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Pawlowic

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My music :)

Hello guys,i decided to make a song using looplabs ...

It's not so good,but i kinda like it,i would appreciate if you gave me some advice and such Thank you!

Here is the song:

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C163f2HosaA[/youtube]

Edit:I have found some flaws in the song,im going to work on fixing it.
Edit2: Done
Edit3:

Big announcement

Some of my songs MAY be made with different programs. It does NOT have to be looplabs.

Last edited by Pawlowic (Sep 15 2011 2:20:54 pm)

Calicara

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Re: My music :)

*looks for the like button*

Pawlowic

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Re: My music :)

Wow? You really like it?

Calicara

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Re: My music :)

It's not really my style, but it is really good. Different people like different styles of music and it's nice to hear something different every once in a while

Pawlowic

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Re: My music :)

Why thank you Thank you a lot I'm really glad that you like it!

Zoey2070

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Re: My music :)

It's sort of okay except for the fact that the violins [?] are pretty cut off and you can tell it's electronical. Meh.

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Pawlowic

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Re: My music :)

The violins are the main part of the song,they are ALWAYS Playing,and i just keep adding on other sounds.

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: My music :)

Only part I don't like is that it sounds kind of choppy.   Otherwise, great!

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Pawlowic

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Re: My music :)

Thanks! Means a lot!

Echo!

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Re: My music :)

Bookmarked'

catking00

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Re: My music :)

nice music. like failgirl said, not my styl;e but others it might be. (why is she banned? shouldn't be for the chachonacho thing) music needs words unless its one of those like 6 minute songs with no words at all.

edit: violins make a nice, new sound in that.

Last edited by catking00 (Sep 15 2011 7:30:21 am)

Pawlowic

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Re: My music :)

Yeah,but i do not have a mic,and my voice is squeeky

catking00

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Re: My music :)

so? you made it and it would be cool to have people play in real life.

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: My music :)

I love it, amazing job.

Pawlowic

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Re: My music :)

Thank you,Thank you very much!

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: My music :)

anytime good friend

Shy Guy

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Re: My music :)

Oh my god, I actually like listening to this.

Splendid work, good sir

Deadlord

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Joined: 2015-04-06

Posts: 437

Re: My music :)

Really nice song. (Zvuci kao cajka ). Pretty good for action games.

Tachyonic

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Re: My music :)

So much loops °?°

It got boring after a minute. Sorry.

EDJ

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Joined: 2015-08-20

Posts: 2,157

Re: My music :)

"Liked"
You could improve the overall audio quality and the violins sound kinda cut off ( but that can be the sound bit)

Pawlowic

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Re: My music :)

I will work on getting a good music maker,this one is like browser and not really that good,but i am happy with the results Anyway,if you would like to hear more songs,i would try to make some

Bobithan

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,476

Re: My music :)

Pretty good. Not something I would put on my iPod but this is still pretty awesome.

Just don't use comic sans next time

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Pawlowic

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Re: My music :)

Pretty good. Not something I would put on my iPod but this is still pretty awesome.

Just don't use comic sans next time

Lol I wont,i will try to find some picture

32OrtonEdge32dh

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From: DMV

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Re: My music :)

Also, if you ever need, I or someone else could record a vocal track for you.

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Pawlowic

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Re: My music :)

That would be good,if i ever get a good music program,but a good idea!