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Oturan

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Poem

Like a seedling I was,
when I first met you.
Young and unknowing.
But care you have taken of me,
through years three.
and with your knowledge showering
me I grew.
Not into a flower
but a flower to be.
Whilst you watched me.
For this I thank you with this rose,
this single rose.
Thank you Helena

What do you guys think about it? It's not quite finished,
but I wanted to see what people think about it.

Jeremy

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Re: Poem

You made it? It looks good.

supadorf24

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Joined: 2015-02-26

Posts: 2,675

Re: Poem

Nice. Whoever you're writing this poem for is lucky.

EDIT: 2 seconds apart from Jeremy.

Last edited by Supadorf24 (Jun 11 2011 8:55:55 pm)

Oturan

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Re: Poem

You made it?

Yup I made it^^ Writing poems is a hobby of mine

Whoever you're writing this poem for is lucky.

It's actually for my teacher, without her I wouldn't have made it as far as I am today. From the beginning I had the lowest grade in every subject, and now I have either five or nine of the highest, one of the lowest and the rest is in the middle, and I wouldn't have made it this far without her guidance. So this is my way of saying thanks. But I wrote it in haste in about 45 minutes or so, so im going to write a bit more and polish it a bit.

Jeremy

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Re: Poem

Well, Good luck with that.