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Tachyonic

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EE Forums Group Project

I got bored so I thought we could create a group project. This isn't homework, I promise.
Currently voting for Genre of story. Vote here!

For this project, we shall create the most perfect and genius story ever witnessed by mankind. But we can not do it alone, we must work together. Use the public to create and edit the story.
Each person who contributes will be colour coded, so for example, Bob is colour coded Green so everything he writes will be coloured green aswell. So since I, Bob, have typed this, this sentence will be green!.

This post will be the official post of where we put the story. You just share your ideas

This story could involve a Villain!

/edits

I don't like the punctuation in this sentence;

I wear bow ties now, bow ties are cool!

, could we change the ',' to a '-' so it could look like this;

I wear bow ties now - bow ties are cool!

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/additions

...And then there were us. Nasty people in a horrid life.

in the comments section below. Anything offtopic shall be reported.

Feel free to ask any questions.

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GadgetGeek
Zoey2070
deetz
JadElClemens
dancingfish
patience is key
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So, we need (a) genre(s), a plot and (a) character(s). Ideas will be put here and colour coded.

Genres; Vote here!

Plot; Alienation. The story starts on a boat. During the story, there is a birth. A character hits something in anger, but the action goes terribly wrong. A character is calm throughout most of the story.
The child born is destined to be the king of all beings, but only once he has proven himself by inadvertently killing his parents and the big eye bouncing on the boat, who turns out to be the worst villain in the land.
I think it should be set in ancient Egypt, with the boat scene taking place on the Nile.
20 years later, our delusional chemist dude found himself inside a locked room. A huge, square room. He had forgtten everything. There was a massive door, a ripped straight jacket on a blood covered hanger and a creased piece of paper lying on the floor. Other than that, nothing, other than blood spalaters around the room. Confused, he got to his feet and tried to un-crease(?) the paper as much as possible. He couldn't make out much, due to creases and blood:

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D--r Ry-n

How -re you t-e-e days? --s a st-u-gle ---e on t-e f-rm. Mo-t--r t-ld me th-t y-u'-e --en t- s-e -h- K-ng, at l-st. --at w-s he lik-e? -a- he n-ce? Na-ty? -as -e s---t? t-ll? W-s he -r---y? H-w-v-r, t--re i- - cau-e I --sh t- di-c-ss w--h yo-, in th- n--r f-tu--. I-s ab--t o-r c--sio-. T-e che-ist --e. H- g--e m- a v--it t-e ---er --y, b-- -e --- -ot w--l. -- -e--ed -o h--e --n- h--fc--z-. -e ---d hi- crea--on ---ac-ed h-m. B-- -ot ---- ---e. ---o b-g si- Je--y h-s --en --m-ng a--un- a-ot l-tel-, --d h-s be-- a---ng ra---r s-s--c-o-s, - t-i--...

The chemist dude notices that it gets more unreadable towards the end, and that the places were totally unreadable. However, he did recognise the handwriting, but couldn't make it out. Not only that, but what seemed to be a letter had been ripped into two.

Suddenly, there was a banging on the door. A loud banging that echoed around the room.

Characters; Delusional Chemist
Big bouncing eye on a boat
Mutated Experimental Failures

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Last edited by Tachyonic (Jun 21 2012 12:16:46 pm)

Muffin

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

So once upon a time there was a geek. A gadget geek. He was bored, so he started a story. People started joining in, such as:

Last edited by Muffin (Jun 7 2012 3:52:59 pm)

Watashii

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

It should be a love story between an average high-school girl and a vampire.

EDIT:
Ooh, and also a werewolf. Werewolves are cool.

Last edited by Watashii (Jun 7 2012 5:28:18 pm)

Oturan

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I just have this to say.

Too many cooks spoil the broth.

Tachyonic

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

It should be a love story between an average high-school girl and a vampire.

EDIT:
Ooh, and also a werewolf. Werewolves are cool.

I think it'd also be a great idea if the vampire sparkles.
And at one point, the girl is in hospital for some reason and the sparkly vampire sits beside her stalking her while she sleeps. That would be so romantic

Different55

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I think the vampire should die with a stake in his heart and the girl moves on and dates a cheesecake monster.

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Tachyonic

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I think the vampire should die with a stake in his heart and the girl moves on and dates a cheesecake monster.

INGENIOUS!
How did I not think of that?

xputnameherex

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

Maybe the Vampire glitters too hard.

Tachyonic

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

But on a serious note, what should the plot and genre be?

Zoey2070

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I think the genre should be mystery/suspense/thriller (no, this has nothing to do with my personal novel). Now, for some generated things from seventhsanctum.

The theme of this story: dark caper. The main character: delusional chemist. The major event of the story: alienation.

The story starts on a boat. During the story, there is a birth. A character hits something in anger, but the action goes terribly wrong. A character is calm throughout most of the story.
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Koto

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

It should be a love story between an average high-school girl and a vampire.

EDIT:
Ooh, and also a werewolf. Werewolves are cool.

I think you should be banned....

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Tachyonic

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I've decided to make the "Genre/Theme" a poll (I will do the same with Plot as soon as we gain atleast 7 or 8 ideas) so by next Saturday, the Genre/Theme with the most points will be our Genre/Theme for the whole book.

Vote here!

P.S. Congratulations Zoey2070, you have just assassinated Bob and took his place!

Last edited by Tachyonic (Jun 8 2012 7:22:44 pm)

JadElClemens

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I'll join in when this actually gets started.

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imtn

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I voted for every single one, just to make you happy.

ani

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I still think the vampire-highschool girl romantic thing is superlative compared to the current one.

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I voted supernatural sci-fi and fantasy but it doesn't seem like the plot I like so I guess I'm too late to make any influence...

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ILoveBacon

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

Wheres the "Hero" theme?
Heres my ideas. You may want to read some stuff backwards.

It should be about a guy, named "Knil", whos the hero chosen by the gods. He wears a green tunic and has to find the "retsam sword". That sword is the only thing that can kill this evil dude named either "Itaav" or "Ganondorf" or something else like that. He kills this dude and sets princess "Aslez" free. He travels too places like "Noraf woods" and "Nidle volcano". He also has either a horse, a bird or another animal to travel on named "Anope".
Ohh and theres this "Eldeeb" guy who try to sell him junk.

Or about a girl. Her name is "Aral Tforc" who goes searching in ancient tombs for important artfacts. But there are traps stopping here.

How about one of a guy name "Hsa" who is somthing known has a "Nomekop trainer". He, like other people catch these Nomekops (in Nomeballs) and trains them be strong. People battle their Nomekops, for lets of differnt reasons. He treats his nicely, unlike some, who treat their badly. Hsa wants to be the best of all Nomekop trainers so goes round getting thigs called "egdabs". Once he gets enough he cane go up agaisnt the "Etile 4" and finnaly the champion. When he beats the champion, the hes the new champion. But not only does he want to be the best, he wants to catch all the Nomekops. Even the "Yradnegel" Nomekops, witch are very rare. He will do it along side his Nomekop companion, "Uhcakip" and his friends "Kcorb" and either "Ytsim", "Yam" or "Nwad".

Deetz

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I shall contribute to this!!!!

And my color will be purple.

Just kidding. Yellow.

Tachyonic

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

To become a colour, you have to contribute in some way, such as sharing ideas.

Deetz

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I voted

And for charecter, how about a big eye that bounces around the boat?

JadElClemens

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

The child born is destined to be the king of all beings, but only once he has proven himself by inadvertently killing his parents and the big eye bouncing on the boat, who turns out to be the worst villain in the land.
I wanna be summa dat lawngreen, yo.

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dancingfish

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

Your poll doesn't work mate. I think it should be set in ancient Egypt, with the boat scene taking place on the Nile.

I'll go for blue please

Tachyonic

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

I'm sure it is just you since everyone else has been voting fine.

Is it because you have already voted?

Zakleo

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Re: EE Forums Group Project

Nah, 'aint bothering. Too boring.

Cyral

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Nah, 'aint bothering. Too boring.

Then why even post?

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