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Tachyonic

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The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

Considering everyone is making these stories I thought I'd share one.

The Ugly Barnacle

Once there was an Ugly Barnacle.
It was so ugly that everyone died.
The End.

So, what are your thoughts? Pretty good amirite?
P.S. If there's some kind of contest or something then make sure this isn't included in some sort of final result. I just did it for teh lulz.

mangoman

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

Wasn't this from Spongebob Squarepants?

You should try to make a story on your own. Like this:

Once there was a hobo that farted.
He farted so loud an earthquake started and everyone died.
The end.

Deetz

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

Are you KIDDING? This is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Make more!

Tachyonic

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

Wasn't this from Spongebob Squarepants?

No. This was from Patrick Star (Pat S. in the topic title). All I did was type it out on the computer

St Cool

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G2U8yfKM9nY[/youtube]

Jaybm

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G2U8yfKM9nY[/youtube]

grr i was gonna post this...

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G2U8yfKM9nY[/youtube]

grr i was gonna post this...

Me too... >_>

Stubby

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

That didn't help at all...

Last edited by Stubby (Mar 6 2012 6:07:47 pm)

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SilverStar

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

K, it took me a while, but I noticed the new update to "Hey you, read this." That JadelClemens posted. From now on stories take place in the creative section.

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Muffy

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

Oh Patrick you slow star fish...

soccerfreak006

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

Great story. They should make it a children's book.

krubby

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

Oh Patrick you slow star fish...

slow? He's the only starfish in existence to have more than a few nerve endings for thinking.

xRichTofenx

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

Omg I love that story from spongebob. Every night before I go to bed that is my bedtime story. XD

Lashkar

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Re: The Ugly Barnacle (A short story by GadgetGeek with help from Pat S.)

Well done GadgetGeek.

You have great grammar! Also, the whole story is just breath taking, and the twist at the end is stunning, great work. Keep it up!