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#1 Before February 2015

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Who is the best describer?

Hello,

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I was bored so i came up with this topic!

Here is a picture and try to describe it the best that u can! //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/tongue

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here is an example:

The old dilapidated cabin in the spooky old woods would give a shiver down anyones spine, The thick air with the sinister sense and the mysterious eerie sound bellowing inside.Huge trees covered the house witch gave a sense of uneasement. I thought to myself "what lay behind the half broken door?"

U can use the Internet for resources.

Ur description does not have to be hugely long but try to add an effect in there!

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#2 Before February 2015

Zoey2070
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Re: Who is the best describer?

Challenge accepted.

But first, this requires some music because I can't write without music. So I go to the longest music I know off-hand. And it's from Homestuck.

Here we go.

Alas, people decide this is the perfect time to destract me. Boo.

Anyway, it took me a total of ten minutes to write this, in which time I realised I drank all my pepsi and am now slightly disappointed.
I was sort of refraining from writing it in second person or otherwise writing someone as being there, I guess.

  In the middle of the woods, there lies a cabin. The outside gives the appearance that it's been abandoned for quite some time, with its walls in disarray. They're made out of what appears to be tree bark that matches the surrounding trees quite well. Some of the siding is discolored in a few places, especially near the windows, which happen to be covered in a thick layer of dust, with plastic covering one of the side windows.

  The ground is hard to see, covered in a coat of ashy, dark leaves. The trees are tall and skinny and are a light grey. It gives sort of a spooky atmosphere, and also gives the feeling as though it's been lost in time for decades.

  The roof of the cabin is a faint green color and seems to be in somewhat decent condition, despite bits of bark covering it.

  On the porch are two grey chairs that have been left out in the elements. A peer inside the door shows nothing, for it is incredibly dark. It's doubtful anyone lives here. A slight shiver would course up anyone's spine in this area once it gets dark, because there would be no way to tell what was lurking in the night. The sheer amount of trees block almost all the light that would come from the moon. The wind blows through the area, stirring up leaves and the ones in the trees. It just makes the place seem more isolated and cold to any onlookers.
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Well, I gotta say, thanks for this, because I haven't written anything in several days.


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#3 Before February 2015

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Re: Who is the best describer?

Nice Description of the cabin!   //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/big_smile

#4 Before February 2015

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Re: Who is the best describer?

Let's see....

The presentation of the house is a desolate, lonely, and spooky cabin, sort of like *cough*Cabin in the Woods *cough*.

The house's porch has grown mildew, and is likely dangerous. There is a bench, but that's likely a death trap of bugs.

The far window on the right is covered, meaning the original window shattered, likely due to tree debris or vandals, and you can likely enter the window into the house.

The trees surrounding the house means the house is probably inside a forest, and the
leaves on the ground means there wasn't/hasn't yard cleaning done in a while.

The legs standing up the house are unsafe, as if those were damaged, the house would come down.

The roof is in poor condition, the leaves and debris on top of it add a dead feel to the house.

And the sky/background is creepily dreary, either due to the camera in which it was taken with, or just the original sky itself.
...And I'm done.

#5 Before February 2015

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Re: Who is the best describer?

Nice description //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/big_smile

#6 Before February 2015

Fdoou
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Re: Who is the best describer?

my house

#7 Before February 2015

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Re: Who is the best describer?

It sits in the middle of Chucklehuck woods. Screeching monkey birds shoot past overhead, squealing tunes of sorrow. The cabin is desolate, deserted and smells of stale grilled cheese sandwiches. A lick along the moldy wood confirms this. The floorboards are creaky, each step causing the tune Hungarian Dance in G Minor to play throughout the lonely place. A Generic Skull sits nearby, being a Generic Skull. And then there's some beer. I forget what happened after that.

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#8 Before February 2015

Tachyonic
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Re: Who is the best describer?

The house is wood.

#9 Before February 2015

Krazyman50
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Re: Who is the best describer?

This one is going to be the BEST description:
*Ahem*
Cabin

#10 Before February 2015

Shift
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Re: Who is the best describer?

Give me a minute, I had to write four pages on a picture of a blank wall last year.

Eh, I'll make a new post for it tomorrow. I've been staring at this screen for far too long already.

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#11 Before February 2015

Deetz
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Re: Who is the best describer?

I'm eagerly awaiting Shift's response. For some reason.

#12 Before February 2015

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Re: Who is the best describer?

It appears to be a shack, a dilapidated one at that, that resides in the woods.


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#13 Before February 2015

Tako
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Re: Who is the best describer?

Shift wrote:

Give me a minute, I had to write four pages on a picture of a blank wall last year.

Eh, I'll make a new post for it tomorrow. I've been staring at this screen for far too long already.

Oh yeah?! 'Wrote a paper about silence last year.

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A house, wide in breadth and weary in structure sits alone in this forest. The shingles of the walls rest chipped and melancholy, serving as reflection of the cabin it composes. While these walls still serve their purpose for structure, one must question how much longer they will.

A single metal bench positioned perpendicular to the front door on the porch suggests this could have been a home for perhaps two, but a home it is no more, for this desolate exterior must not have been seen in months.

Neighboring trees have adopted the same palette used to create this dwelling; a murky green with infections of monochromatic grays.


Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

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#14 Before February 2015

Echo!
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Re: Who is the best describer?

A house cabin thingy, behind some trees.

#15 Before February 2015

krubby
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Re: Who is the best describer?

it's funny how despite a lot of submissions, there are only four people who have written more than a single sentence.

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#16 Before February 2015

Fdoou
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Re: Who is the best describer?

qazws cg

#17 Before February 2015

Tako
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Re: Who is the best describer?

Fdoou wrote:

qazws cg

Another warning.


Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

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#18 Before February 2015

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Re: Who is the best describer?

It's a log cabin not too deep into the woods where the park rangers live at.


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#19 Before February 2015

krubby
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Re: Who is the best describer?

Fdoou wrote:

qazws cg

i think fdoou had his account hacked or stolen. or maybe he's done with this forum and just wants to be banned? sorry that this is off-topic to the thread, but i think it's relevant to what seems fairly important.

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#20 Before February 2015

Shift
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Re: Who is the best describer?

deetz wrote:

I'm eagerly awaiting Shift's response. For some reason.

Hahahaha I'll get to it eventually. I had to write a legitimate essay this weekend, though, and so I needed a cool down period.

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