've been needing... mwahahaha.

Last edited by Zoey2070 (Jun 3 2011 6:14:10 pm)

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Calicara

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Have the last note go down instead of up?

I tried this, and could not find the right melody. I'll keep editing >_>

Pike270

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Mind if I make an Organya (ORG) version? Or should i just make
a short thing on noteflight?...maybe an MIDI?

Links will be here once ready:

MIDI Link: http://www.mediafire.com/?be1u7ym5cv4dbiy

Last edited by Pike270 (Jun 3 2011 8:43:44 pm)

Calicara

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Hey Pike! No need for an ORG version, I already did that. I have it all ORGed up, except the end part. However if you want to copy it and make your own ending I would really like that, because I just can't get it right.

Pike270

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

I propose making a MIDI then! (via Anvil Studio). Also If you want to see some really nice ORG music here their channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/GIRakaCHEEZER

EDIT: I can choose from a flute, recorder, pan flute, blown bottle, Skakuhachi, wistle, or ocarine for the "flute" part........Maybe a violin could make it more "piratey"I'mm messs around with the instruments.

Last edited by Pike270 (Jun 3 2011 6:39:28 pm)

Haka

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Needs more harmony at the end. Try adding a fifth. Might be more balanced if you hold off on the ending by a bar or so too.

Calicara

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Needs more harmony at the end. Try adding a fifth. Might be more balanced if you hold off on the ending by a bar or so too.

Thanks for the advice, I will probably just fix it all tomorrow. It's too much for me tonight. I have plans for that song

On that note here is a finished piece of mine: http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/4 … 477922ac5b

I think if I can do that i can make pirate music >:D

Last edited by Calicara (Jun 3 2011 6:52:55 pm)

jj4

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

damn! ( sorry for the language) you go some serious talent.

EDIT: did you buy the 50 dollar one? cause i can't add guitars and stuff.

EDIT: my new song! http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/0 … 2cacc861e1 more of that song coming soon!

Last edited by jj4 (Jun 3 2011 8:55:53 pm)

Tako

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Interesting combination of drums and the woodwinds.

One suggestion: the first time around, there's too long of a pause at the end. I'm not sure what features this website has, but if you could make the ending of the first round shorter that's be nice.

Also, what is this for?

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Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

Calicara

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

@Takoman, no and that is why I only use it for practice. The website is very limited when it comes to things like that. Again I may edit it later on, but I finally decided on an ending that I liked and I think it will do for now. This piece was just for fun, and practice.

supadorf24

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Here are my suggestions for endings. One is a little more complex than the other. The second one's rhythm is a little bit off, but these were made very quickly so I don't feel like polishing them. http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/7 … 14e5cafa10

Chimi

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Have the last note go down instead of up?

I tried this, and could not find the right melody. I'll keep editing >_>

Just move each note up an interval of an eighth. An octave higher. I like the cadence. Sexy.

Calicara

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

Here are my suggestions for endings. One is a little more complex than the other. The second one's rhythm is a little bit off, but these were made very quickly so I don't feel like polishing them. http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/7 … 14e5cafa10

Omg Supadorf you read my mind. Least night before I got off the computer I used that same ending (the 1st one) before you told me. Ur awesome.
@jj4, No I don't have premium, it helps when you use more than 1 of the same instrument, but with different notes. It gives it a fuller sound.

coolio

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

^O.o then couldn't you just use chords?:rolleyes:
anyways, i'll try...

jj4

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Re: Practice song: Need help!

failgirl101, how do you use more then one instrument? http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/4 … 0875d692fd
                                                                                                                               lol^ my sister did that last night

Last edited by jj4 (Jun 4 2011 9:46:10 am)